Ispaz vs Bstill[iSpaz Wins]

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Spaz Whole Delivery Sour This Coward Came Here With A Plan
Watch As I Devour His Momentum Like A Fat Kids Hand Stand
We Got A Man DOWN, Spaz Kinda Reminds Me Of A Chick
Cause His Body Starts Convulsing To Avoid Getting His Ass Kicked
Silly Rabbit Cycling RB Must Be a Bad Habit, He's Dead
Im Quick To Sever His Spine, Kick Field Goals With His Head
Send His Mother The Notice Her Baby Boy Is A Bitch
Yea Spaz Beat Mr.Write But Then Again That's About It
Got Bodied By Orc, NO Links U Got Lucky Just Quit Or Better Yet
Tell Em U Had To Hang Up Ur Keyboard U Cant Control Ur Tourettes


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@iSpaz B posted 10.

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You sayin you been in the game. Came out the woodworks like a pest.
This fag still think he a 'Beast'..'ill'.. so it's bout time I put you to sleep like a vet
I'm a grown man with quick hands. And I can't stand him tryin to act scary.
So come at me fancy and B Dead, onlookers be dazzled when I kill this fairy.
Bitches ask me what's the plan, B? Then I bust on em like a poppin weapon.
When bitches tell you to plan B, that's only cuz you gettin sloppy seconds.
I'll throw my hands up. Just to prove he a bitch now.
I got a Meannn Take Down... but this fag still dreamin bout Chris Brown.
Old cat with new tricks? Nah.. just more of the same.
I'll break your fuckin jaw just to give you a way to live up to your name

Dope battle here fellas. Good job on both ends...

BStill, yo bruh...this was nice. Your delivery of each line truly tied together to the set up and punchline. The flow elevated the overall feeling of the verse. The closer was dope and you kept the pressure on the whole verse. I always give props for someone comin hard for the whole battle.

Spaz, you seem like to stanger to writing and constructing a battle verse. You had some cool plays but most felt like jabs. That closer was solid tho, slick wording. Overa no real complaints bout it. Just felt it didnt live up to what BStil dropped, he had the harder hitting barz.

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1 vote received

B - honestly..wasnt feeling anything from your verse. thought you were generic. your personal attempts fell short


spaz - Opener(decent), bedazzle was nice, Closer was light

plan B and chris brown fell short for me. but those were your only misses

Overall - wasnt feeling anything from bstill. spaze had a few nice hits and two misses. one sided battle imo here. spaz takes this for more coneects and better misses

v/spaz

2 votes received

Spaz Whole Delivery Sour This Coward Came Here With A Plan
Watch As I Devour His Momentum Like A Fat Kids Hand Stand
Funny... Isn't hard hitting though, but funny 5/10

We Got A Man DOWN, Spaz Kinda Reminds Me Of A Chick
Cause His Body Starts Convulsing To Avoid Getting His Ass Kicked
A diss bar... These battles need punches unless otherwise suggested 3/10

Silly Rabbit Cycling RB Must Be a Bad Habit, He's Dead
Im Quick To Sever His Spine, Kick Field Goals With His Head
Smooth diss, but still not a punch 5/10

Send His Mother The Notice Her Baby Boy Is A Bitch
Yea Spaz Beat Mr.Write But Then Again That's About It
Aiight with the personal approach, but... Not a punch 5/10

Got Bodied By Orc, NO Links U Got Lucky Just Quit Or Better Yet
Tell Em U Had To Hang Up Ur Keyboard U Cant Control Ur Tourettes
Seems you went for a punch and failed here... Only the personal component is aiight'ish 4/10

Besides not punching, you lacked creativity with your words most of all... Step it up

You sayin you been in the game. Came out the woodworks like a pest.
This fag still think he a 'Beast'..'ill'.. so it's bout time I put you to sleep like a vet
Has a duality quirk, but a decent nameplay 7/10

I'm a grown man with quick hands. And I can't stand him tryin to act scary.
So come at me fancy and B Dead, onlookers be dazzled when I kill this fairy.
That beaded wordplay is clever, but the fairy part is a slack, and you slacked the setup line 7/10

Bitches ask me what's the plan, B? Then I bust on em like a poppin weapon.
When bitches tell you to plan B, that's only cuz you gettin sloppy seconds.
A lil bit above mediocre, again... The setup line aiight, but could be better
Punch could be worded better also 7/10

I'll throw my hands up. Just to prove he a bitch now.
I got a Meannn Take Down... but this fag still dreamin bout Chris Brown.
Smooth concept, but lacked sting in the punchline as a whole 6/10

Old cat with new tricks? Nah.. just more of the same.
I'll break your fuckin jaw just to give you a way to live up to your name
A plain diss bar, but has a 'tiny' bit of creative play on words 5-6/10

You're obviously more skilled on this match at bringing creativity to the bars
Just need to think em through a bit more for cleaner delivery mvgt ispaz

Thought bstil came real generic with nothing hard hitting, that kick field goals with his head was kinda corny cuz it's not really a diss and it's not creative either so it's just blah. Spaz came decent I've seen him drop better before that beast still bstil was alright felt he went a little overkill with all the name plays but he still did enough to take the W in my book. V spaz

4 votes received

Bstill tourettes line was the only half decent bar and all the rest were kind of wack in my opinion.

Spaz, that beast scheme is super played, Plan B scheme was pretty good, Jaw lines pretty good but overall alot of filler.

V/ Spaz
both kind of whack

Spaz Whole Delivery Sour This Coward Came Here With A Plan
Watch As I Devour His Momentum Like A Fat Kids Hand Stand
Decent concept, wording could've been heavier.
We Got A Man DOWN, Spaz Kinda Reminds Me Of A Chick
Cause His Body Starts Convulsing To Avoid Getting His Ass Kicked
Nah, not feeling it.
Silly Rabbit Cycling RB Must Be a Bad Habit, He's Dead
Im Quick To Sever His Spine, Kick Field Goals With His Head
Played as fuck.
Send His Mother The Notice Her Baby Boy Is A Bitch
Yea Spaz Beat Mr.Write But Then Again That's About It
Nah.
Got Bodied By Orc, NO Links U Got Lucky Just Quit Or Better Yet
Tell Em U Had To Hang Up Ur Keyboard U Cant Control Ur Tourettes
Nah nah nah

Lots of played concepts, lots of missed wording. Looks like one decent bar and a lot of rust. Sorry man, wasn't feeling it.

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You sayin you been in the game. Came out the woodworks like a pest.
This fag still think he a 'Beast'..'ill'.. so it's bout time I put you to sleep like a vet
Decent concept, wording could've been cleaner though.
I'm a grown man with quick hands. And I can't stand him tryin to act scary.
So come at me fancy and B Dead, onlookers be dazzled when I kill this fairy.
Decent but kinda played.
Bitches ask me what's the plan, B? Then I bust on em like a poppin weapon.
When bitches tell you to plan B, that's only cuz you gettin sloppy seconds.
Lol, kinda funny.
I'll throw my hands up. Just to prove he a bitch now.
I got a Meannn Take Down... but this fag still dreamin bout Chris Brown.
Nah, not feeling it.
Old cat with new tricks? Nah.. just more of the same.
I'll break your fuckin jaw just to give you a way to live up to your name
No.

Also a lot of played concepts and awkward wording but there were a couple bars that had some impact to them.

vote Spaz for more consistency.