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Smfh, after KP taking his 8th loss against CHEMIST. I'm convinced his glory days are officially over.
KS arrived about a year after I did, I'm not actually sure how much other text battling experience he has but he has the ability to win this one with just a decent punch.
@Kill Spree
@KnowP
Nigga you Gay
This nigga wine more than a dying whore, i'll put this bitch in a trunk
Keep acting like a special victim all you want, and Olivia Benson won't find your ass for months
See....
im the ultimate champ to ya wife!The Dick slay ,so I dead her...
The freak always screaming for more belts on her body like Connor mcGregor
Damn really dug p's bar but the "all u want" i felt took sting away from the bar. I didnt like Sprees setup the rhyme scheme was off with the finisher. Both good finishers overall but i like P's better the idea and attempt was better but fix that wording.
V/P
again not overly impressed with either bar.... they both seemed to be lacking any sting or impact and i wouldnt really quote either of these bars or say they were worth mentioning in any case...... but again if i had to choose i think im going go with knowp probably for the same reasons that joe voted for him, because kill sprees set up just was a bit confusing and seemed like his wording was off as well.. so with no further adue......
vote: knowp
Both bars weren't too good. Spree setup killed him. I think if he found a waY to tie it with the McGregor flip it would have been better....know bar was alright. It was a semi creative flip but it's enough to get the vote.
Vote know
wasnt feeling how knowp worded
his bar
it was okay, all u want made it slppy
killing spree was smoother
ok line
mvgt killing spree
kill spree had the far better concept
cept instead of "like" he shoulda used 'than'
decent overall
hated knowp's, stretched n badly worded
v/spree
Know p, ur finisher was waaaaay overworded.
Kill urs was straight, but that reference/concept didn't do it for me.
Know p, as wordy as ur joint was, the concept was solid imo.
Vote kp
Known shot himself with that wordy set up while kill was more consice.....voting spree
Knows was aite...kills was a lil better. Both coulda been a lot better with diff wording
V. Ks
This is tied
Both were decent concepts, and not that impactful as far as executions
I thought KP was more wordy where KS was a smoother read, so that was the deciding factor for me
Vote: KS
v/KS
P has the concepts but I don't remember his bars being this overworded before... Clean that up B.