FrontLine Tourney Round One: Letterman vs Ispaz [Letterman wins 6-0]

10-16 bars
Verses are due By Thursday 12 pm Central
Goodluck Gentlemen make this a good match

Check

yeah

Ext

Ok.

you both have till midnight if no drop then your both dq'd so DROP

I got presidential spits. Talk audio & my boot is stitchin ur tooth
& I bet this Hilary mind you that no one wants a bitch in the booth
He's a creep to chicks. The type to stalk a bitch in a flash
So if we ever see spaz out with a girl, that'll be her reaction before kicking his ass
U got no self esteem. Seeing u down leaves us so swell
Cuz your ego is so deflated, it could boost Tom Brady's morale
Ur girl left, now when u call u get dead lines. So this was sign
No surprise this dick's coming up short, the same reason why your Extenze to be on mine
You'll get rocked by these blows. Back 2 back cuz they're better by bunches
& Anything I sediment, so ill leave u cracked & broken down cuz u cant weather my punches

@iSpaz GET OVER HERRREEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

Quick

I'm deadin foes. You might come close but you should fear what you hear.
Cause this battle might be neck to neck, but I'll still have that blade goin from ear to ear.
Yeah i'm a hater. You'll hear about it later when I start commotion.
I'll hit you so hard your core'll break.. nd spread to the bottom of the ocean.
We got no relation. I've got no motivation for these noobs...
..Cuz I could bewilder lame, either way it's no surprise when I beat you
I'm guarded. You started on your mom's tits but I'll finish that..
..It dont matter how much you sweat it, cause I'll still Under Armour snatch.
You ain't scary. I've knocked heads off visionaries before.
So it's easy for me to break necks.. pop the trunk and dump your corpse.

He's a creep to chicks. The type to stalk a bitch in a flash
So if we ever see spaz out with a girl, that'll be her reaction before kicking his ass
Ur girl left, now when u call u get dead lines. So this was sign
No surprise this dick's coming up short, the same reason why your Extenze to be on mine
You'll get rocked by these blows. Back 2 back cuz they're better by bunches
& Anything I sediment, so ill leave u cracked & broken down cuz u cant weather my punches

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Yeah i'm a hater. You'll hear about it later when I start commotion.
I'll hit you so hard your core'll break.. nd spread to the bottom of the ocean
I'm guarded. You started on your mom's tits but I'll finish that..
..It dont matter how much you sweat it, cause I'll still Under Armour snatch

Decent battle here guys seems lettermans a bit rusty wasn't very harsh tbh few bitch lines nothing really fresh tho, spaz came a bit more direct n creativity was there but I have it at 3-2 in quotables so mvgt letterman

Letterman:
Spaz out:
Brady morale
closer.
pretty good verse. Not too many misses. Good shit. Extenze is played tho

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Spaz
coral
a lot of potential. Most came off kinda stale imo. But lots of potential


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I got presidential spits. Talk audio & my boot is stitchin ur tooth
& I bet this Hilary mind you that no one wants a bitch in the booth
He's a creep to chicks. The type to stalk a bitch in a flash
So if we ever see spaz out with a girl, that'll be her reaction before kicking his ass

Them went hard

U got no self esteem. Seeing u down leaves us so swell
Cuz your ego is so deflated, it could boost Tom Brady's morale

Played concept, aiight'ish though

You'll get rocked by these blows. Back 2 back cuz they're better by bunches
& Anything I sediment, so ill leave u cracked & broken down cuz u cant weather my punches

1. Too wordy 2. Slack delivery 3. Decent though (mostly the word association)

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It's like when some ppl see what they're up against they either outmatched it ( *cough* wreckinEyes)
Or divulge to dropping quick subpar verse... You chose the latter

I'm deadin foes. You might come close but you should fear what you hear.
Cause this battle might be neck to neck, but I'll still have that blade goin from ear to ear.

Aiight... just could've worded more efficiently, like:
Might come close, but I'm more sheer/shear in here... i.e. The shear/blade association

Yeah i'm a hater. You'll hear about it later when I start commotion.
I'll hit you so hard your core'll break.. nd spread to the bottom of the ocean.

Decent wordplay, slack delivery

So in all... You have clever enough wordplays with the others, but... Slack delivery
The setup lines were mostly nah

Mvgt letter for more tough hits & better creativity within them

He's a creep to chicks. The type to stalk a bitch in a flash
So if we ever see spaz out with a girl, that'll be her reaction before kicking his ass
I just did this a week or 2 ago, but you flipped it differently so I'm quoting it.. not bad
You'll get rocked by these blows. Back 2 back cuz they're better by bunches
& Anything I sediment, so ill leave u cracked & broken down cuz u cant weather my punches
This was good

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Yeah i'm a hater. You'll hear about it later when I start commotion.
I'll hit you so hard your core'll break.. nd spread to the bottom of the ocean.
this was a jab

Bewilder doesn't work because of pronunciation
rest just came off weak

Ok battle here, Letterman had some played shit but the two I quoted were decent. Ispaz keyed his verse and it shows here.. I've seen much better from you. with that being said...

v/Letterman

Letter, that opening bar was a fuckin haymaker homie that shit hit hard! Loved the set up and how you worded it. Also the weather my punches play was clever too. You have an original way of executing your punchlines and making them stick. The Spaz out with a girl angle was cool too, you kept real consistent in your verse. Felt like most of them landed with effectiveness.

Spaz, felt like you had nice concepts but didn't word it correctly to land the punch. It does appear you rushed this and didn't take your time as you've done in the past. Some set ups were decent but then the punch felt flat with limited damage.

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spaz out, said i meant

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cor'll(feel like ive seen this before)

spaz really had not much going for him here. had potential but he fell short here. your closer was weakest bar of the battle. letterman has nice set ups with his concepts but he had a few misses.vote letterman