Week 7: Joe Boston 1-2 vs. Authentic 1-3 joe wins

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@Joe Boston @Authentic.

Check

check

Going 12.

Fuck You 12

This dudes straight pussy, stop sitting here playing victim
Shots will leave a constant buzz in his ear like the presidential alert system
Built with wisdom from these streets witnessed more then enough bodies covered in sheets
Got A hired goon that if he seen him in the Holly Robinson, your gonna need more than Rodney Peete
If I gotta be more discreet I’ll leave you on the floor leaking exposing your heart
When I point the barrel at Hemisphere in those eyes I’ll blow his brains somewhere in the eastern part
Don’t start something you can’t finish, my kill count can make the book of Guinness
Shells give ur face a custom remodel or blood splatter can leave ur floors refinished
I diminished every herb that crossed my path, too complex for you to figure out the math
Fucking Patriot on your block, I’ll stomp with the new Nikes I purchased from Bob Kraft
I laugh at shit you think you accomplished, Joes a vet and that’s a fucking reminder
Fuck all the badges you’ll still see me shooting like it’s South Carolina

Another homo.

Lately i been gettin caught wit losses to lower tiers n it's stressing me
u not hard to bury b,
... so getting stomped in.. is the only way Joe B cemented in his legacy
Legs severed, beheaded 'em.. cuz u'll never be loyal, so it'll be fatal
he'll never ride with homies or stay 10 toes down, he'll always betrayal
I'll slay u, with these demonstration of arms in effect i expect to collect
blood samples, after bullets correct ya mind n chest.. like u a test subject
tryn run in they steps, of big dogs.. you gone trip, n take a harder fall
only time u shine while you're active.. is detailing a whip with Armor All
n stop it dawg.. you dont get top n fuck broads, Joe B hitting the skins..
only way he get it from the back.. is turn'n his hand around, gettin it in!
love ya kin? prove it as i depress ya mom under water til her life is short
she barely movin, so fuck this battle! I got yo mom fightin for life support!

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Joe Boston

Fuck You 12

This dudes straight pussy, stop sitting here playing victim
Shots will leave a constant buzz in his ear like the presidential alert system
Aight
Built with wisdom from these streets witnessed more then enough bodies covered in sheets
Got A hired goon that if he seen him in the Holly Robinson, your gonna need more than Rodney Peete
I dig this bro
If I gotta be more discreet I’ll leave you on the floor leaking exposing your heart
When I point the barrel at Hemisphere in those eyes I’ll blow his brains somewhere in the eastern part
Lil forced but not bad
Don’t start something you can’t finish, my kill count can make the book of Guinness
Shells give ur face a custom remodel or blood splatter can leave ur floors refinished
Cool
I diminished every herb that crossed my path, too complex for you to figure out the math
Fucking Patriot on your block, I’ll stomp with the new Nikes I purchased from Bob Kraft
Not too strong but was a cool bar
I laugh at shit you think you accomplished, Joes a vet and that’s a fucking reminder
Fuck all the badges you’ll still see me shooting like it’s South Carolina
Not bad, kind of weaker than some of ur other bars

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Jason Voorhees

Another homo.

Lately i been gettin caught wit losses to lower tiers n it's stressing me
u not hard to bury b,
... so getting stomped in.. is the only way Joe B cemented in his legacy
Not bad
Legs severed, beheaded 'em.. cuz u'll never be loyal, so it'll be fatal
he'll never ride with homies or stay 10 toes down, he'll always betrayal
Nahh not feeling
I'll slay u, with these demonstration of arms in effect i expect to collect
blood samples, after bullets correct ya mind n chest.. like u a test subject
Cool
tryn run in they steps, of big dogs.. you gone trip, n take a harder fall
only time u shine while you're active.. is detailing a whip with Armor All
I like it
n stop it dawg.. you dont get top n fuck broads, Joe B hitting the skins..
only way he get it from the back.. is turn'n his hand around, gettin it in!
Nahh
love ya kin? prove it as i depress ya mom under water til her life is short
she barely movin, so fuck this battle! I got yo mom fightin for life support!
Nahh

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Got Boston here

not really impressed with either
Boston had long stretched lines, that never hit for me. the punches we a bit simple
Authentic verse was alot easier to read, flowed better. punches didnt reall hit to me
they were a bit to simple but overall think had the better verse
i think both can do better
v/Authentic

