Illeagal Clown [vs] 512

rules...
10-15 lines...
5 votes wins
no hate/dr votes
spit ya verse ASAP


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man dis is my first battle/
takes one swing 'n' you hit da gravel/
so quik, dont see shit, but smoke smoke 'n' shadow/
im on a different level/
like shaq in 6 inch stilletos/
pugillest so incredible/
knockin n***** teeth out, havin em eatin smashed vegetables/
dat last line was kinda long/
but im too strong to late phase me/
its amazin, how quickly im erasin/
all stats 'n' reps, im takin yall stacks 'n' checks/
replacin em wit stabbed 'n' cracked necks/
dont need to repeat myself, only takes one time/
to defeat you, sorry if it was mo' den da required lines/

lol that was a straight line
but yo Illeagal clown lil peice of advice Dont battle vets when you a newbe
Specially 512 that Gangsta got mad dawg skill

holla at ya whitenigga

white nigga good lookin wit da positive criticism but ay how else niggas gon respect you if you dont go for da best of da best n pull yo weight feel me

i aint really goin to go all out......ill just drop bout 12...

u call that a verse? its more like a worthless piece...
u the shit on a bottom of a cookin pan, hurtless grease...
u out of this battle like the Lakers in the playoffs...
imma talk to ya manager at work n tell him to start lay-offs...
ya verse is like a broken "tape" it doesnt "measure"...
merkin u is just like fuckin ya sister, its my pleasure...
couldnt get an ill verb "out" of u if i was to knock ya out...
this aint a battle,its just like u hodin up a gun, ya glock in doubt...
u tried to back up ya verse but ya ended up split in half...
this aint a hit and run....on my part its more like a hit and laugh...
the only "head" u control is my large yogurt slinger....lmao
u couldnt get nice feedback if you were a pop singer...


iight that enough....nuttin special....

let the voting begin....


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im going with 512. illegal came pretty hard but the structure was that of a newbie, but he'll improve. flow also lacked. 512 just did what he needed to do with nice flow and some hard punches.
vote- 512

i'm goin with 512, that other guy was far too basic to be battling vets, but he was good for a newbie..

aiyo could you hit up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...880#post567880
with and HONEST vote and i'll return the favor, just leave a link

512

This dog gets ma vote for better structure, vocab n flow

Peace all

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thanks for the voting.....
uppin for more....

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512 to gets my vote cuz hit flow was better
but Illeagal clown ya did good for a newbe
good luck on ya next battle

holla back at ya whitenigga
512 hit this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60641

iight uppin.........................peace


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yo 512 yeah... that was tight u doen got ur self another victory............yo people i need ya to go check out my battle against pharoahofnc not that many seen it yet so we need votes............ Rapbattles.com Forums - newregimevspharoa

iight uppin once again....
dont forget to poll vote....
drop a link if u need a favor....
but vote first.....


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512 got this shit hands down.. won every category on my mind....
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illegal.. u must elevate.. start by battling nebs and then go on battling people with a little more experience .. cuz if u battlevets right away ur record is gonna look like shit.. nah what i mean?

vote: 512

yo i think 512 took this shit easily fo real. ey 512 please check out my battle right quick and poll vote for the best verse, and dont forget to poll vote aight

poll vote- 512