Start....Pain...End

this shit is an angry pease, enjoy this drop,,....... dedicated to ma new crew......


yo let me introduce maself, ima a baby, i think maby//
im in a bag of water//
the woman carrying me hopes im a daughter, but im puttin them hopes to the slaughter//
u see im a boy look i got a toy, so i must be a boy//
im trapped in here, feelin da fear of the outside of ma mums hide//
i can feel ma time is near to maikn that slide//
wish i could stay here n hide inside//
shit ma time is here, its finally time to face ma growing fear//
look the placenta is opanin, shit i cant hang on to ma felopian tube//
only hope i got is to suck on a boob to got some more food//
that fuckin placenta, look its got a hole in da center//
here i go nice n slow, bet mums hopin i go wide her flow//
come out nice n easy from her hole down below//
last thing i hear before i go face ma biggest fear//
"dont forget to breath when you leave"//

**chorus**

you cant choose who n where your born too//
wish you could, i understand//
my only crime is breathin//
thats why im uppin n leavin//
u better be beleivin//

Wo its bright out here//
look at all those people standin n learin at me//
fuck i need a pee!, oh wo here it comes//
hey look people im like a fountain//
jesus look at those boobs, their like mountains//
i bet they spit food like fountains//
"its a boy look he has a toy"//
but hold up!, where you takin me?//
whats she say?, ma mom whanted a girl, ima a boy so i gotta go!//
IM A NEW BABY! DONT HATE ME LOVE ME! PLEASEEE//
fuck i think their gunna sell me on EBAY!//
NO WAY, HOW COULD SHE DO THIS!! I WANNA BE LOVED//
I WANNA BE CUDDLED AND SPOILED, WHY THE FUCK IS SHE BOILIN ME!//
this lady is really startin to annoy me, im only a boy//
you should be filled wid joy! LOVE ME PLEASEEEEEEEE!!//

**CHORUS**

you cant choose who n where your born too//
wish you could, i understand//
my only crime is breathin//
thats why im uppin n leavin//
u better be beleivin//

10 years later people avoid me like im darth vader//
im into all sorts of shit, mu butt gets liked each and every day//
i aint making no fucking head- way, im abandoned in a home all alone//
noone to phone, im so alone, i only eats whats left on the bone//
nobody loves me, im all bitter n twisted, fuckin life aint shit, i can list it//
born given up, sent to foster parents, novalty where's off, given up//
sent to a home, fed nothin but a bone, where the fuck is ma home//
"WHY DOESENT MA MUM PHONE", fucking cry every day, no hope all alone//
look in da mirror, nothin but skin n bone!, im so fuckin alone//
why cant i have some one to cry to, even fucking lie to, this aint fair//
i shouldent have this, why have i missed life, am i so bad//
this life of mine is driving me mad, ITS SO FUCKIN SAD!//

**choris**

you cant choose who n where your born too//
wish you could, i understand//
my only crime is breathin//
thats why im uppin n leavin//
u better be beleivin//

10 years later, im still darth vader//
only now im stronger n wiser, harder n rougher//
im ma own fuckin buffer i dont need anybody, their a fuckin hinderunce//
ma life is indurance, like a race to see who kills me first//
i got no contreol, ma race is with god, see who takes ma life first//
each and every corner im taking it further, robbery, car theft//
fuckit ma bitch left, who gives a fuck, go on go, why you lookin like dat//
get the fuck outta me life, u aint never gunna be ma wife, im endin ma life//
walk in da kitchen, pick up the biggest knife, stick it in ma coat//
go to ma crew, say whatch this homies, ima about to get a reason to gloat//
see a policeman, call him over, he gets out of his MG rover//
SCREAM AT HIM FUCK YOU BASTARD, stick dat knife down his throat//
stand n stair move i dont dare, i gone to way to far//
look at ma homies runin far, shit what can i do?//
i cant goto prison, i cant run, cant talk' no one listens//
I GOT AN IDEA, ima win ma race, end ma life with haste//
cant stand the horrible taste in ma mouth, fuckit im headin south//
drive to the cliff, smokin one last spliff, gotta go now//
aint a question of how, i no right here, right now, im takin ma final bow//
walk to the edge, im still all alone, nowhere to call home, no1 to run to//
look down, ma face dont even break into a frown, give ma bitch clown of a mutha 1 last chance//
she still dont call, so i dive n begin to fall, faster n faster, wind rushin past ma ears//
i aint got no internal fears, i no noone is sheddin a tear, proberly still learin//
so ma life is nearin an end, i got one last message to send//
to ma mutha, after all this please tell her i still love her//
tell her im above her, all i whant is her love for me//
tell her not to worry, im goin home to the almighty, ima be alrighty//
lights go out, ma head emptys, i got just one feelin.............//
finally i got a place thats home, im no longer all alone...................

**chorus**

you cant choose who n where your born too//
wish you could, i understand//
my only crime is breathin//
thats why im uppin n leavin//
u better be beleivin//


my life i give to you, ma heart i give to you, my soul i give to you//
please just love me like i love you, im home.................

that was tight

uppin dis

not really my kind of style
but i can see where your going
you have some pretty good rhymes but over all its still pretty elementry. i think you just need to be a little more clever
i would expect someone to use the rhymes you chose
i think inorder to elevate you have to throw stuff people wouldnt expect
i still liked it
nothing but respect
just keep flowing
and keep reading

peace
man

-B

It was an aight drop , some of ur lines werent Rhyming , , I kno u can do better than This......tha 2nd verse was weak...I wasnt feelin it at all..Tha last verse was Aight...