WK8: Unfukwitable vs Exalted. (VOTE NOW!!)

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WK8

Punches due: Saturday 4th October

Voting ends: Tuesday 7th October

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@Unfukwitable @Exalted.

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wifey texts me: 'let's sneak a quick one in' - bitch put the notion my head
cuz we figured Undulate.. but u home early & caught us doin that motion in ur bed

I’ll pistol whip this clown…

Rob’em for 2 zips of loud, flip it then skip town, I don’t kid around;
Ive been trappin since Four Ex, I can easily Turn “You’re O’s into Pounds”!

Ex came nicely, un name plays have been flipped a lot not the most creative angle however you nailed the execution had to google undulate didn’t know it was a word but a very nice bar
U fuck you had a lot going on here and a lot of it nice, four ex was nice and your o was good in one way but I’m struggling to find another way it fits without the word play? Is it o/0? Because you’re o doesn’t really work for me and that took away from what was looking like a sick bar, maybe it’s on me maybe it’s the wording maybe it’s just a flip that doesn’t really work either way ex came smoother for me
V/ex

(Euro’s into Pounds)

ex

the setup seems worded weird w/ "put the notion my head", but w/e. the nameplay is cool and it connects well but it seems like u just googled a random word and went with it which is meh to me. the connection is good though and per usual, u crafted a solid text bar.

unfuk

ok setup but skip town didnt work as a multi, forex/euros/pounds is cool, double meaning works well and is a pretty original concept to my knowledge. the only problem is i dont like the punch, saying u trap harder than him is kinda silly to me. fwiw, i think the creativity is there and i genuinely liked the wordplay and give u props for the concept, it has a wow factor ex's didn't

somewhat close, ex had a safe yet effective and well worded nameplay but it's just kinda corny googling some word he probably didnt know even if he did a good job with it, unfuk came creative and i found the w/p and double connection pretty dope even if the punch lacked.. close but

v/ unfuk, simply put i enjoyed it more in general

The undulate wordplay was original, punch closed out a bit soft & the multi had an extra syllable thrown in on the second line but otherwise ok.
Un had a solid bar can't fault it too much, worst you could say is there was an iffy internal rhyme & I think forex has been used before but it was a fresh take on it that landed clean. It's not "see if mal cum in the middle" level but it's not far off. Good shit.

Vote Unf

Yoooo this was surprisingly a good match.. sorrry no sarcasm but I didn’t know ex was this nice..

So first and foremost I want to say great job to both..

Ex you leveled up my iq because I for damn sure aint know or heard of undulate I was thinking is that undalay like Spanish lol but the bar was worded super good..as for the punch it was cool the set up is missing the word “in” but it’s ok.. nice name flip slash anchor…

Unfuck: also really good wording.. forex euros into pounds flipping drugs but also flipping currency is high level iq all while name flipping.. it’s skillful..

Im going with unfuk this time but ex had a tough bar

GONE @ you thought it was underlay

Kinda cool battle, I actually thought the Undulate wordplay was fresh but it’s kind of an unnatural word you wouldn’t hear people using in every day speech so it was a little awkward for me personally. It’s a better concept than on paper than it works out being in competition, if that makes sense? Like it should work, in text, but it can only sort of possibly work in text because it isn’t an every day sort of word you would find in common usage and that takes away from it a little IMO.

For what it’s worth I liked Unfuk’s euros into pounds wordplay, I just want really a fan of the bar itself as it was more braggodocio in nature and less focused on actually attacking the opponent which was the main objective here, it’s one of those lines where I can appreciate it for the pen game conceptually, but as a battle bar it isn’t really cutting it here.

I’ve got Inf comfortably.

3-2 unfuk, VOTES!!

Both had pretty good bars. Ex came cool with the wordplay but it didn’t hit as hard as unfuk. Unfuk had a fire concept and execution combo in my opinion, did it very well tbh.

Close but I’ve got Unfuk