Da Joka~ vs Xceltiz

aight 10 lines max

no crew/ hatein shit

I'm spittin first check in

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Yo Xceltiz what I kid the only thing you gona be excelin in is getin a quicker trip to rappers hell kid//

Besides a joka I'm also good at knife throwin, I hit you in the heart and my rhymes make your blood start flowin//

Your covered in crimson, I'm a bullet engine and your just a train, Your getting your ass kicked by a joka in this game//

I'm kickin your ass like a shadow, you aint to the skills to handle my battle'//

Your body is broken, and so is your brain, I'm not in this game for mutual game I'm here to kill the niggaz like you that spit lame//

Out of the 52 cards you drew from the deck, I'm only joka you drew who shot you in the back//

uppin I hope you spittin dawg
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i see u think ur a big fat joka...so-il-lay-this-down as serious as playing poka//1
dont get ur bicth here cos il just chock ha....she-trys-dancing-with-me as if was living a loka//2

its-as-i've-been-cloned cos u see me everywhere.... on the microphone//3
making beats....from zone 2 zone on the piano to the xylaphone//4

il break your bones,spit at u and chuck stones, you'll be crying like a baby saying leave me alone//5
i dont care if ur not ready.. u cant prospone, cos il sniff u out stronger than womens colone//6

il break your door, just make u look like a fool, then il deliver the c4//7
for shore my lyrics are hotter than earths crust or core//8

finsh you off with my supreme text,shooting lyrics like a beam u dont know wats next//9
il get u vexed and just jack ur avirex...cos i dint give a shit if u sign fancy cheques//10

Aight this was good that was good
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i no i cant vote but if i cud i wud really ave to go with Xceltiz
he had better word play and use of vocab aswell as structure.
punches werent really there but still better from Xceltiz.
not bad for a newbie battle...

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Animal

Yea he was a newb so I didn't wanna hit him to hard. It was better then I thought it would be.
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this was a good battle

but ill have to vote xceltz
on this battle

better word play,funny,u knocked this other kid out of this battle u took it all the way

nice battle, I'm a newb myself. Joka my man, you let him get in on you....
Xceltiz great job, way to take advantage of the situation......