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Rules:
I spit first
no dickrydin ...ect...votes
Make it Quik too...
I'll spit first....
12Lines (6Barz) Min and Max
Good Luck
young hercules, dawg quit rappin and go back-to-pegasis//
fuck rappin i'mma go "wwe" on this nigga and suplex-this-kid//
fuck if u hercules then call me zeus, ur my-bastard-child//
nah i take that back, this bitch ain't got ne relation to me, he-can't-freestyle//
u say ur from neverland so did u get fucked by michael-jackson//
but u say ur from tha-island-man, is that ur coverup from all-of-ur-sexual-action//
only money u ever see is in yo lame-ass-sign-on//
could have ne name u want but lets see u chose a greek heroes dick to-be-rydin-on//
this niggaz dumb as fuck, thinkin he on drugs lookin through-a-colidascope//
and to tha viewers, look at his piece of shit, click Raz at tha top thats were u-direct-yo-vote//
yo i could stop right here give u unlimit amount of barz and still demolish-ya-text//
infact i might, my words are scared around u, u bitin, u need to quit-yo-molest//
this bitch likes to procrastinate just look at his record, he always-wants-to-win but never-does//
i'm gonna aniliate like oj did to his bitch, do-u-comprehend, bitch i ain't gonna wear-no-gloves//
Yo here ya go i fixed tha brackets
*Throws Young tha Mic*
damn i wish shit coulda been longer thou........oh well get yo rap on.......
idk how hard hercules'll cum...but hopefully it wuz harder than raz's shit....i seen better outt raz....neway....uppin for votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=61876
yeah hopefuly he'll respond tonght......but neways thanx fo tha help dawg........lol be back to vote on it aight,,,,
Yo, much respect, check this battle please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=61664
dayuuuuum./.........kid don't get on do he......foreal herc u see this post dawg......characters....
Raz your lines didn't really rhyme, but I ain't seen Young Hercules yet so I ain't gonna vote.
..........!!!!!!!!!
huh what part don't rhyme? when there is a - inbetween u say it together.......foreal what part don't rhyme?
FUCK IT, HEY I HOPE A MOD, PEEPS THIS, I'M CLOSING THIS SHIT NOW......HE AIN'T GONNA RESPOND.....................
SHIT IS CLOSED......
yo man hold ya fuckin horses he'll be there he just told me to tell you that no diss ( i'm on tha phone wit him)
aight man, i just don't want no prewrittin shit, i mean common u could tell him my shit and he got time to write and rewrite his shit to me then post it....shit ain't fair dude....
pretty hot freestyle but don't put the stuff that rhymes in brackets, it looks too sloppy
I'll try and vote when the other guy drops his lyrics
Aight he comin on right now he said********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ****
Yo ***Picks up tha mic***( that shit cool)
Raz you can just Kiss my Ass
why tha hell you talkin' bout me when ya rhymes stinks like
you... fuckin trash!!//
ya avatar is hot, but ya punchlines not, I would hate to put you on tha spot, but you fuckin stink so I ma let ya rot, Man im smokin yo ass like pot//
in this Ima Evil maxwell "This womans work" is sraight fuckin dirt
and it stinks like a terd made by a fuckin herb, or a white ass nerd
you just like Malibu's most wanted, smokin paper instead of chronic, ya vocab is weak are you hook on phonics//ha ha
you can tell by tha welts I put on ya ass I got all tha gold belts
you need to go to charter wit that shit even ya rhymes need help// (that's tha kill)
Yo man I don't want to spit no mo cuz I gettin sick ( i'm 2 ill )
im w/ cameron on this one. Raz u got some nice stuff but really... the brakets just make me wanna not read it.
it hurts mah head d00d. but other than that its all good.
Wish i could vote!
Vote Raz on this one ppl.