Manic Killer VS golden gramz

aight 10 lines min

Manic Killer new to the board waitin only one battle for his first win scored//
Battlin some fool named golden gramz payin ppl $20 to be his fans//
I land lines that land like land mines i freeze time when i break ryhmes//
Some dude betta dial 911 cuz ima murder this golden son//
Golden Gramz, Gramz Golden time to start battlin and stop holdin//
Yo nuts, cos they're about to drop, 3 inches thats 1 more then yo cock//
Yo better not leave cos u kno i wont stop, until u drop which be any second now//
i leave u standing wondering 'what who how?'//
a mumblin fool bitchin to himself//
wonderin how AIDS will effect his health//
but G, u shood b concerned about me//
Someone better come help this dude hes a wanna be, he wants to be me//
Instead hes trippin like some fool from MTV//
that wont cut it, so please, just leave, go take yo butt and fuck it//

Lets Go~>

Im spittin horrifying lyrics at your face, so radical and intese, with his verse he shouldnt be on rapbattles...he's been **misplaced**...Theres nothing "special" about this "K"(killer), his verse is like the cereal its past its **experation day**... When will he learn that he is biting of more then he can ~chew~... winning this battle for you, is to far away from your *perenphial view*.. you should change your name to manic depression...when this verse posts..~losing will be your profession~ Just start living in reality, this battle is a **Mortal Kombat** and your the casualty....FATALITY**

O-well bout the 10 lines want me to add 3???
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manic, good spit ill punches. grams,what the hell was that? FORMAT THE LINES MORON how canpeople read that? and dont worry bout those three lines, they wont help

VOTE ---> Manic

i think manic took this one, just better punches and rhyme scheme took this one for him

vote -Manik
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manic good spit, grams sort the format of your spits dawg ur lucky ppl even read that shit......... beter punches from manic great shit........
vote: manic

Manic took this one.better flow and better punches.golden's verse was aight but it was a lil choppy and sloppy.and his punches were too weak.

vote-Manic Killer

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yo i got four written vots but only three on the poll? come on up in on some votes!
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manic yall...better shit..fo sho..return the favour...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...whitelightning

This Battle Sucked.........

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I'll Vote Next Time You Both Have Betta Verse's...

break down:

Manic:
vocab: 8
Punches: 8
Metas: 7
Flow: 8

Golden Gramz:
vocab: 8
punches: 7
metas: 7
flow: 6

Overall vote goes to Manic killer... not by much though... return the favor at:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=46007
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=46813
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=46068
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=48810
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=46105
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=46443