dw vs goosen

10 lines max
no crew/d ridin/hatin votes
no feedin

i'll go first!

aight checking in, good luck
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yo can ya'll hit these battles up.. they gettin slept on and you
know I'll hit ure shit up.. just post a link... - 0 n e

Thug Whyte vs. Pot1ent
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=65377

Thug Whyte vs. Killa Kobra
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=64617

alrite listen up goosen,

this mans like a "how did the chicken cross the road joke", pathetic/ n i ain't sympathetic cos this guys tryin 2 make the rap culture ethic/ shud av known u were a diabetic after my "sweet" rhymes/ too sweet makin u just another page between my record-win-file-binds//

1,2,3 losses heres 4, my shit u adore, beg 4 more, but wen i see your rhymes comin, man i shut the door/ this a halacaust n u the jew/ do wot ya gotta do/ cos no matter how hard u try u only "ill" wiv the flu/ this so hot u meltin like a candle stick, u a diabetic bitch after a "candy"stick/ battlin me? u loose like "i got the magic stick"//

goosen, loosen cos u ain't tight, u see my verse u attempt 2 "bite" (cos my lines sweet)/ lines bein shuved so far up ya ass u gotta love it, my punches hit leavin u in an hesterical fit/ laughin cos u were the catalyst which made my fire lit/ leave u now wolloing in defeat/ take a seat cos its time 2 personally meet the natural born heat-of-an-elite//


soz bout the wait stuff 2 do, there it is, now u!

I'm too smooth for you, like cadbury, too much will make-you-barf//
I've seen your previous battles, your a real 'ass-and-a-half'// (Cadburys slogan is "glass and a half")
I'm in my 'element' against you, i'm on 'fire', burning bright//
You've got your expectations, but im setting them 'e-lite'// (a-light)
You remind me of a showbag, your completely full of shit//
the only time you 'get a pop' is when you squeeze a zit// lol
You wrote too much, like a coloring-in book, you 'went out of the lines'//
The only time you get 'a-head', is during 'sixty-nines'//
The closest reality you have, is when your watching COPS//
You couldnt get a 'movie set', to give your rhyming 'props'//

aight sorry about the wait, got held up, good luck

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as promised...

To break it down simply.. Goosen i seen sum way better
shit from you dawg.. you came way to weak on this one..
shouldn't have let this one slide.. your wordplay just wasn't
workin for me either dawg... no beef or hate, i just think
you could have came way harder

Vote - dw

alrite uppin, so i did 11 lines soz man, but not that big a deal!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i say DW got this one, his punches were better, and also he had better flows,
for goosen, ass-and-a-half ryhmes with barf? lool

good battle though .

dw.. hit my battles up dawg..

Thug Whyte vs. Pot1ent
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=65377

Thug Whyte vs. Killa Kobra
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=64617

Thug Whyte vs. CrazyE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=65378

dam you guys how hard is this to vote, I respect both of ya and your both good.

Im sorry Goosen I have to go with DW he was just more technical better wordplay, thats all. both good doh!!!!

Peace!!!

thanx
2-0 poll
3-0 txt

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!1

goosen got this one on creativity and wordplay, cant vote tho man. goosen got this one, just.
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dw=wordplay,punches
goosen=flow...........

vote=dw
look at ma battle n make an honest vote.......word