LLL Week 6 Contendership: Dominate (4-1) vs. Barcotic (3-1) - Dom wins

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 14 Lines
Maximum Lines = 24 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

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16-20?

Dope. Let’s do 20.

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Originally Posted by Barcotic, early 2015

ur wrecked n dummied, either dead or something is stitched tight
but I really hope that if u don't dialogue falls on ur neck n crushes ur windpipe

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Originally Posted by Dominate, 2 wks ago

Swap those boring ass concepts out. U can’t think what ur writin is boss
Need an ‘exchange of ideas’ so bad.. at this pt we’re just hoping u’ll dialogue off

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come on man, u butchered that

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Originally Posted by Dominate

Straya > Merica

It's the truth.

Don't get mad. Get better.

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LOL

nothin like a hater claimin aussie life's the baddest
yeah... maybe if u Straya way from talking like a faggot
ur dialogue is wack. its not just a zinger u teefing
if i raise arms and 'aim eight' at ya, u think its a greeting
the steel is cocked, its fate that i clear this obstacle
i got more pumps for a snake than his nearest hospital
get robbed for ur sack..BRU, im a boss w the strap
fuck ur giant spiders, ill leave U on the walls in ur Trap
4tc's the crew but i shudnt lie, u took the final spot
i hope u only Reptilia get eaten in the bushes by a croc
or u can visit myyy country w ur family if u that hard
ill get some Topsoil ya wife and bury u in my backyard
kid, look.. bring hooks...swing good, rough n fast
but Yowie should fight, ill stick this Bigfoot up ur ass
throw bombs w the glock, dome rocked w the stock
im Driving a stick thru his skull whether i Odometer not
drugged ya gf's spritzer..woke up bitter w/ regrets
so the next time she gets Roofied, its dinner for ur pets
what other wp u take? ur game's kindve whack, bud
u like revisiting concepts, but ur gravesite will lack one
y allow such posers..in chat tryna sound much doper
ie: high 5 joog and give ex a 10 just to Round Up voters
this is a roid bashing u cant avoid sadly. ur bested
welcome to RBI cant say i didnt enjoy batting ur head in

:(

Barcotic aka Mike the gardener…

Put the beam on ur peepers. No escape when I’m on that precision flex
Bottom line: u can’t make it out.. get the laser on ur eyes like u failed a vision test
Delete votes, move battles… start pitching a fit when I blitz you Bar
That’s how low you’ll stupefy win. I’m honestly STUNNED at what a bitch u are
One shot – I’ll pop ya gums. Have the cops confront ur moms at once
Tell her “there’s no easy way to say this…” while the blood just rolls off ya tongue
I clean my money so the feds can’t trace it. A boss w/ the riches, coward
I’m on that laundering business. You’re on that lawn during business hours
Ur job’s a joke & that’s REAL shit. I don’t care if the truth gets u flamed
I’m calling a spade a spade, faggot - not a fuckin tool of the trade
& don’t tell me you handle investments or that you’re seein some bank next
Your idea of managing hedge funds is 600 dollars a week on your paycheck
You’re a last resort for girls. They fucking HATE the shit you’re peddling
Colony woman your wife and I guarantee you that bitch is Settling
This fag’s dying. Have his fam crying after they watch em get beat silly
They’ll see this kid on the rocks and wail over his body… that’s Free Willy
How he talking that cans & sticks shit, pretending he’s actually grippin?
Only irony ever picked up is the fact he lost every gunbar battle he’s been in
First the PPV then the cypher. Boy you wrote TWICE what Resin produced
MIC vs Mike - no surprise he wrote less, said the same shit & did it better than you
Go ahead & bring the teacher jokes. My career ain’t rivalling YOU bud
I’m growing the minds of the future. You’re growing & minding the fuchsias
Need to stop all that vet talk. Too late to pretend ur one of the best dawg
I’ve seen how u disembark… that ship has sailed & it's time u stepped off

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Originally Posted by Barcotic

nothin like a hater claimin aussie life's the baddest
yeah... maybe if u Straya way from talking like a faggot
4tc's the crew but i shudnt lie, u took the final spot
i hope u only Reptilia get eaten in the bushes by a croc
or u can visit myyy country w ur family if u that hard
ill get some Topsoil ya wife and bury u in my backyard
throw bombs w the glock, dome rocked w the stock
im Driving a stick thru his skull whether i Odometer not
this is a roid bashing u cant avoid sadly. ur bested
welcome to RBI cant say i didnt enjoy batting ur head in

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vs.

