WK 5: Smog(1-1) Vs Art(3-1)[open for votes]

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@Allen Knight @Smog @Art.

If somone signs in I'll split this up

In.

Here, 10?

@Smog @Art.

@Allen Knight is now battling notti instead of this threeway

Smog, we just battled... Ih well... lets go 10 bro

yeah thats cool... good luck homie.

Damn duke

U been writin slick shit, n I was baffled ya pen had u gaffle up wins
Then heard u hide deep in the archives,
N knew king or bar'll spot a verse they battled against,
U told Lesnar with that name, a real fights sump'n he ain't been faced wit
But commentate wrestling in every verse.. bitch all u do is talk about that fake shit
Pussy, I'll bash ya dome till u a vegetable, Ull start over tryna hold n feel
U can get mechanical tips from AK.... it still won't help develop ya motor skills
Plus U ain't tappin ya wife right cuz u lackin in size, got ya boo yearnin this D
N after I get it in so deep, Art.... she'll leave u to go on a new journey wit me
Befo I put u in a noose, I'll land hard rights till ya damn skulls shakin
N while he dazed viewin a starry night.. I'll fuckin hang Art like a Van Goh painting

last battle u weren't ready for action nerd stop, 4get ur lines ur in a worse spot
i dont need to tell u I'm going to take 2, since you already fucked up ur first shot
ur name fits u dog and damn its strong, u pollute air waves with waste & pass it on
if u see Smog in China, chances r hes givin out happy endings in back of nail salons
dude nervously spits gun bars shits gay, stop shaking ,ur due for a quick fade
faggot wouldn't be melo with the rockets even if houston and the knicks trade
u dropped audio? lol I've heard it before, ur a forum rapper pushin 4 music rewards
the way u tried to wrap around the net,its only right u get crushed along these boards
@Amen says text is dead, thats how it seems, but ur the 1 to hold down the league
& i agree, i really think you can drive texting, i just hope u wrap ur car around a tree

Smog


U been writin slick shit, n I was baffled ya pen had u gaffle up wins 
Then heard u hide deep in the archives,
N knew king or bar'll spot a verse they battled against,
Cool personal

U told Lesnar with that name, a real fights sump'n he ain't been faced wit
But commentate wrestling in every verse.. bitch all u do is talk about that fake shit
Lol

Pussy, I'll bash ya dome till u a vegetable, Ull start over tryna hold n feel
U can get mechanical tips from AK.... it still won't help develop ya motor skills 
Lmao damn harsh hit

Plus U ain't tappin ya wife right cuz u lackin in size, got ya boo yearnin this D 
N after I get it in so deep, Art.... she'll leave u to go on a new journey wit me
Lmao dope np

Befo I put u in a noose, I'll land hard rights till ya damn skulls shakin
N while he dazed viewin a starry night.. I'll fuckin hang Art like a Van Goh painting
Wording couldve been better

ART

last battle u weren't ready for action nerd stop, 4get ur lines ur in a worse spot
i dont need to tell u I'm going to take 2, since you already fucked up ur first shot
More of a,statement here

ur name fits u dog and damn its strong, u pollute air waves with waste & pass it on
if u see Smog in China, chances r hes givin out happy endings in back of nail salons
Lmfao

dude nervously spits gun bars shits gay, stop shaking ,ur due for a quick fade
faggot wouldn't be melo with the rockets even if houston and the knicks trade 
Dope

u dropped audio? lol I've heard it before, ur a forum rapper pushin 4 music rewards 
the way u tried to wrap around the net,its only right u get crushed along these boards
Played seen this before
@Amen  says text is dead, thats how it seems, but ur the 1 to hold down the league 
& i agree, i really think you can drive texting, i just hope u wrap ur car around a tree
Cool

I felt smog was more creative here pretty consistent. That deepart bar was funny af. Art had 2 miss3s one being played. Smog just had a missed closer. That melo from art was dope tho.

