Violent Akrobatikz Ft. Verbatize and Kasino One (drop)

Aight, this is my first audio drop on RB.Com...this track features my brother Verbatize aka Lord Joel...drop some feedback and let me know what you think, thanks for scope'n fam


Lo Fi - Violent Akrobatikz

Hi Fi - Violent Akrobatikz

its a dope track keep doin ya stuff

blaze a 50 beat.aha nice..1st mc was okay, voice kinda annoying after abit..nice flow tho..2nd guy soundin crazy like a necro..it was alright.

VERSE WAS STR8 LYRICS N FLOW WAS IIGHT U KEPT A STEADY FLOW. I REALLY LIKE BEAT BUT LYRICS WHAT COUND. PERFORMANCE WAS GOOD. ALL IN ALL GOOD SHYT

both emcees weren't on point with there flow.....your lyrics kept going off beat and you had too many words to fit in one bar....you gotta break it down more....couldve been a better track if changes were made....overal it was iight....




I'm Ghost...

aight, thanks for the feedback fams

uppin

Beat Is Dope....Your Flow Is A Bit Off And Your Both Pretty Much Off Beat Man...Not Hating Or Nothing...Just Giving Helpful Criticism...Just Freestyle On The Beat First And Write To That Scheme...You Probs Already Do This..But If You Don't Then Do It...Just Keep At It And Elevate Dunny...You Got Good Emotion and All Just Gotta Perfect The Timing And Flow...Pz...

That shit was straight, I do agree with some of the peeps, some of the bars were too much and made you lose the beat. I'm diggin y'all niggaz tho, fa sho. I think you need a unique stlye though, cause you pretty much readin or just gettin out. Memorize that shit, and play with it...

Oh yeah, I was really diggin the Spanglish one, I love that shit, asta noche, fe Pow floco, or whateva keep it up lol.

Pretty nice yo i liked it..lyrics..flow..delivery..were all good on all emcee's..

word thanks for all the positive responses fam, much luv

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Originally posted by Exodus001
Pretty nice yo i liked it..lyrics..flow..delivery..were all good on all emcee's..

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whatta bullshit response, easily a freepost.. herb.


but yeah i told verbatize how i felt about this on aim.

some of the bars are jammed with to many words.. remember, sacrifice lyrics for flow when thats what it comes down too.. but yall having two many words in ya bars didnt kill the track, lyrics were still good and both had a lethal delivery,lol...

paaaaaaaaayyyyyyccccceeeee.

lol thanks for a true response, i noticed the free posts, but can't do much about it, thanks again

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