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WK3
Punches due: Tuesday 2nd September
Voting ends: Friday 5th September
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@FaQEyeReddit @Blas
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WK3
Punches due: Tuesday 2nd September
Voting ends: Friday 5th September
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@FaQEyeReddit @Blas
Don't worry FAQ, I can do your style better than you
BITCH
YOU CAN GET HIT WITH THE FLAME THROWER OR RANGE ROVER, EITHER WAY YOU’RE DEAD & YOUR LADYS GIVING POUND’N HEAD LIKE A HANG OVER ~ BETTER YET iPHONE HER W/ GAME & GOT YOUR BIRD GOING UP & DOWN TILL I HIT HER TUBES AND IT’S GAME OVER.
(FLAPPY BIRD)
Good shit blas!
Aye I fucked your bitch in a hell cat, fire pussy taking nut, ripped out her tracks trained the slut..handled stick like a manual whip, better than you cuz at least that pussy —came in clutch..
VOTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
V/ Blas
Just a better punch.
FaQ I felt like you were building to something bigger on the punch. Outside of the generic "I fucked you girl" idea, I don't feel the Car Concepts really produced anything insulting or too creative.
Blas had a more consistent flow, and the themes tied together nicely to create a better overall punch. I liked the personal in using your stretched style against you as well.
Seen both punchline concepts before so gotta nitpick to vote.. each had alot of tie-ins & multis to their punch, but the "pound'n head like a hangover" was the difference for me. Wish I could call it a draw bc both were impressive
v/ Blas
While I've never been a huge fan of long bar style, not because it's wack but because most people don't know how to keep the flow going and dropping a punch that makes it worth the read. I appreciated what Blas did here, the all caps was excessive but that's just syntax as the flow was clean and had interesting hits. FAQ made a decent attempt and I feel like he might be getting better (I hope) but it really wasn't too hard. Understand that we have seen/read/heard many "your girl" lines so if you're going to use one, it has to some how be unique to some degree in how you approach it. Using the car approach to setup for the pussy coming in clutch didn't move me here.
v/ Blas
Eye was pretty dope, but I felt like it came up a little short im comparison to impact. i feel like eye built up to his punch, while blas took advantage of each line while actually stealing Eye's style. Eye you gonna have to run the 1s with him for that maneuver.
v/Blas
Blas why do you... have his brid going up and down? I know what you meant, but, sounds doubley gay lmao.
Not too much impact from either, but some creativity in there for sure.
Blas punch was more composed and connected with more of a hit. Not bad from eye but the connect at the end while it made sense wasn't hard enough I guess
V blas
Yeah I think both flowed well and had clever flips but what’s impressed me the most is blas just came out and done faq in his own style and imitated it perfectly, like when Jon jones out strikers strikers and our grapples wrestlers
V/blas
well since this battle is over..Quote:
Originally Posted by Desmond Hume
what is gay about his girl riding my dick, what could make that gay LMAO
I mean, you're literally fucking a girl who came out of another man's dick. That's pretty gay.
based and true, my bad fellas was on my faggot shit this week
feel like one was a parody or w/e,
both did styles that's not my cup
Blas concept was better to me, other ones angle been done but alright s&f type line
Vote Blas
Both start off Creative with concepts
I enjoy Blas more
Vote Blas