Wk 9 CONT MATCH Wordz AhGod vs Packed Graves (Wordz Wins)

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sup.. aiming for 16 homie.

16 is good.

will edit back in once he posts smh.

you cant beat me Carlos, sorry in advance.

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Originally posted by Wordz ahGod.-
lmao.. lil b is that nigga.. dude rhymed exactly 3 times in a whole 16 lines haha..

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been here for almost a decade but for a vet your a joke
the quote above- proves to us why in his eyes, his bars are Technically Dope
your a mod so this will Stick & il teach you- your own lesson
in Frontlines you made some great moves, getting battles to the Closed section
you have been here longer then War so how could it be
your names Wordz ahGod.- yet those are exactly what you follow to the T
got beat by Alvin & honestly to me that fucker was wack
we knew Karp'll tunnel you but reading ya verse made us rather suffer from that
the way you pm & cry about votes, your like a chick son
claim you've never made an alias, then how come no one remembers this one
ya bars sloppy AF, either rushed or meaning nervous
it Maid me wonder how your here when that mess could fund a cleaning service
when your done with the kitchen, start the yard jerk
so when I say thanks for the clean sweep, it's a congratulating your hard work
its a Burden this Pest Controls FL, no1 does any worse
you got handled by Orkin the gauntlet which revealed the bugs in your verse

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Packed Graves vs King

fagg0t your appearance'll bleed- how are people fearing this dweeb
when hes more of a joke then Smog Champing the Lethal Lyricist League

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by King

i think its been damn near every week that dudes have signed out as i'm about to give them contenders matches lol.

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ayo,
look at his desperation to win, fucks he acting trashy for?
bitch Id abandon this Dead Island too if I knew u were its last resort.
Galactic exposed em, so without a bite we doubt u could win
dudes warned me about u. so after I tare u apart I'll throw caution to the wind.
During SAP I was text battle Rocky, u know blood, pain n god flow
Galactic tried his hardest to sun God.. u just kept getting bodied by Apollo.
Pack worries about his kid n fam so he don't share my villainy
forget all that, I'll crush ur esophagus n leave u without response-ability.
if Kwality aint writing, Graves flight won't even gain maturity
Im lifting this league off da ground, G force would propel it into obscurity.
ur son hates his loser dad, he says fuck em he's thru
cos Packed lives in 2nd place.. as documented in his custody suite.
ur streak is fucked from tourneys to leagues lets address the charades dyke
cos if u lose anymore battles, we won't have any respect left for grave sites.
I'll pound ur face in, clueless chump this battle is bound to waste him
dying to champ will get this bitch buried with that make a wish foundation.

your a mod so this will Stick & il teach you- your own lesson
in Frontlines you made some great moves, getting battles to the Closed section
ya bars sloppy AF, either rushed or meaning nervous
it Maid me wonder how your here when that mess could fund a cleaning service
its a Burden this Pest Controls FL, no1 does any worse
you got handled by Orkin the gauntlet which revealed the bugs in your verse

vs

look at his desperation to win, fucks he acting trashy for?
bitch Id abandon this Dead Island too if I knew u were its last resort.
During SAP I was text battle Rocky, u know blood, pain n god flow
Galactic tried his hardest to sun God.. u just kept getting bodied by Apollo.
if Kwality aint writing, Graves flight won't even gain maturity
Im lifting this league off da ground, G force would propel it into obscurity.

Fairly close battle. Both you guys had lines that were quotable if they were based off truth, but the packed punch: god of war/wordz of God was a reach.. And the wordz ahgod punch: 2nd place was a reach so I didn't quote those..

Packed: Opener was a miss.. karp'll tunnel I couldn't get past the wording on that, It came off as forced the way it ran with the sentence. Wasn't feeling alias punch.. and wasn't feeling clean sweep either.

WaG: I couldnt grasp the caution to the wind.. Was it cosh into the wind? I dunno I feel you were going for wordplay but I cuoldn't get it. Wasn't feeling response-ability didn't connect very hard.. wasn't feeling grave sites.. And make a wish wasn't very hard so I didn't quote it.

