10~15 Lines
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10~15 Lines
Check in
Verses due Today
And the normal rules
~No Feed'n~No Counter'n~etc...
Ok.im new.so.i got a different style i guess.so bare with it
Hope you catch every line..the meaning etc..with them also
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:Yep:::Yep:::Yep: ::Hmmm::
You just 'Act-Knowledge' to 'Real Emcees,:hmph: you don’t got 'Mic-Sense', that’s why you 'Feeble~Minded'...
F'ist-to-eye-Contact,' now 'Feeble~Blinded'…cause 8~1 was ya recored until these 'People~vote~Decided'…(Meaning ima Win)//
Feeble don't like to Spit-First, why not? :neways: You still gone suffer the 'Hands-of-Defeet', like an 'ManIcur~ist'...
You a 'No-body', and you going 'No-where fast', :Taxi:, like black and out-of-shape 'New-York Tour~ist'...//
'Feeble-Pussy', cause this is 'Easy-Rippage', like an 'Virgin~Pussie'...My similies, say you 'As's-Out, :Yep: your 'Carrer-gette’n-Ended' by a 'Fuckin~Newbie'...//
Making call-outz in 'Bitch-Slap' asking For 'Newbies, but now this is ya 'Equivalent defeat', with my 'New~B's(New Balance there shoes)...
You prolly got 'Group~P's, You a I’ll emcee :Right: ya just carry'ing 'Herp~P's...//
Feeble ya an 'Herb-G', that '8~1 record' ran 'out of luck', like Track Runners, passing through '4~Leaf~Clovers'...
Ya stay on knees praying in 'grass', like 'Budhist', I mow the shit now ur 'Be-Leafs~are~Over'...//
-:whacky:-
Match..it..10 Lines
Quote:
Posted By Feeble Minded
aight make the thread and spit. i will reply within 30 minutes...
(since i am in a battle now).....
:Hmmmm: Timer is On
Look at this Dude...You..seen my Verse...now you Get off-line..nicca..
Well Yo...you know thats not Fair Dont You?
But yo..Get your verse up in the Next Hour..yo..
:Coward:
<-- Look at my Face ::Do you think im Playin::-lol
Damn yo..^^ so you can see it.. Know you would do this..
this newbie cant ~hope to win~....on crack im still at least as dope as him~!!/
he cant ~cope with it~ i cause the ~dope to quit~ facin me he's like a fat kid playin gym!/
he's ~sheddin tears~ at the rate im 'droppin bombs'/
all he hears is 'booze' fill his ears with 'beer' and give him alms/ alms=(free raps)...all he hears is boos..get it?
my one punchline beat his verse...he's dying...someone call the nurse/
someone get the hearse...his conditions gettin worse and worse/
my proposition, is stop his mission, even 'tom cruise' thinks its 'impossible'/
permission to kill? granted...his shit didnt make sense and i cant top his bull?/
im unstoppable...his record still looks like old ladys glasses ...goose eggs/
ya cant top me...ima come strong until he, under abuse begs/
yo...
this battle wasnt fair...you spit closer to 20 lines than ten...yall either vote by not counting length or dont vote..
and i just saw this...i was gonna battle u 30 minutes after ya posted...but then u never posted it up in front lines, so i thought u didnt know how to or didnt want to anymore....so dont tell me i took a long time....
Yo look like 9 wins for feeble not very good battle but feebles vocab and flow took it in the end
vote-Feeble Minded
We live you Die, Politrix MothaFucker
thanks for voting yo....but too bad for me it wont let ya poll vote./...but thanks anyways...................................
damn.....thats some small writing (grabs bifocals...)....iight i'm giving dis to feeble...he came harder than the newb...but u did good newbie...nice....jus keep elevatin iight...i'll battle ya sometime too hehe....1
Well Thats 10 Lines....to tell ya..There Pretty Extended..But..packed with 2-3 personals..etc.punches..etc...multz etc...
But You seen the post..nicca..but what-eva.(you got your Extra time) to drop..so really dont care
And that last Vote pls..Explain more...this a battle...Vocab and Flow is not what win Battles..ya know...So..pls Explain
I'm givin this to Feeble as well....came harder than the newbie...
Feeble, I've seen u spit betta than this....don't let down just cuz he's a rook....totally destroy their asses and make them quit rappin...lol..........vote on my shit vs. Hottie7
i liked violents shit...not bad....cvhance ur typin style...make it readable normal..less irritatin.........Still feeble was craftier in places meta's an play....mekanicl destroyed as well as flow....not ur best feeb's but good enuff ta take da newb.....VOTE FEEBLE
violent wordz punches were played out, especially that de-feet line
feeble came more origional & hit harder so he gets my vote
hit my battle up with 13th
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=50618
feeble got this. I got heated tryin 2 read violentz small ass font. And that 1 line feeble said would beat violentz verse did
hit this up for memehttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=468178#post468178
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