A'ight you know the rulz...here they are again...
10 Linez
No Crew Votez
No D/R Votez
No Hata Votez
No Feedin'
No Bitin'
U spit firs'
Waitin' on u dawg...
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A'ight you know the rulz...here they are again...
10 Linez
No Crew Votez
No D/R Votez
No Hata Votez
No Feedin'
No Bitin'
U spit firs'
Waitin' on u dawg...
Ima leave ya fractured, twirlin in circles..so you spell your name bacwards..
Runnin you over.. Cars and tractors..leave you confused like Will n' Grace Actors..
Beatin me's as easy as countin to A,B,C..
cant count em'.. dumb net-textcee's.. he's too low in level so lyrically.. he's only a "E"..
I didn't rip you, I tore you.. you couldn't write a good rhyme if someone wrote it for you..
Therefore you...you wouldn't be good enuff for any crew.. just like the newbs before you..
quick and too tha point .. match it if you know how
Check it...
I will leave you lyrically "broken", 'cause my rhymes are emceez tickets to failure, here's your "token"//
I am serious about this shi', you jus' "jokin'", I keep shit fresh, my verbal fire I'm "stoken'"//
I'll beat yor ass so bad "lyrically", 1-4 record emceez don't take this shit "seriously"//
Don' fuck wit "Lyrical-E", the name of my platinum album hit you so fas', you get fucked up "mentally"//
I could ryhme betta than you going "backwards", like roadkill on pavement I leave ya "plastered"//
'Oh, E-Lyrical's a "bastard"', you jus' scrapin' the surface, I got this rap shi' "mastered"//
Your bitch you could not "please", you had do finger-fuck her with your boyfriend's "skis"//
U jus' a "disease", spreadin' aroun' until E-Lyrical knocks u down on yo "knees"//
U jus' lyrically "senile", I would circle twirlin' an' pick up bitches all the "meanwhile"//
You wanted "crazy?" I gave u plain 'ol "zany", jus' ta prove that Im the next "Slim Shady"//
Nice spit good luck dawg...
Uppin' fo votez(1)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Come on don' sleep on this! Uppin' fo votez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(2)
Damn son! U got skillz...can' wait ta see ya elevate...dat otha nigga needs a little mo work...tite battle.Quote:
Originally posted by E-Lyrical
Check it...
I will leave you lyrically "broken", 'cause my rhymes are emceez tickets to failure, here's your "token"//
I am serious about this shi', you jus' "jokin'", I keep shit fresh, my verbal fire I'm "stoken'"//
I'll beat yor ass so bad "lyrically", 1-4 record emceez don't take this shit "seriously"//
Don' fuck wit "Lyrical-E", the name of my platinum album hit you so fas', you get fucked up "mentally"//
I could ryhme betta than you going "backwards", like roadkill on pavement I leave ya "plastered"//
'Oh, E-Lyrical's a "bastard"', you jus' scrapin' the surface, I got this rap shi' "mastered"//
Your bitch you could not "please", you had do finger-fuck her with your boyfriend's "skis"//
U jus' a "disease", spreadin' aroun' until E-Lyrical knocks u down on yo "knees"//
U jus' lyrically "senile", I would circle twirlin' an' pick up bitches all the "meanwhile"//
You wanted "crazy?" I gave u plain 'ol "zany", jus' ta prove that Im the next "Slim Shady"//
Nice spit good luck dawg...
Vote= E-Lyrical
A'ight thz dawg...but peeps r still fuckin' SLEEPIN' ON THIS!!! Come on dawgs, don' let me down!!! Uppin' fo votez(3)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Fuckin' sleepaz.......................................COME ON DAWGZ! don' leave me hangin' plz............................................... ..........................
umm ok...
phillie blunt had better punches even tho he rymed with the same word 2 or 3 times....at the end...
he actually had wordplay and meta's.....
and thats what a text battle is...
e-lyrical, your verse was longer, and flowed a lil betta but your punches seemed weak to me....
and that "shit" wit "the" quotation" marks "is" un-"nessecary"
cuz "its" hard and confusing "to" "read"...
it doesnt make your flow any more special then what it says....unless your a newbie voter looking at those quotations thinkin
that its somthing special...lol...
my honest vote...
vote-phillie blunt...
that will and grace line did it....lol
peep
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=73307
A'ight, wateva thx fo your honest vote. UPPIN^^^^^^(4)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
ure shit was okay... for a newb.. i'll give you props.. but real vets know that tha flow doesn't win it for you. and tha stretch bar shit was wack.. good battle tho dukes
uppin this one too............................................... ...
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