I have three quotes each but WaG's quote in Bold was solid af and is gonna take the win here imo. Good battle.

v/Wordz

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Originally Posted by Packed Graves

been here for almost a decade but for a vet your a joke
the quote above- proves to us why in his eyes, his bars are Technically Dope

Could have been worded a lot harsher, IMO. As is was kind of soft to me.

your a mod so this will Stick & il teach you- your own lesson
in Frontlines you made some great moves, getting battles to the Closed section

Seen these concepts dropped a lot when mods battle members.

you have been here longer then War so how could it be
your names Wordz ahGod.- yet those are exactly what you follow to the T

I liked this.

got beat by Alvin & honestly to me that fucker was wack
we knew Karp'll tunnel you but reading ya verse made us rather suffer from that

This was forced, IMO. Think you could have still used the WP but executed it differently.

the way you pm & cry about votes, your like a chick son
claim you've never made an alias, then how come no one remembers this one

Seen this concept a lot as well. Barely a fresh enough twist, IMO.

ya bars sloppy AF, either rushed or meaning nervous
it Maid me wonder how your here when that mess could fund a cleaning service

Seen this concept flipped a few times, I guess you had some what of a decent spin on it.

when your done with the kitchen, start the yard jerk
so when I say thanks for the clean sweep, it's a congratulating your hard work

Eh... Stale/bland.

its a Burden this Pest Controls FL, no1 does any worse
you got handled by Orkin the gauntlet which revealed the bugs in your verse

This was cool.

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Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.

look at his desperation to win, fucks he acting trashy for?
bitch Id abandon this Dead Island too if I knew u were its last resort.

I fucks w/ it.

Galactic exposed em, so without a bite we doubt u could win
dudes warned me about u. so after I tare u apart I'll throw caution to the wind.

This was alright.

During SAP I was text battle Rocky, u know blood, pain n god flow
Galactic tried his hardest to sun God.. u just kept getting bodied by Apollo.

Wasn't feelin' this one much.

Pack worries about his kid n fam so he don't share my villainy
forget all that, I'll crush ur esophagus n leave u without response-ability.

Liked the concept, didn't like the execution.

if Kwality aint writing, Graves flight won't even gain maturity
Im lifting this league off da ground, G force would propel it into obscurity.

I fucks w/ it.

ur son hates his loser dad, he says fuck em he's thru
cos Packed lives in 2nd place.. as documented in his custody suite.

Liked the concept but the execution was stupid, IMO. Think you could have did some real damage w/ this one. Had potential.

ur streak is fucked from tourneys to leagues lets address the charades dyke
cos if u lose anymore battles, we won't have any respect left for grave sites.

Played... And you know this, gay faggot.

I'll pound ur face in, clueless chump this battle is bound to waste him
dying to champ will get this bitch buried with that make a wish foundation.

Nah... This was literally a throw away bar that you should have literally threw away.

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OVERALL: Cool battle. I think PG struggled to execute his concepts in a harsh manor which hurt him, IMO. I think Wordz did a pretty decent job with his concepts and only struggled with like 1 or 2 of them, rest were straight. Wordz opener was actually dope, IMO. I liked that Last Resort shit. Props. I can't believe I'm about to do this, but w/e...

v/Wordz

fsdafsd

PG...
your a mod so this will Stick & il teach you- your own lesson
in Frontlines you made some great moves, getting battles to the Closed section
the way you pm & cry about votes, your like a chick son
claim you've never made an alias, then how come no one remembers this one
ya bars sloppy AF, either rushed or meaning nervous
It Maid me wonder how your here when that mess could fund a cleaning service


Vs


Wordz...
look at his desperation to win, fucks he acting trashy for?
bitch Id abandon this Dead Island too if I knew u were its last resort.
Galactic exposed em, so without a bite we doubt u could win
dudes warned me about u. so after I tare u apart I'll throw caution to the wind.
if Kwality aint writing, Graves flight won't even gain maturity
Im lifting this league off da ground, G force would propel it into obscurity.


I got this tied with quotes....misses were equally bad But out of the quotes Wordz had the LOTB and harder punches imo...


V/Wordz Ahgod

Pg..
Opener was iight,great moves was nice,follow to a T was dope,carpal tunnel was iight,alias was nice,just seen the maid concept but urs was better, clean sweep was sorda ok,closer was nice..