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Joe Boston

Fuck You 12

This dudes straight pussy, stop sitting here playing victim
Shots will leave a constant buzz in his ear like the presidential alert system
DECENT
Built with wisdom from these streets witnessed more then enough bodies covered in sheets
Got A hired goon that if he seen him in the Holly Robinson, your gonna need more than Rodney Peete
OKISH
If I gotta be more discreet I’ll leave you on the floor leaking exposing your heart
When I point the barrel at Hemisphere in those eyes I’ll blow his brains somewhere in the eastern part
EH
Don’t start something you can’t finish, my kill count can make the book of Guinness
Shells give ur face a custom remodel or blood splatter can leave ur floors refinished
NAH
I diminished every herb that crossed my path, too complex for you to figure out the math
Fucking Patriot on your block, I’ll stomp with the new Nikes I purchased from Bob Kraft
NAH
I laugh at shit you think you accomplished, Joes a vet and that’s a fucking reminder
Fuck all the badges you’ll still see me shooting like it’s South Carolina
NOT FEELING

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Jason Voorhees

Another homo.

Lately i been gettin caught wit losses to lower tiers n it's stressing me
u not hard to bury b,
... so getting stomped in.. is the only way Joe B cemented in his legacy
NAH
Legs severed, beheaded 'em.. cuz u'll never be loyal, so it'll be fatal
he'll never ride with homies or stay 10 toes down, he'll always betrayal
NOT FEELING
I'll slay u, with these demonstration of arms in effect i expect to collect
blood samples, after bullets correct ya mind n chest.. like u a test subject
NO WOW OR HARSH IMPACT IN THESE BARS
tryn run in they steps, of big dogs.. you gone trip, n take a harder fall
only time u shine while you're active.. is detailing a whip with Armor All
DATED
n stop it dawg.. you dont get top n fuck broads, Joe B hitting the skins..
only way he get it from the back.. is turn'n his hand around, gettin it in!
NO SIR
love ya kin? prove it as i depress ya mom under water til her life is short
she barely movin, so fuck this battle! I got yo mom fightin for life support!
NAH

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v/Joe ...JV was lacking creative ideas and his execution was eh throughout.

2-1 joe more votes.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Joe Boston

Fuck You 12

This dudes straight pussy, stop sitting here playing victim
Shots will leave a constant buzz in his ear like the presidential alert system
GODDAMNIT DIA I TOLD YOU IT WAS ALREADY PLAYED OUT
Built with wisdom from these streets witnessed more then enough bodies covered in sheets
Got A hired goon that if he seen him in the Holly Robinson, your gonna need more than Rodney Peete
So I didn't really get this reference, but Holly Robinson is such a dope fucking wordplay you get the Ok
If I gotta be more discreet I’ll leave you on the floor leaking exposing your heart
When I point the barrel at Hemisphere in those eyes I’ll blow his brains somewhere in the eastern part
No
Don’t start something you can’t finish, my kill count can make the book of Guinness
Shells give ur face a custom remodel or blood splatter can leave ur floors refinished
Ok
I diminished every herb that crossed my path, too complex for you to figure out the math
Fucking Patriot on your block, I’ll stomp with the new Nikes I purchased from Bob Kraft
No
I laugh at shit you think you accomplished, Joes a vet and that’s a fucking reminder
Fuck all the badges you’ll still see me shooting like it’s South Carolina
Eh

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Jason Voorhees

Another homo.

Lately i been gettin caught wit losses to lower tiers n it's stressing me
u not hard to bury b,
... so getting stomped in.. is the only way Joe B cemented in his legacy
I CAN NOT ETHICALLY VOTE FOR A LONG BAR
Legs severed, beheaded 'em.. cuz u'll never be loyal, so it'll be fatal
he'll never ride with homies or stay 10 toes down, he'll always betrayal
No
I'll slay u, with these demonstration of arms in effect i expect to collect
blood samples, after bullets correct ya mind n chest.. like u a test subject
No
tryn run in they steps, of big dogs.. you gone trip, n take a harder fall
only time u shine while you're active.. is detailing a whip with Armor All
No
n stop it dawg.. you dont get top n fuck broads, Joe B hitting the skins..
only way he get it from the back.. is turn'n his hand around, gettin it in!
No
love ya kin? prove it as i depress ya mom under water til her life is short
she barely movin, so fuck this battle! I got yo mom fightin for life support!
No

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VOTE Joe pretty easy, for me. Jason I can tell you can rhyme, but I honestly just don't feel the way you punch. Sorry man.

hoe boston
This dudes straight pussy, stop sitting here playing victim
Shots will leave a constant buzz in his ear like the presidential alert system
I used the pres alert bar this week to, mine was better.

Built with wisdom from these streets witnessed more then enough bodies covered in sheets
Got A hired goon that if he seen him in the Holly Robinson, your gonna need more than Rodney Peete
not feeling this.