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Originally Posted by Dominate

Put the beam on ur peepers. No escape when I’m on that precision flex
Bottom line: u can’t make it out.. get the laser on ur eyes like u failed a vision test
I clean my money so the feds can’t trace it. A boss w/ the riches, coward
I’m on that laundering business. You’re on that lawn during business hours
Ur job’s a joke & that’s REAL shit. I don’t care if the truth gets u flamed
I’m calling a spade a spade, faggot - not a fuckin tool of the trade
You’re a last resort for girls. They fucking HATE the shit you’re peddling
Colony woman your wife and I guarantee you that bitch is Settling
How he talking that cans & sticks shit, pretending he’s actually grippin?
Only irony ever picked up is the fact he lost every gunbar battle he’s been in
Go ahead & bring the teacher jokes. My career ain’t rivalling YOU bud
I’m growing the minds of the future. You’re growing & minding the fuchsias

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Pretty nice battle. I got Dominate with one more quotable, 6 to Barc's 5.

Outside of these lines, I also felt the rest of Dominate's verse was a bit more consistent throughout. Higher lows. His execution was slightly more developed and polished in this battle, which made the verse hit harder to me. Kind of just looked like more effort from Dominate tbh. I don't know this for sure (obviously) but Barcotic's verse seemed rushed. Good shit tho, fellas.

My vote goes to Dominate.

nothin like a hater claimin aussie life's the baddest
yeah... maybe if u Straya way from talking like a faggot
this is excellent given the relevance and the way it was executed
ur dialogue is wack. its not just a zinger u teefing
if i raise arms and 'aim eight' at ya, u think its a greeting
effective and continuing w/clowning their way of speaking
the steel is cocked, its fate that i clear this obstacle
i got more pumps for a snake than his nearest hospital
cool cool
get robbed for ur sack..BRU, im a boss w the strap
fuck ur giant spiders, ill leave U on the walls in ur Trap
this is OK, could have been done better w/more tie ins
4tc's the crew but i shudnt lie, u took the final spot
i hope u only Reptilia get eaten in the bushes by a croc
dece
or u can visit myyy country w ur family if u that hard
ill get some Topsoil ya wife and bury u in my backyard
haha ok
kid, look.. bring hooks...swing good, rough n fast
but Yowie should fight, ill stick this Bigfoot up ur ass
another decent aussie word ref
throw bombs w the glock, dome rocked w the stock
im Driving a stick thru his skull whether i Odometer not
ha! unexpected
drugged ya gf's spritzer..woke up bitter w/ regrets
so the next time she gets Roofied, its dinner for ur pets
meh
what other wp u take? ur game's kindve whack, bud
u like revisiting concepts, but ur gravesite will lack one'
nah
y allow such posers..in chat tryna sound much doper
ie: high 5 joog and give ex a 10 just to Round Up voters
ok
this is a roid bashing u cant avoid sadly. ur bested
welcome to RBI cant say i didnt enjoy batting ur head in
this is ok

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Put the beam on ur peepers. No escape when I’m on that precision flex
Bottom line: u can’t make it out.. get the laser on ur eyes like u failed a vision test
not a hard opener but ok
Delete votes, move battles… start pitching a fit when I blitz you Bar
That’s how low you’ll stupefy win. I’m honestly STUNNED at what a bitch u are
ouch
One shot – I’ll pop ya gums. Have the cops confront ur moms at once
Tell her “there’s no easy way to say this…” while the blood just rolls off ya tongue
this was not worded effectively imo
I clean my money so the feds can’t trace it. A boss w/ the riches, coward
I’m on that laundering business. You’re on that lawn during business hours
daaamn
Ur job’s a joke & that’s REAL shit. I don’t care if the truth gets u flamed
I’m calling a spade a spade, faggot - not a fuckin tool of the trade
wow hitting em harrrd
& don’t tell me you handle investments or that you’re seein some bank next
Your idea of managing hedge funds is 600 dollars a week on your paycheck
goddamn this is the Dom I been waiting to see again
You’re a last resort for girls. They fucking HATE the shit you’re peddling
Colony woman your wife and I guarantee you that bitch is Settling
fucking fire
This fag’s dying. Have his fam crying after they watch em get beat silly
They’ll see this kid on the rocks and wail over his body… that’s Free Willy
nah, not feeling a free willy concept
How he talking that cans & sticks shit, pretending he’s actually grippin?
Only irony ever picked up is the fact he lost every gunbar battle he’s been in
fucking heater
First the PPV then the cypher. Boy you wrote TWICE what Resin produced
MIC vs Mike - no surprise he wrote less, said the same shit & did it better than you
wooowww
Go ahead & bring the teacher jokes. My career ain’t rivalling YOU bud
I’m growing the minds of the future. You’re growing & minding the fuchsias
jesus
Need to stop all that vet talk. Too late to pretend ur one of the best dawg
I’ve seen how u disembark… that ship has sailed & it's time u stepped off
fuuuck


