Taktik vs R-Rated

10-20 lines/10 bars max
no dr/c/h votes
no feedin
no 'return the favor' nonsense, freindly 'honest votes' are cool wit me
i'll drop first, R try and drop b4 12

Checkin In.................Waitng for TakTik to spit his shit.........

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Testin' a newstyle, longer lines see how it works
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Xecutives Representative Represents along side with Ghetto Disney Inc........WHISTLE WHILE YOU MERK.....coming soon to DVD and VHS

Precise taktiks unbreakable like strait jackets, tragically you like 'epileptic-Mexicans', easily seen 'shakin' in 'his~panic'//1(hispanic...spanish)
Left erratic, deliverance auto-matic, you couldn't spit your shit wit friction~added, through 'balloons', they still don't get me 'es~Static'//2
Use all 'threads' form a massive-webbed-fabric, throw in your 'lines' with the 'world~wide sect', they still don't feel you shit on the inter~net//3(webbed fabric=net...worldwide=inter)
Punches right n' left, disect your spine~n~neck, it's like 'poachers-against-humane-society' how I be 'killin~this~VET' //4 (Rated R.I.P)
Ya knees shakin' nervous, I be feedin' on earth's surface, I'm on your 'girl' like 'gynecologist', Dr. Taktik at your 'cervix'//5(service...haha)
My word's~purpose to serve this verse~perfect, to hit~wit~shit~viscous, so 'sick' that I got the nurse~workin//6
Verbs and wordplay, inflate murder-rates, de-face you wit words like 'cerebral adhesives' cuz they 'stick to ya brain' and decay//7
You might as well 'cuff~my~ventricles' to put me in 'cardiac~arrest', cuz at your rate... you battlin me like you 'missed~dracula', a 'mis~stake'//8(stake to kill dracula)
You'd need to 'ignite~carosine~vomit' just to 'spit~yaself~a~flame' and need to buy Hip Hop Edition Scrabble just to 'give~yourself~a~name'//9
Breakin' my 'paintings' the only way you bend my 'frame', you'd prob go as far as cuttin yaself in '16 bits' and claim ya 'in~the~game'//10(16 bit video game...Sega?)
You 'angered' my verbs and lines, so they swingin punches and red-faced, that's what I call mad rhymes//11
Your victory be denied, with these lines you'd need to put '___________' many times to get me closer to 'flatlines'//12(heart rate machine)
Call me the 'merk~doner', you lost bitch own~up, your rhymes so 'shit' I didn't really think that 'HTML' code could also submit such a bad 'aroma'//13(smell like shit!)
Their ain't nuff 'warlords' you could call'up, you could put a 'trip~rope' by a 'pool~of~vegitables' still not goin 'slip~into~a~coma'//14(vegitable=coma patient)
Rated R restricted? Better edit your pre-writ script bitch, tell the war~lords' to get their gunz ready, cuz Executives goin leave ya dead before you enlisted//15
Merk alert as I press the 'submit' switch, now ya diss flips, I'm tired of my punches hittin pussies, it's sorta like I'm fistin'//16(that's just not right...)

Here you are Mr.R-Rated, these prostetics should fit perfect...lost again eh? Next time you and your Warlord pals better look out for these Exec's, they mean business!!!

These seem long but check out your shit on this battle, these lines are the same length......thats why i made mine longer i thought that's how you did your shit so i tried to match ya structure

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=2

nice verse Taktik
lets see what R-Rated got
i'll drop an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=64160

let's go already fuck......i see you in the forum so drop, you had like few hours............................................. ....

Aight...Yo..Yo..

WARM UP:
Ya fagget name is TakTik, the tactics you got taking it up da butt, the way I just jizzed on ya face, you looking like a commercial for Got Nut? /
I know your used to swallowing, thats why it must be so complicated for you to spit, my punches knockin teeth down ya throat, showing up in your poop when you shit /
TakTiks rainbow lines so candy coated he had skittles asking him what his secret was, I'll flip your bars upsidedown and have the boo's raining down on you cuz /
My battles similar to your sex life because its always one-handed, disect and bisect this nigga till BET"s forced to put him on Acessed Granted /
This bitch shoulda came harder cause he just got lyrically stomped on, you might of had a chance if you wrote you flow on a pad instead of tampon /

HERE IS WHERE I MERK HIM:
This battle is like faulty firecrackers, you need to re-fuse, your verses get the responses of haunted houses cause they’re full of boo's /
I leave you stressing, expressing your feminine confession's when I drop my lyrical blessings within seconds /
I’m hitting all sections, with perfections on my word selections that are so great they even give female's erections /
I admire your admiration, rapping with concentration, but you don’t drop no good shit like your stuck in constipation /
Cracking the combination, your calling through desperation, cause I cant be beat, like a man with no arms infactuated with materbation /
Your giving miss directions when I drop my conceptions, your full of imperfections like student drivers in crowded intersections /
I have you fearing my lyrical weapons, this faggot will learn his lesson, cause he don’t fit in like blacks at KKK conventions /
I got punches like De La Hoya' for ya,dont make me fuckin rip you..
you might be goin down swingin but ya goin down and thats tha issue /
You get barried after being carried in carts of limbs, your frustration drives you to be Ali and start shaking like parkinsons /
Who do ya know that could impose as it goes nicely with flows cause TakTiks style is played out like reality t.v. shows /
I trample rappers who’s skills aren’t ample, in this battle I just gave a sample, that’s how I do and I’m about to destroy your whole crew.. too bad you had to be the example /

~R~

Sorry...I thought I had enough lines the first time but I didn't....so I edited and added more. I hope that is alright.

Was that it??? Was that your drop or r droppin now??????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????

Damn if that was his drop
my vote goes to Taktik
cuz taktik actually did shit
so i'll vote once i find out if that was really his verse

Ya heard

Well was that it or what??? He edited it for some reason.....i dunno how he edited it but it says that he did, so i dunno, if that isn't your verse then please SPIT IT NOW!!!!!!

Aight yo the first time I dropped I thought I had enough lines...but when it showed up on the screen I didn't....so i added more line...I hope thats alright.

Well lets get the votes coming.

Nice Drop TakTik (No Beef)

Damn... took R-Rated a fuckin' long ass time to spit, but both had their good points and their weak points but i can't sayin n e thing cuz i can't vote. so peAce...

Good battle
took Rated along time but yea
i thought taktik took this one tho
i liked his punchlines
no hate rated

vote- Taktik
someone plz hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=64160
i'm 1 vote away, AC Satch is 4 votes away

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NICE BATTLE......................NOTHING IMPRESSIVEE

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Originally posted by B.A.D. R.A.P.
Damn... took R-Rated a fuckin' long ass time to spit, but both had their good points and their weak points but i can't sayin n e thing cuz i can't vote. so peAce...

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^^^^Emhhh Ok...but dont try to sway...votes now....ya'll in the same crew respect this damn battle.......

i think taktik took this because his verse had more effort and more punches.........................