If I gotta be more discreet I’ll leave you on the floor leaking exposing your heart
When I point the barrel at Hemisphere in those eyes I’ll blow his brains somewhere in the eastern part
cool wordplay I guess, nothing much else going on.

Don’t start something you can’t finish, my kill count can make the book of Guinness
Shells give ur face a custom remodel or blood splatter can leave ur floors refinished
not feeling this, no real punch.

I diminished every herb that crossed my path, too complex for you to figure out the math
Fucking Patriot on your block, I’ll stomp with the new Nikes I purchased from Bob Kraft
what, no, not feeling this try again.


I laugh at shit you think you accomplished, Joes a vet and that’s a fucking reminder
Fuck all the badges you’ll still see me shooting like it’s South Carolina
you already had a gunplay bar, I'm nto feeling this though.

this was a pretty light drop here, the hemisphere bar was good enough.

vs

authentic
Lately i been gettin caught wit losses to lower tiers n it's stressing me
u not hard to bury b,
... so getting stomped in.. is the only way Joe B cemented in his legacy
not feeling this..

Legs severed, beheaded 'em.. cuz u'll never be loyal, so it'll be fatal
he'll never ride with homies or stay 10 toes down, he'll always betrayal
not feeling this, wording issues.. he'll always betrayal? doesn't make sense.

I'll slay u, with these demonstration of arms in effect i expect to collect
blood samples, after bullets correct ya mind n chest.. like u a test subject
this seemed really forced, and nothing came of it.

tryn run in they steps, of big dogs.. you gone trip, n take a harder fall
only time u shine while you're active.. is detailing a whip with Armor All
not feeling this either.

n stop it dawg.. you dont get top n fuck broads, Joe B hitting the skins..
only way he get it from the back.. is turn'n his hand around, gettin it in!
this does nothing for me...

love ya kin? prove it as i depress ya mom under water til her life is short
she barely movin, so fuck this battle! I got yo mom fightin for life support!
mom bar, uh nah, not feeling.

I think you got good set ups, but you never follow up with the punch, and it just sounds incomplete, like that getting it in bar.

v/joe boston

I just think boston was a tad more creative than authentic.

This dudes straight pussy, stop sitting here playing victim
Shots will leave a constant buzz in his ear like the presidential alert system
this could have been dope but usually when you shoot someone they dont have a constant buzz in their ear when they dead. Idk man
Built with wisdom from these streets witnessed more then enough bodies covered in sheets
Got A hired goon that if he seen him in the Holly Robinson, your gonna need more than Rodney Peete
The wordplay was cool just the punch wasnt celver at all.
If I gotta be more discreet I’ll leave you on the floor leaking exposing your heart
When I point the barrel at Hemisphere in those eyes I’ll blow his brains somewhere in the eastern part
I fuck with this tho joe. this was nice. Could lose some words and maybe tweak the set up
Don’t start something you can’t finish, my kill count can make the book of Guinness
Shells give ur face a custom remodel or blood splatter can leave ur floors refinished
This needed to be worded different. I fuck with the concept but wasnt harsh man
I diminished every herb that crossed my path, too complex for you to figure out the math
Fucking Patriot on your block, I’ll stomp with the new Nikes I purchased from Bob Kraft
Nah man
I laugh at shit you think you accomplished, Joes a vet and that’s a fucking reminder
Fuck all the badges you’ll still see me shooting like it’s South Carolina
Not feeling this man

Vs


Lately i been gettin caught wit losses to lower tiers n it's stressing me
u not hard to bury b,
... so getting stomped in.. is the only way Joe B cemented in his legacy
This could have been dope. Light all around tho/Kinda basic/Played
Legs severed, beheaded 'em.. cuz u'll never be loyal, so it'll be fatal
he'll never ride with homies or stay 10 toes down, he'll always betrayal
Nah man. diss must've went over my head
I'll slay u, with these demonstration of arms in effect i expect to collect
blood samples, after bullets correct ya mind n chest.. like u a test subject
This was a cool concept just wasnt really witty man. bland. miss
tryn run in they steps, of big dogs.. you gone trip, n take a harder fall
only time u shine while you're active.. is detailing a whip with Armor All
Lmao I fuck with this if you tweaked it could have been doper
n stop it dawg.. you dont get top n fuck broads, Joe B hitting the skins..
only way he get it from the back.. is turn'n his hand around, gettin it in!
Nah man
love ya kin? prove it as i depress ya mom under water til her life is short
she barely movin, so fuck this battle! I got yo mom fightin for life support!
Basiic and lazy man


I got Joe Boston here with one quotable bar and a few light misses and Auth had some cool concepts that missed and some dated/lazy shit. Seemed rushed here. not a good read tbh. V/Joe Boston