Hole Lee Shiiiiiiit

Dom's back in true form again. Bar your verse wasn't bad at all, very creative, a ton of relevant punches on that aussie tip, all around a good verse. I enjoyed it very much

Dom just came in with the flame thrower and cleaned house. Same shit he did to me tbh. Impressive. Honored to be in 4TC with you both

v/ Dominate

Barc:

nothin like a hater claimin aussie life's the baddest
yeah... maybe if u Straya way from talking like a faggot
used in a predictable way and simplistic
ur dialogue is wack. its not just a zinger u teefing
if i raise arms and 'aim eight' at ya, u think its a greeting
ay mate.. I get it lol.. okkk
the steel is cocked, its fate that i clear this obstacle
i got more pumps for a snake than his nearest hospital
LOL.. dig it!
get robbed for ur sack..BRU, im a boss w the strap
fuck ur giant spiders, ill leave U on the walls in ur Trap
okay
4tc's the crew but i shudnt lie, u took the final spot
i hope u only Reptilia get eaten in the bushes by a croc
aight
or u can visit myyy country w ur family if u that hard
ill get some Topsoil ya wife and bury u in my backyard
lol nice
kid, look.. bring hooks...swing good, rough n fast
but Yowie should fight, ill stick this Bigfoot up ur ass
nope
throw bombs w the glock, dome rocked w the stock
im Driving a stick thru his skull whether i Odometer not
dig it
drugged ya gf's spritzer..woke up bitter w/ regrets
so the next time she gets Roofied, its dinner for ur pets
lol
what other wp u take? ur game's kindve whack, bud
u like revisiting concepts, but ur gravesite will lack one
okay
y allow such posers..in chat tryna sound much doper
ie: high 5 joog and give ex a 10 just to Round Up voters
nope
this is a roid bashing u cant avoid sadly. ur bested
welcome to RBI cant say i didnt enjoy batting ur head in
2002 wants their concept back



Dom:


Put the beam on ur peepers. No escape when I’m on that precision flex
Bottom line: u can’t make it out.. get the laser on ur eyes like u failed a vision test
yea it's technically sound but not feeling
Delete votes, move battles… start pitching a fit when I blitz you Bar
That’s how low you’ll stupefy win. I’m honestly STUNNED at what a bitch u are
old wp but the line hits
One shot – I’ll pop ya gums. Have the cops confront ur moms at once
Tell her “there’s no easy way to say this…” while the blood just rolls off ya tongue
lol ok
I clean my money so the feds can’t trace it. A boss w/ the riches, coward
I’m on that laundering business. You’re on that lawn during business hours
fuck me
Ur job’s a joke & that’s REAL shit. I don’t care if the truth gets u flamed
I’m calling a spade a spade, faggot - not a fuckin tool of the trade
haha
& don’t tell me you handle investments or that you’re seein some bank next
Your idea of managing hedge funds is 600 dollars a week on your paycheck
lol go easy on his job sheesh
You’re a last resort for girls. They fucking HATE the shit you’re peddling
Colony woman your wife and I guarantee you that bitch is Settling
this is dope lol
This fag’s dying. Have his fam crying after they watch em get beat silly
They’ll see this kid on the rocks and wail over his body… that’s Free Willy
it works, i like the creativity
How he talking that cans & sticks shit, pretending he’s actually grippin?
Only irony ever picked up is the fact he lost every gunbar battle he’s been in
haha
First the PPV then the cypher. Boy you wrote TWICE what Resin produced
MIC vs Mike - no surprise he wrote less, said the same shit & did it better than you
kind've corny but it's a personal and it's true so it hits
Go ahead & bring the teacher jokes. My career ain’t rivalling YOU bud
I’m growing the minds of the future. You’re growing & minding the fuchsias
ok
Need to stop all that vet talk. Too late to pretend ur one of the best dawg
I’ve seen how u disembark… that ship has sailed & it's time u stepped off
good grief



Dom's opening bar I was thinking okay he's going to have a corny verse but then he just heated up and it was mostly flames. Barc had some good stuff sprinkled in but Dom won this. I wouldn't want to face this Dom.

Barc is DQ'd for swaying

Open for feed

LMAO

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Originally Posted by Glockamole

lmaoooooo @ Ruth Feed wordplay. Who tf is Ruth

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It’s “roo feed” you dense faggot lmao wow.

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Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.

It’s “roo feed” you dense faggot lmao wow.

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lmao @Glockamole u r legit retarded

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Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.

It’s “roo feed” you dense faggot lmao wow.

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Wow. Just..

michael is literal dog shit at text battling

If Barcs losing n getting swept best believe he gon sway lol. Of course I stayed my first battle so uh

I was in the middle of voting on this too, asshole