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DaGhost like Eddie Murphy....my word play's Delirious
I get respect from rapbattles cause they know I’m som’n serious
I’m in the fast lane you still movin at a snails pace
I do work in the hood so beef is rarer than raw steak
Nigga make no mistake you can fuck wit my budget
This MC got a HAMMER so nigga you can't touch this
I do my thang all by my lonely spit heat wit every bar
Ya name sounds convincin' but I question the registrar
Revolution?? My nigga I want proof
You lil bitch.. you mo’ pussy than the one that had you
Tra / tray
This dude will get slayed nothing is free so I'll take this Win today
......Ironic he'll be the one getting served, but I'll get the win on a tra
I'm the type of kill a snitch let that be a warning I'm not here to boast
So if you turn on me, pussy....Then you'll really see this trayda ghost
I'm just keying now, your shit is played and you'll lose by a bunch
If u have fresh concepts.. You're just Forcing an addendum punch
Many people won't get the reference, it won't get quoted n that's ok
But I'll take it, cuz after reading your verse they'll think that's all gay
That's wasn't feeding either, just a generic punch to meet the limit
After this killing you could say ghost... Real name no gimmick
Quick key. E-z
DaGhost like Eddie Murphy....my word play's Delirious
I get respect from rapbattles cause they know I’m som’n serious
If ur bragging about wordplay, it might be a good idea to use it in that bar
I’m in the fast lane you still movin at a snails pace
I do work in the hood so beef is rarer than raw steak
Thiis isnt attacking ur opponent
Nigga make no mistake you can fuck wit my budget
This MC got a HAMMER so nigga you can't touch this
ehhh wtf
I do my thang all by my lonely spit heat wit every bar
Ya name sounds convincin' but I question the registrar
nah man
Revolution?? My nigga I want proof
You lil bitch.. you mo’ pussy than the one that had you
that concept was played in the 1800's, and u brought nothing fresh to it to make it good
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This dude will get slayed nothing is free so I'll take this Win today
......Ironic he'll be the one getting served, but I'll get the win on a tra
decent personal
I'm the type of kill a snitch let that be a warning I'm not here to boast
So if you turn on me, pussy....Then you'll really see this trayda ghost
yeah this was decent again
I'm just keying now, your shit is played and you'll lose by a bunch
If u have fresh concepts.. You're just Forcing an addendum punch
heyyy lol.. That punch wasn't forced. Your brains forced. this was ok tho lol
Many people won't get the reference, it won't get quoted n that's ok
But I'll take it, cuz after reading your verse they'll think that's all gay
no
That's wasn't feeding either, just a generic punch to meet the limit
After this killing you could say ghost... Real name no gimmick
nah\\
TraDaGhost, you had a couple ideas that maybe could have had potential. For the most part tho, your verse was lackluster and didn't connect any punches. You've gotta think more outside the box with your concepts. Go read some LLL battles and shit see how a proper punch is formed.
Rev I dunno who the fuck u are but u got this
v/Rev
DaGhost like Eddie Murphy....my word play's Delirious
I get respect from rapbattles cause they know I’m som’n serious
no
I’m in the fast lane you still movin at a snails pace
I do work in the hood so beef is rarer than raw steak
not a diss
Nigga make no mistake you can fuck wit my budget
This MC got a HAMMER so nigga you can't touch this
weak
I do my thang all by my lonely spit heat wit every bar
Ya name sounds convincin' but I question the registrar
no
Revolution?? My nigga I want proof
You lil bitch.. you mo’ pussy than the one that had you
wack
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This dude will get slayed nothing is free so I'll take this Win today
......Ironic he'll be the one getting served, but I'll get the win on a tra
ok
I'm the type of kill a snitch let that be a warning I'm not here to boast
So if you turn on me, pussy....Then you'll really see this trayda ghost
no
I'm just keying now, your shit is played and you'll lose by a bunch
If u have fresh concepts.. You're just Forcing an addendum punch
lmao
Many people won't get the reference, it won't get quoted n that's ok
But I'll take it, cuz after reading your verse they'll think that's all gay
no
That's wasn't feeding either, just a generic punch to meet the limit
After this killing you could say ghost... Real name no gimmick
no wack
I'm just keying now, your shit is played and you'll lose by a bunch
If u have fresh concepts.. You're just Forcing an addendum punch
vs.
nothing
vote - rev
Tre. I get the Eddie Murphy references lol but your verse was more on the freestyle tip. Your concepts were kinda played as far as text battles go. Beef/rare steak/MC Hammer all that stuff is done to death. I'd just suggest reading some other battles around here from established heads and you can see what the punches should be like in your verse.
Rev. You had the better verse here but your concepts were also pretty played. Tre/tra is an old concept, fresh concepts is super played, even tho you added the addendum twist to it. Your traitor bar was pretty the best even though it could've been worded better. You got the feel of how the battle verses should go but your concepts need a little work. Just gotta come fresher with those.
v/Rev
Ghost was all statements which didn't attack his opponent. Should have done wordplay personals current events something, this was a bad first showing.
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Rev had- fresh concepts, other then that you had decent concepts but execution lacked the harshness behind them to make a quote. I feel like you slacked here because of what was infront of you, decent first showing but feel you held back. Hope im right.
Rev obvious reason.
DaGhost like Eddie Murphy....my word play's Delirious
I get respect from rapbattles cause they know I’m som’n serious
-Not a punch
I’m in the fast lane you still movin at a snails pace
I do work in the hood so beef is rarer than raw steak
-Made laugh alil but same comment above
Nigga make no mistake you can fuck wit my budget
This MC got a HAMMER so nigga you can't touch this
-Very corny
I do my thang all by my lonely spit heat wit every bar
Ya name sounds convincin' but I question the registrar
-Not feeling this
Revolution?? My nigga I want proof
You lil bitch.. you mo’ pussy than the one that had you
-Very bad closer
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This dude will get slayed nothing is free so I'll take this Win today
......Ironic he'll be the one getting served, but I'll get the win on a tra
-This was ok
I'm the type of kill a snitch let that be a warning I'm not here to boast
So if you turn on me, pussy....Then you'll really see this trayda ghost
-Think this could have been worded better
I'm just keying now, your shit is played and you'll lose by a bunch
If u have fresh concepts.. You're just Forcing an addendum punch
-Lol cool
Many people won't get the reference, it won't get quoted n that's ok
But I'll take it, cuz after reading your verse they'll think that's all gay
-Nah
That's wasn't feeding either, just a generic punch to meet the limit
After this killing you could say ghost... Real name no gimmick
-Bad closer
My vote-Revolution . Easy clear cat sweep. Tra should focus on using more better and creative punches. Attack his opponent alil more too.
Nothing
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Revolution.
No real punches here, more of a slap boxing contest with hardly any slaps.
Vote - Revolution
@Revolution. wins 6-0, closed.