Vs..
Wag

Opener was dope af IMO,tear u apart was iight,son god was nice,response ability was ok,g force was hot,2nd place was funny,grave sites was different IMO so it worked, n closer was soft..

This goes down to follow to a t verse g for e n personally like the g force bar better but this battle was hit.. Props for a great read y'all..


Vote wag

uppp

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Originally Posted by Packed Graves

you cant beat me Carlos, sorry in advance.



been here for almost a decade but for a vet your a joke
the quote above- proves to us why in his eyes, his bars are Technically Dope
This wasn't bad. Cool with the quote.
your a mod so this will Stick & il teach you- your own lesson
in Frontlines you made some great moves, getting battles to the Closed section
Lol ok.
you have been here longer then War so how could it be
your names Wordz ahGod.- yet those are exactly what you follow to the T
Concept was ok, wording was off for me.
got beat by Alvin & honestly to me that fucker was wack
we knew Karp'll tunnel you but reading ya verse made us rather suffer from that
Tunnel you? Wasn't really feeling this one.
the way you pm & cry about votes, your like a chick son
claim you've never made an alias, then how come no one remembers this one
Not feeling it.
ya bars sloppy AF, either rushed or meaning nervous
it Maid me wonder how your here when that mess could fund a cleaning service
Nah. Wasn't flipped creatively enough for me to give you credit.
when your done with the kitchen, start the yard jerk
so when I say thanks for the clean sweep, it's a congratulating your hard work
This is kind of played as well, but this was alright.
its a Burden this Pest Controls FL, no1 does any worse
you got handled by Orkin the gauntlet which revealed the bugs in your verse
This was alright. WP was ok, but I feel like you're rushing bro.

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Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.

ayo,
look at his desperation to win, fucks he acting trashy for?
bitch Id abandon this Dead Island too if I knew u were its last resort.
Eh, this is ok.
Galactic exposed em, so without a bite we doubt u could win
dudes warned me about u. so after I tare u apart I'll throw caution to the wind.
Wasn't feeling it.
During SAP I was text battle Rocky, u know blood, pain n god flow
Galactic tried his hardest to sun God.. u just kept getting bodied by Apollo.
This is more of a shot on me.
Pack worries about his kid n fam so he don't share my villainy
forget all that, I'll crush ur esophagus n leave u without response-ability.
I liked this one.
if Kwality aint writing, Graves flight won't even gain maturity
Im lifting this league off da ground, G force would propel it into obscurity.
LOTB.
ur son hates his loser dad, he says fuck em he's thru
cos Packed lives in 2nd place.. as documented in his custody suite.
This was cool.
ur streak is fucked from tourneys to leagues lets address the charades dyke
cos if u lose anymore battles, we won't have any respect left for grave sites.
Ugh. No.
I'll pound ur face in, clueless chump this battle is bound to waste him
dying to champ will get this bitch buried with that make a wish foundation.
Wasn't really feeling this either.

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I've seen better from both of you. Idk Packed, I feel like you've been rushing most of your verses lately. I've seen some dope shit from you and this is not it, homie. Wordz, you came ok with a couple cool lines, but overall I've seen you come better. I thought the G Force line was dope, despite the letter play. That was LOTB for me and the responsibility line was actually kinda cool too. I have Wordz edging this.

V/ Wordz

Packed Graves.

your a mod so this will Stick & il teach you- your own lesson
in Frontlines you made some great moves, getting battles to the Closed section
the way you pm & cry about votes, your like a chick son
claim you've never made an alias, then how come no one remembers this one
ya bars sloppy AF, either rushed or meaning nervous
It Maid me wonder how your here when that mess could fund a cleaning service


Vs


WAG

look at his desperation to win, fucks he acting trashy for?
bitch Id abandon this Dead Island too if I knew u were its last resort.
Galactic exposed em, so without a bite we doubt u could win
dudes warned me about u. so after I tare u apart I'll throw caution to the wind.
if Kwality aint writing, Graves flight won't even gain maturity
Im lifting this league off da ground, G force would propel it into obscurity.

I have WAG taking this, I feel his closer was LOTB in a very close bout. That closer swung it in his favor imo.

v/WAG