V/Smog more consistent

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Smog

U been writin slick shit, n I was baffled ya pen had u gaffle up wins
Then heard u hide deep in the archives,
N knew king or bar'll spot a verse they battled against,
- Facts, lol. Could have made this harsher tho - worded/executed kind of soft.
U told Lesnar with that name, a real fights sump'n he ain't been faced wit
But commentate wrestling in every verse.. bitch all u do is talk about that fake shit
- Same as above. Creativity lacking but like the personal attempt.
Pussy, I'll bash ya dome till u a vegetable, Ull start over tryna hold n feel
U can get mechanical tips from AK.... it still won't help develop ya motor skills
- This was solid.
Plus U ain't tappin ya wife right cuz u lackin in size, got ya boo yearnin this D
N after I get it in so deep, Art.... she'll leave u to go on a new journey wit me
- Didn't like this.
Befo I put u in a noose, I'll land hard rights till ya damn skulls shakin
N while he dazed viewin a starry night.. I'll fuckin hang Art like a Van Goh painting
- Good.

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Art.

last battle u weren't ready for action nerd stop, 4get ur lines ur in a worse spot
i dont need to tell u I'm going to take 2, since you already fucked up ur first shot
- I used this concept 3 years ago. I believe against UNFUK in LLL. Must have been back in season 15 or 16 as my "Oz" account lol.
ur name fits u dog and damn its strong, u pollute air waves with waste & pass it on
if u see Smog in China, chances r hes givin out happy endings in back of nail salons
- This was ok, lol.
dude nervously spits gun bars shits gay, stop shaking ,ur due for a quick fade
faggot wouldn't be melo with the rockets even if houston and the knicks trade
- Didn't like this.
u dropped audio? lol I've heard it before, ur a forum rapper pushin 4 music rewards
the way u tried to wrap around the net,its only right u get crushed along these boards
- Never heard SMog audios, in fact don't think he has audios so this was wack. Not to mention a played concept used against audio heads.
@Amen says text is dead, thats how it seems, but ur the 1 to hold down the league
& i agree, i really think you can drive texting, i just hope u wrap ur car around a tree
- Ironic you used my name in this bar when this is another one of my concepts. It's a played concept tho - that's been flipped a lot - the whole "You have drive/Wrap around a tree" shit...

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v/Smog got this.

U been writin slick shit, n I was baffled ya pen had u gaffle up wins
Then heard u hide deep in the archives,
N knew king or bar'll spot a verse they battled against,

This was nice, seemed sort of statementish. 4/5
U told Lesnar with that name, a real fights sump'n he ain't been faced wit
But commentate wrestling in every verse.. bitch all u do is talk about that fake shit

I've been here for less than a week and I've seen so many goddamn Lesnar flips... Soon as I see the name Lesnar, ik what's coming. 2/5



Pussy, I'll bash ya dome till u a vegetable, Ull start over tryna hold n feel
U can get mechanical tips from AK.... it still won't help develop ya motor skills

Noice. 5/5

Plus U ain't tappin ya wife right cuz u lackin in size, got ya boo yearnin this D
N after I get it in so deep, Art.... she'll leave u to go on a new journey wit me

Seemed a bit abstract. Fake personals ain't shit either. 2/5

Befo I put u in a noose, I'll land hard rights till ya damn skulls shakin
N while he dazed viewin a starry night.. I'll fuckin hang Art like a Van Goh painting

Nice. 4/5

Art

ast battle u weren't ready for action nerd stop, 4get ur lines ur in a worse spot
i dont need to tell u I'm going to take 2, since you already fucked up ur first shot

Generic, haven't seen it before tho. 3/5

ur name fits u dog and damn its strong, u pollute air waves with waste & pass it on
if u see Smog in China, chances r hes givin out happy endings in back of nail salons

Lol good humor aspect. 3/5

dude nervously spits gun bars shits gay, stop shaking ,ur due for a quick fade
faggot wouldn't be melo with the rockets even if houston and the knicks trade

Generic, but this bar is current and hot. 4/5

u dropped audio? lol I've heard it before, ur a forum rapper pushin 4 music rewards
the way u tried to wrap around the net,its only right u get crushed along these boards

Wrap/rap? Wtf is this shit? 2/5

@Amen says text is dead, thats how it seems, but ur the 1 to hold down the league
& i agree, i really think you can drive texting, i just hope u wrap ur car around a tree

