@plethora I'll match w/e u drop glgl due before the weekends over
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@plethora I'll match w/e u drop glgl due before the weekends over
Sorry holiday weekend got me busyQuote:
Originally Posted by Blas
all good just drop whenever u feel like it and i'll match
@Blas thanx for dropping a magazine for 1-2 punch league..
but if i drop a magazine, im picking another one up to reload & insert it
once a Case exit the Chamber, it'll follow with judge asking jury for a verdict
these Charlie Kirk punches hardly work cuz his views were politically broad
but i don't care if ur right-wing or left-wing, you'll get both when i send u to god
Blas? more like Blah.. cuz everything u drop boring, im snoring in fact..
reading your verses is like watching paint dry, but i'd rather drink a gallon of that
& if it hasnt sunk in yet i'll take the blunt end of ten knives til one lands
kill this Goof Off, then use some to remove the dried blood from my hands
requested legend to battle for exposure, so hope ur prayers were answered
dont know why u wanted the big Stage 4, but praying your mom dies of cancer
open the door & catch u at a grocery store, make it like a gory horror movie
employee calls for clean up Anhillate, cuz shit look like vietnam after a tour of duty
u stay low tier no growth here, so clearly a champ is what u aren't next
only way he moved a Tear Up, when all seeing eye dm a smiley face & heart text
hurtin this dude til he's in an emergency room on machines & cables
so future battles wont be on a text site, but bedside to see if ur breathing & stable
16 lines.
2 weeks later, all good tho thx 4 coming out
look...
He’s playing craps, this battles a gamble w/ bad odds & u’ll need the dumbest luck
Cuz vs me, at best he’s rolling the dice & when I shoot the 7 his NUMBERS UP
This guy? never approach a bitch while I’m the type to make her squeal fast
Unlikely you hear Pleh,sure when you have no chance at making her feel THAT
You’re poor as fuck, better flee the country or you’re dead when I’m steppin
He’s flying spirit? it’s TOO LATE, we’ll already see THAT ascending to heaven
Stay on topic w/ how broke he is, guy owed me 100 for weeks.. quit stalling boss
Guys balance is GONE <— no wonder every1 on RB agrees you’ve been falling off
Your swagger is AWFUL, every head would agree you’ve never been setting trends
So please try different Styles, P.. no surprise in 2025 you have THAT level of relevance
Take your chick & party some first, no gun bar but the shotty will burst
Cuz I’ll give hyundai long sessions, meaning I promise I’ll put that BODY to WORK
This guys writtens are pure irony, we know he’s wack but acts as unflawed as the pope
So watch bullets fly & land your hypocritical shot similar to EVERY BAR THAT YOU’VE WROTE
Take his chick & have him suicidal, can’t decide if I should slay or pump her
Decision made, you can watch this calendar life.. looks like her days were numbered
but if i drop a magazine, im picking another one up to reload & insert it
once a Case exit the Chamber, it'll follow with judge asking jury for a verdict
these Charlie Kirk punches hardly work cuz his views were politically broad
but i don't care if ur right-wing or left-wing, you'll get both when i send u to god
oof
open the door & catch u at a grocery store, make it like a gory horror movie
employee calls for clean up Anhillate, cuz shit look like vietnam after a tour of duty
hurtin this dude til he's in an emergency room on machines & cables
so future battles wont be on a text site, but bedside to see if ur breathing & stable
vs
nothing
honestly I hate to say this cos it's been said about me so many times but in my short time here I feel I've seen Blas drop better. Plethora dropped a dope verse overall and even the unquotables weren't complete misses, I just got picky. Hard to top that with a quick key IMO. Blas had some cool concepts but the wording and execution didn't really land for me.
v/Plethora
adding feedback for clarity to my vote.
He’s playing craps, this battles a gamble w/ bad odds & u’ll need the dumbest luck
Cuz vs me, at best he’s rolling the dice & when I shoot the 7 his NUMBERS UP
this has a lot of gambling stuff in it, I felt like I knew where this was going before we got to the second line. Maybe the setup was just leading in a little too well in this case for me.
This guy? never approach a bitch while I’m the type to make her squeal fast
Unlikely you hear Pleh,sure when you have no chance at making her feel THAT
I think my problem with this is that you made the wordplay too obvious. There is a form of "hand holding" that some people do that doesn't allow the readers to come to the conclusion for themselves. In some cases, it can work against the writer but when it works right, it hits. This wordplay wasn't bad to me and I never follow Plethora to know what nameplays are played on him but this just felt very hand holdy to me in the way it was delivered. The punch after that felt more like an after thought rather than a follow up to tie it all together.
You’re poor as fuck, better flee the country or you’re dead when I’m steppin
He’s flying spirit? it’s TOO LATE, we’ll already see THAT ascending to heaven
When did he say he was flying spirit? Why is this in question format? Also, I know this isn't the case but it was hard to not see this as a rebuttle or flip after reading his wings bar. Hard to not make the comparison after reading his first. spirit airlines bars aren't that creative IMO. You probably could make something dope out of it but I don't feel like this one lead in a way that made it a hard hit. It felt more statement-ish to me.
Stay on topic w/ how broke he is, guy owed me 100 for weeks.. quit stalling boss
Guys balance is GONE <— no wonder every1 on RB agrees you’ve been falling off
this felt like filler, I get what you were going with here. Maybe a quote of someone saying he was falling off or something like that would have made this more personal and relevant to the bar. As it stands it is very direct.
Your swagger is AWFUL, every head would agree you’ve never been setting trends
So please try different Styles, P.. no surprise in 2025 you have THAT level of relevance
Again, you went very hand holdy with this one. Simple example of "Styles P" vs just saying "styles p".. you made it too obvious what you were going for here so the punchline after it felt like it was just there to finish the bar and nothing else.
Take your chick & party some first, no gun bar but the shotty will burst
Cuz I’ll give hyundai long sessions, meaning I promise I’ll put that BODY to WORK
the word is pronounced "Hee-unn-day" so you saying "cus I'll give Hee-unn-day long sessions" just didn't make sense to me. Maybe you have an accent that makes it sound different by saying "Hi-unn-day" or something but neither works for me. Again, the closer to this second line felt like an after thought to simply close it out.
This guys writtens are pure irony, we know he’s wack but acts as unflawed as the pope
So watch bullets fly & land your hypocritical shot similar to EVERY BAR THAT YOU’VE WROTE
I'll admit, I don't get what this one is about. It may have gone over my head as it sounds like it's just a statement to me. I might just be dumb and this could just be a genius bar.
Take his chick & have him suicidal, can’t decide if I should slay or pump her
Decision made, you can watch this calendar life.. looks like her days were numbered
I felt like this was going for a "cal end her" but it felt forced which is likely why I never attempt or seen someone else attempt this wordplay before. Feel free to clarify if that is not what is going on but I did like the setup and feel like that's what it was going for when you said "pump".
overall, while I didn't quote anything that's not to say the verse was trash. I try to only quote what I think is the best lines of the verse which can come off as if it was all bad when no feedback is given. Most other people dont' even quote lines, they just name off concepts which is even less feedback. Hope this helps to clarify my vote though.