you know tha rules......dont take too long or im spittin in tha mornin
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you know tha rules......dont take too long or im spittin in tha mornin
ok dawg hopfully you written......im gona startmy shit now too............................................... ..............
me too i just saw this man soo simmer down..u drop first..tho ill satrt writien no fedon////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
HA...your rymes must be a sin/
lookin at your record makes me wonder how much dick you sucked to win/
Even tho ima rookie i spit like a fuckin proffesional/
i flow like your fuckin intestinal/
take my knife and leave you with one testical/
my rymes are Burnin hot, 100 degrees/
if you wonna live you better get beggin on your knees/
get pleadin sayin "Please Nigga Please"/
your shit is weak even though its prewritten/
bitch why the fuck you even spitten/
even the rymes you got must be fuckin bitten/
after this shit you better pack it up and anounce that you quiten/
So you say you young Mik/
you practicin usin the mic with your dad dick/
fuckin bisexual you suck and you lick/
but the only chicks you get are fuckin mutated/
loose bitches cuz they over masterbated/
you be scared in your room holdin a fuckin cross/
you battle me....how you like your first loss/
yo its a little long but what the fuck....................dunnmatta................. .....u wanna spit a few extra go ahead peace
aite dawg..that ^was garbage...
Mc killa u shud shut ya mouth u aint got any wins in da first place//
uzin a bunch of fillaz u bouta get merked out wit a L in ya face//
my metaphors metmorph an kick da shit outa u till u lyin on ya bak//
ya wak rhymes get pikd like a booger an thrown away,its a fact//
u lik saks for scrill,rappinn wishin u was iLL but instead got nervous//
when u step on da stage an get killed by showin ya herbness//
my spits will leave ya sik an slapped bitch,didnt no wut was comin ya way//
i no u claimin ya a bit wakniss,when i dropped u startin runninaway//
ill spit so much web u cud call me half araknid,but im usual packin heat//
rippin dis bitch when i be rappin to a beat,this merk is close to his defeat//
learnin how newbs get treat u aiint a pro at shit u must be crazy//
who is this fool tryna sep to me bustin out clips dat dont phaze me//
its amazig how wak dis cat is claimin hes great bus hes da oppisite//
dis rap game aint for u, when u hear da word rap u shud say u stoppin it//
u aint to early for ya time but needa learnya rhymes aint neva gettin heard/
dis rap shits cold u spits are too played an old...................
:" an His jaw Drops down"who is this cat ...?
uppin///////////////////////////////////that was a 2 minute drop//////////////////////////an ill still merk u ...but aite shit i gues.s...uppinnnnn
Killa ya shit as pretty good but ya lines were easly playd
my vote goes to Young Mik
not cuz he in my crew
but cuz his shit made a lil more sense
and had harder punches
upppin.//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////to mekr dis newbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
my metaphors metmorph an kick da shit outa u till u lyin on ya bak//
I liked that line...very creative.........
my vote goes to YOUNG MIK, more creative....mc killah, not bad for a newb.........
VOTE=YOUNG MIK
check out my battle and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66953
My vote goes to Young MIk. His shit was real tight. The other MC did pretty good for a newbie, but I gotta agree wit Merking King bout it bein a lil played out. YOung Mik came wit harder punches, and had better shit overall. So vote goes to YOung Mik.
vote=Young Mik
Can everyone pleez hit this battle up and make a fair vote, it's been gettin slept on madly (seriously):
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1
vote-young mik...
better everything basically
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Young mik took it wit betta punches and betta flow.............................................. ...............................................