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*******30 MINUTES FROM NOW BROOK MUST DROP********...............it's only fair
i'll srop my shit down below
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no dr/c/h votes
*******30 MINUTES FROM NOW BROOK MUST DROP********...............it's only fair
i'll srop my shit down below
NEW STYLE ON THIS ONE.....ALMOST PURELY FLOW....TOOK OFF SUM USUAL QUATATIONS
Xecutives Representative Presents.......WARNING: DON'T TAP ON DA GLASS
Brooklyn knocked out~sleepin', do dance residals on your spinal~region till I see your vitals~leakin' //
Soul left 'broken to pieces' bleedin', hurt deep like a PMS stricken Simon from American Idol's speakin'//
Contridiction~in~eyes before you 'submit reply', surprised, knocked counter~'clock'-wise rhythm algorithms while spittin can 'hault~time'/(time is stopped)
I'll terrorize ya inner-mind, rip out your eyes, place'em on a '5' the only way your 'sights~really~on~the~prize'//
I'm hell's angel, 'red~winged' like 'Brett~Hull', punches hit~guts, like 'editor's last cut' , this day's your 'final'/
Erased title from disciples, you couldn't 'break~my~record' if you took a 'hammer~to~my~vinyl'//(Not my Barry Whites!!!..haha)
Like Bruce Willis on viagra, I'm even 'harder'~to~kill, makin' da green like clorophyll, blown ya shit to particles//
Bitch you'd need to put 'In Those Jeans' as your title to be the 'genuwine~article'//
I start~to~spill, realize you couldn't feel 'hip~hop' if ya 'pelvic~bone' popped~up in ya' gut//
I'll leave'ya ass like a 'skitzo~Beyonce' on her 'period', cuz my rhymes leave'you 'crazy~in~blood'//
Ladies and gentlemen....I give you....the LYRICAL BEAST!!!
My spits~certain to splurge the earth~surface, only one purpose to 'pop' you faggots like a virgin's~first~cherry~burstin'//
Lyrical~merkin cause ya minds~lurkin, eyes stop workin' as ya find no~time, shake~nervous, blanket over ya eyes like a stage~curtain//
My rage~darkens, I feel no sympathy, 'listen~to~ya~conscience' as I say 'throw~out~ya~rhymes' via telepathy//
Like a 'treadmill~race', ya'll never see 'the~end~of~me', everyone knows your using the pre-writ rhymes from your HOD~pink~slip~on~me//(hands of god...it's obvious...)
I'm a 'major~league' playa, no doubt I 'made~ya~league~playa', you can't ever taste 'hip-hop', 'Double~Bubble' don't make a 'street~flava'"//(I do....)
Now you've done woke him up..........
::rushed my verse::
I'm only being real when I say, you-wack-as-fuck, Taktik suck, like retired leprachauns, you-out-of-luck/
ya shits as sharp as a dull 'razor', I'm about to burn ya like 'aftershave', 'parading' all over ya verse like it's Christmas 'Holiday'/
I shit syllables and piss punches all over ya 'keyboard', so go back to exploiting ya self on cam, you 'e-whore'/
this kid writes like 'boars', tha thing is this fool has been 'castrated', I've 'raped' tha alphabet, while you and verbs are still 'masturbatin'/
I've left ya deprived of skill, like faggots without wigs, like 'Rigs & Butta', your no 'Lethal Weapon'..I know you had enough of this kid/
::enough of the rushed kiddy junk::
You better find shelter-and-fast since I’m hellish with-raps, cats will know you fucked with the illest when you develop-the-rash/
talk about ahead-of-the-class, Brooklyn’s a felon-with-class, always down to ‘smoke fruit’ like I'm buying melons-and-hash/
fuck irrelevant-crap, I let my intellegince-nap while I get 'paid to come off the top' like I was selling-my-hats/
I’m aiming as marksman, to maim this flaming-accomplice, ‘your flirting with death’ and trying to make a date-with-your-coffin/
you tested and lost-quick, but the lesson was honest, making ‘short work’ of taktik inprimal acts like janitor’s dressed-up-as-hobbits/
arrested your conscious, even satan and hell knows that my turf isn't worth-steppin-on, got Taktik 'down on his luck' eating pussy-from-leprachauns/
really who can compete with a fucking demon-in-gear, millions-screaming-in-fear like I was godzilla this-year/
eventful and brash enough to compell-hellians-to-rap, me losing is as likely as Micheal Jackson getting-melanin-back/
edited for rushed spelling
making ‘short work’ of primal like janitor’s dressed-up-as-hobbits/
WHO THE FUCK IS PRIMAL??? THIS SHIT SOUNDS BITTEN OR RECYCLED DAWG......
VOTE BK........ FOR DOIN EVERYTHIN THAT TAKTIK DID.... BUT TWICE AS GOOD
MAYBE IF TAKTIK WENT 2ND IT WOULD HAVE BEEN DIFFERENT IONO
VOTE - BROOKLYN
Agreed wit Soldier......... - oneQuote:
VOTE BK........ FOR DOIN EVERYTHIN THAT TAKTIK DID.... BUT TWICE AS GOOD
MAYBE IF TAKTIK WENT 2ND IT WOULD HAVE BEEN DIFFERENT IONO
VOTE - BROOKLYN
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Originally posted by Taktik
making ‘short work’ of primal like janitor’s dressed-up-as-hobbits/
WHO THE FUCK IS PRIMAL??? THIS SHIT SOUNDS BITTEN OR RECYCLED DAWG......
AS I SAID MY VERSE WAS RUSHED
I MEANT TO INSERT UNPRIMAL TAKTILS WHICH MEANS UNORIGIONAL..AKA PLAYED TAKTIKS
WELL DONT WANNA SEEM A FOOL SO ITS EXPLAINED, NO NEED TO EDIT
TRY NOT TO BE A VOTE SHIFTER
i thot brooks metas were funny. it flowed. it was edged better. good match both vote=brooks^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
my vote goes to Brooklyn...nice ass verse he had mad punches and some nice wordplay..iight vocab and metas too....hot 4sho...Taktik ya verse was hot too...but brooklyn came harder..good job to the both of ya
hit up my crew battle(WL vs BRE) against A2Z
i think this one goes to brook for funny shit, it was all clever and mostly original. Taktik had his shit in order too and after i read his verse, i thought he had to be a shoe-in. Brook had the illest rushed verse i have ever seen lol
vote=BROOK