Didn't like this either. "I just hope you" ain't harsh. 2/5

Smog 17 Art 14

Mvgt Smog

Smog

Pussy, I'll bash ya dome till u a vegetable, Ull start over tryna hold n feel
U can get mechanical tips from AK.... it still won't help develop ya motor skills
Plus U ain't tappin ya wife right cuz u lackin in size, got ya boo yearnin this D
N after I get it in so deep, Art.... she'll leave u to go on a new journey wit me
Befo I put u in a noose, I'll land hard rights till ya damn skulls shakin
N while he dazed viewin a starry night.. I'll fuckin hang Art like a Van Goh painting

Vs

Art

ur name fits u dog and damn its strong, u pollute air waves with waste & pass it on
if u see Smog in China, chances r hes givin out happy endings in back of nail salons
dude nervously spits gun bars shits gay, stop shaking ,ur due for a quick fade
faggot wouldn't be melo with the rockets even if houston and the knicks trade


Good showing for this to be the second. Better than the first on Smogs end fs. .
Some decent bars all around around from both but Art had more misses.
V/ Smog 3 bars to 2.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Smog

Damn duke

U been writin slick shit, n I was baffled ya pen had u gaffle up wins
Then heard u hide deep in the archives,
N knew king or bar'll spot a verse they battled against,

☆☆☆ nice personal, i deducted points for length of the 3 bar execution, i love 3 bars but this was a bit prolix

U told Lesnar with that name, a real fights sump'n he ain't been faced wit
But commentate wrestling in every verse.. bitch all u do is talk about that fake shit

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

Pussy, I'll bash ya dome till u a vegetable, Ull start over tryna hold n feel
U can get mechanical tips from AK.... it still won't help develop ya motor skills

☆☆☆☆☆

Plus U ain't tappin ya wife right cuz u lackin in size, got ya boo yearnin this D
N after I get it in so deep, Art.... she'll leave u to go on a new journey wit me

☆ not big on Art nameplays unless they're super creative

Befo I put u in a noose, I'll land hard rights till ya damn skulls shakin
N while he dazed viewin a starry night.. I'll fuckin hang Art like a Van Goh painting

☆ another Art nameplay, have to stay away from those, his name has been flipped in numerous ways

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Art.

last battle u weren't ready for action nerd stop, 4get ur lines ur in a worse spot
i dont need to tell u I'm going to take 2, since you already fucked up ur first shot

☆☆☆☆☆ nice personal

ur name fits u dog and damn its strong, u pollute air waves with waste & pass it on
if u see Smog in China, chances r hes givin out happy endings in back of nail salons

☆ hot flip but Smog nameplays are as tired as Art nameplays

dude nervously spits gun bars shits gay, stop shaking ,ur due for a quick fade
faggot wouldn't be melo with the rockets even if houston and the knicks trade

☆☆☆☆☆

u dropped audio? lol I've heard it before, ur a forum rapper pushin 4 music rewards
the way u tried to wrap around the net,its only right u get crushed along these boards

☆ this has been done alot on audio rappers for years

@Amen says text is dead, thats how it seems, but ur the 1 to hold down the league
& i agree, i really think you can drive texting, i just hope u wrap ur car around a tree

☆☆☆☆☆

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Entertaining battle. Both attempted nameplays on each other that were played, but other than that they were at their best when laying into each other with personaos and creative angles. This ended up being as close as I wanted it to be. I was looking forward to this battle and it didn't disappoint.

