10 lines
max
you go first
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10 lines
max
you go first
u a fan of football so this interception gonna get cha get to know me better so heres my picture put it in yo locker post it up wit a sticker someone ask who.. say dis the gurl who bit ya/im tryna keep my cool but u steadly bein rude is u a dude /or bitch a trick or a snitch do u suck dick or do u lick the clit/ u prolly do all u goin to far just ta lick sum balls u can have it all/ all u gotta do is ask but fo ur partners sake cover yo face wit a mask/ imma let u know what i am is a thug/ the gun ill shoot u wit wont hold no prints cause what i wore was glove on my outfit no spot of blood / i left no evidence but only a quote that read twix was in da mix across yo throat
ok twix here i go ................................................
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LOOK LOOK
I COULD BE IN THE BATH ROOM TAKIN AH SHIT//
YOUR LYRICS ANT EVEN GOOD ENOUGH TA WIP MA ASS WITH//
YA SISTER LOOKS GOOD SO I HAD TO FUCKIN RAPE HER//
THE ONLY WAY YOUR SHITS HOT BY PUTTIN TABSCO ON THE PAPER//
IN AH COUPLE OF YEARS YOU MIGHT BE ALRIGHT//
BUT NOW YOUR SHIT IS GARBAGE AND STINKIN UP THE WEB SITE//
IF YOU COME TA MY CITY YOU WILL BE LABELED AS AH TOURIST//
YOU WOULD SOUND BETTER SINGIN BACK UP FOR MA CHOURS//
YOUNGIN TRIPPIN ON AH SHOT GLASS YOU SIPPIN//
JUST FA YOU THIS IS CALLED AH CUSTOM MADE ASS WHIPPIN//
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ok im going to break this battle down
1. I wasnt impressed with either verses.
they bot just sound like the same crap that every other herb throws up here but there has to be a winner so here we go
Twixisdabaddest1 : i wasnt feeling the whole football player locker thing i mean come on! you only have 10 lines you cant waist them with a situational filler.
"im tryna keep my cool but u steadly bein rude is u a dude /or bitch a trick or a snitch do u suck dick or do u lick the clit/"
i don't know what you were thinking with that but trust me, its been done to death. call a guy a fag but be original about it.
I wasnt feeling your style, word play or thug way of rap.
Traydiggz19: Nothing special but at least you had soem structure. Really basic flow but if you were going agaisnt this guy live judges would have seen you as more assertive and more direct. Your punches make gabby jay from mike tysons punch out look like herculeus. But you won this battle just because the other guy just doesnt have the minimal expierance to match you
vote: Traydiggz19
now vote on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...424#post658424
no offense or hate guys
just laying it down.
id expect you to do the same for me
peace