10 lines due tonight
Good luck
@Greedy$
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10 lines due tonight
Good luck
@Greedy$
I'm tryin to drop within the hour
check
Word check. Ima drop as soon as I can.
Now I’m not a wife beater, but you’ve got so many swings w/ the misses
I’m personally gonna show up at ya house with bars and use em to hit ya bitch n kids with
Greed’ll get you killed quick, my skills sick so I’m sayin fuck a deadly sin
Cause I’ve got 6 ways to kill this schmuck, and 1 for any faggot who actually envies him
Your punches are more like wrist slaps, mine’ll have ya mouth split in two
You’re so hardpressed.. for decent material, I could make a half-decent shelf outta you
I strike fear into the toughest, have this queer little dumbshit opened heartless
I’ll have Hispanic peak so high, it’s like hes getting trampled with brutal Roman charges
I drop ether at every step, leave u seizure ridden w/ cruel punches
Anyone saying histamine… is obviously allergic to hearing crap you just can’t stomach
Ur broke as fuck, live at ur moms crib, and ain't savin up paper
I'd tell you to get ur Kcup, but u'd start brewing up instant coffee, hazelnut flavor
You dingy lookin fag. U reek of trash and a homeless man's greasy ass
If cleanliness is next to godliness, ur on the highway to hell, with an EZ pass
And I invited ur main chick over for naked yoga. So now u know who that thots sextin
Have u beg her like, Namaste, before she comes for a hot stretchin
Ur skinny bitch is just one of many huh? Bet u be pulling hoes and whores
Ur the meaning of Mac in its entirety, till mines leave bullet holes in yours
I'd beat ur ass if I ever saw you. In real life I bash nerds
But u can get this net work free, without a WiFi password
Fresh: Opener was okay felt it couldve been stronger, The deadly sin concept was cool but I feel you couldve done something doper with it, Hardpressed bar was written lazy imo and u used decent twice in the same line, the closer was your best line to me, I feel like you couldve came stronger and kept it less wordy.
Greedy$: K-cup bar was dope, I liked the cleanliness/godliness bar, the Namaste line was a creative idea you couldve executed much better tho, Entire Tee line was solid but the closer wasn't strong it felt like you just put it there to fill up space Imo.
This was a good read but I feel one came stronger and executed much better a rematch would be dope, Prop to both of you... v/ Greed
LOTB
Ur broke as fuck, live at ur moms crib, and ain't savin up paper
I'd tell you to get ur Kcup, but u'd start brewing up instant coffee, hazelnut flavor
I drop ether at every step, leave u seizure ridden w/ cruel punches
Anyone saying histamine… is obviously allergic to hearing crap you just can’t stomach
Vs
Ur broke as fuck, live at ur moms crib, and ain't savin up paper
I'd tell you to get ur Kcup, but u'd start brewing up instant coffee, hazelnut flavor
And I invited ur main chick over for naked yoga. So now u know who that thots sextin
Have u beg her like, Namaste, before she comes for a hot stretchin
V/greedy, this was a decent one, fresh had alot of good ideas but execution wasnt there
really wordy tbh cut some words an u'll be ight, greedy had a solid verse but
cleanliness is next to godliness is played as fuck, the ones i quoted were cool. i think he was
more consistent here, he wins, props to both.
Now I’m not a wife beater, but you’ve got so many swings w/ the misses
I’m personally gonna show up at ya house with bars and use em to hit ya bitch n kids with
Ok lol
Greed’ll get you killed quick, my skills sick so I’m sayin fuck a deadly sin
Cause I’ve got 6 ways to kill this schmuck, and 1 for any faggot who actually envies him
Nah
Your punches are more like wrist slaps, mine’ll have ya mouth split in two
You’re so hardpressed.. for decent material, I could make a half-decent shelf outta you
Lol no
I strike fear into the toughest, have this queer little dumbshit opened heartless
I’ll have Hispanic peak so high, it’s like hes getting trampled with brutal Roman charges
Dope
I drop ether at every step, leave u seizure ridden w/ cruel punches
Anyone saying histamine… is obviously allergic to hearing crap you just can’t stomach
Aight
Vs
Ur broke as fuck, live at ur moms crib, and ain't savin up paper
I'd tell you to get ur Kcup, but u'd start brewing up instant coffee, hazelnut flavor
Lmao
You dingy lookin fag. U reek of trash and a homeless man's greasy ass
If cleanliness is next to godliness, ur on the highway to hell, with an EZ pass
Aight
And I invited ur main chick over for naked yoga. So now u know who that thots sextin
Have u beg her like, Namaste, before she comes for a hot stretchin
Lol
Ur skinny bitch is just one of many huh? Bet u be pulling hoes and whores
Ur the meaning of Mac in its entirety, till mines leave bullet holes in yours
Nah
I'd beat ur ass if I ever saw you. In real life I bash nerds
But u can get this net work free, without a WiFi password
Slight jab.
Overall to me this was a one sided battle and I felt fresh definitely would of came harder then that.. I got Shafi taking this..
Fresh
7 deadly sins cool, could have been harsher.
histamine was tight, i like it
Greedy
Kcup was dope
Namanste was ok
entire te was cool, not sure if i've seen that before.
Overall:Fresh didnt drop bad at all, more like Greedy was a bit more consistent. Nice read fellas.
Vote: Greedy
Upping for one more
Fresh I felt your verse was rushed- wordy. A few words in each bar you could have done without. Nothing to major I don't think u had a bad verse. All your concepts were nice just not executed right. Your opener was cool and closer was my favorite bar although it could have been harsher.
Greeds your opener was dope, namaste was cool. And I liked the entirety hit.
This was decent battle but Greedy's verse was smoother with harder concepts. Close battle actually but I'm giving this to greed
Greedy$ wins 5 - 0