v-Art

U been writin slick shit, n I was baffled ya pen had u gaffle up wins
Then heard u hide deep in the archives,
N knew king or bar'll spot a verse they battled against,
execution here is smoooth. but not sure of the personal - has he been accused of some shit in the past? im not familiar with the ins and outs. anyway, it's ok
U told Lesnar with that name, a real fights sump'n he ain't been faced wit
But commentate wrestling in every verse.. bitch all u do is talk about that fake shit
wording could be smoother on the punch, the idea is okay - possibly very played. the relevance almost makes it better
Pussy, I'll bash ya dome till u a vegetable, Ull start over tryna hold n feel
U can get mechanical tips from AK.... it still won't help develop ya motor skills
yoo this is much better. well done. the connection in the set up was smoooth. flip was good. this was hot
Plus U ain't tappin ya wife right cuz u lackin in size, got ya boo yearnin this D
N after I get it in so deep, Art.... she'll leave u to go on a new journey wit me
i get what you were doing. i can't fuck with an Art flip tho. must be done to fucking death
Befo I put u in a noose, I'll land hard rights till ya damn skulls shakin
N while he dazed viewin a starry night.. I'll fuckin hang Art like a Van Goh painting
ok i know i just said Art shit must be done to death BUT i liked the starry nigh/van gogh connection. the art flip itself is secondary - subsequently, i'll let it fly

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last battle u weren't ready for action nerd stop, 4get ur lines ur in a worse spot
i dont need to tell u I'm going to take 2, since you already fucked up ur first shot
simple but it's ok. never seen it before
ur name fits u dog and damn its strong, u pollute air waves with waste & pass it on
if u see Smog in China, chances r hes givin out happy endings in back of nail salons
funny here, not bad
dude nervously spits gun bars shits gay, stop shaking ,ur due for a quick fade
faggot wouldn't be melo with the rockets even if houston and the knicks trade
not fucking with this man. wording was clunky starting with the set up. concept itself wasn't great
u dropped audio? lol I've heard it before, ur a forum rapper pushin 4 music rewards
the way u tried to wrap around the net,its only right u get crushed along these boards
this kind of bar is beyond played man. not sure what you were thinking with this @Amen says text is dead, thats how it seems, but ur the 1 to hold down the league
& i agree, i really think you can drive texting, i just hope u wrap ur car around a tree
nah man played again. anything flipping text battling with text messaging... im not sure if it can be salvaged. this didn't come close imo

overall

both had some cool shit, smog had the starry night and the motor skills. art had the first two couplets. both were considerably even. however, smog attempted to be more creative. i found his concepts to be more risky and less safe - in their creativity and in their execution. it comes down to style preference & i have always favored creativity above all. if we are weighing both guys' best bars again each other - then i think smog edges it out. the way art's verse ended may have swung it the other way. overall, i think smog edged it out

U been writin slick shit, n I was baffled ya pen had u gaffle up wins
Then heard u hide deep in the archives,
N knew king or bar'll spot a verse they battled against,
nice concept could have been worded better
U told Lesnar with that name, a real fights sump'n he ain't been faced wit
But commentate wrestling in every verse.. bitch all u do is talk about that fake shit
nah...
Pussy, I'll bash ya dome till u a vegetable, Ull start over tryna hold n feel
U can get mechanical tips from AK.... it still won't help develop ya motor skills
I fuck w/this
Plus U ain't tappin ya wife right cuz u lackin in size, got ya boo yearnin this D
N after I get it in so deep, Art.... she'll leave u to go on a new journey wit me
nice
Befo I put u in a noose, I'll land hard rights till ya damn skulls shakin
N while he dazed viewin a starry night.. I'll fuckin hang Art like a Van Goh painting
not feeling this

vs

ast battle u weren't ready for action nerd stop, 4get ur lines ur in a worse spot
i dont need to tell u I'm going to take 2, since you already fucked up ur first shot
Nice
ur name fits u dog and damn its strong, u pollute air waves with waste & pass it on
if u see Smog in China, chances r hes givin out happy endings in back of nail salons
no
dude nervously spits gun bars shits gay, stop shaking ,ur due for a quick fade
faggot wouldn't be melo with the rockets even if houston and the knicks trade
nice
u dropped audio? lol I've heard it before, ur a forum rapper pushin 4 music rewards
the way u tried to wrap around the net,its only right u get crushed along these boards
nope...fake personal
@Amen says text is dead, thats how it seems, but ur the 1 to hold down the league
& i agree, i really think you can drive texting, i just hope u wrap ur car around a tree
meeehhhhhh could have been worded better. seemed rushed

Overall.... This was a weak battle. sorry I put yall against eachother again but both verses seemed rushed. I got Smog with more quotables here. So he gets my vote.