12 lines
Due tomorrow
@Amen
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12 lines
Due tomorrow
@Amen
aYo.
bLahhhh... Takes this dude 4 hours to drop garbage... Co'monnnnnn
I role play w/your hoe, givin orders to pleasure me, kid,
He's never liked to Ruler arnd, since the 1st time he measured his dick.
He’s an insecure fag, leaves his chick damaged an hurt,
Arnd’em…
She’s walkin on egg shells, when he gone… Dude’s are scramblin hers.
When comes to readin his battles, voters lack the desire,
We could only hope THIS blowout’s enough to make the faggot retire.
His punches suck, but we alrdy know this fuckin guy is soft,
Wrote your ass off vs Father & he son'd you w/ just enuff to write you off.
Please realize you're garbage, just stop and call it quits,
Our last battle was a clean sweep, now I'll be moppin the floor w/him.
Battlin for 10 yrs an still wack? You were born to suck,
It’s Ironic the Morals he gets & still hasn’t learned how to form a punch.
He’ll msge me “Check this out & PLEASE drop a few tips”,
ADVICE: take the slashes from my 1st & 5th bar & put'em down your wrist.
^ I toss uppercuts & L/R hooks, w/ A force to split wigs,
While all the baby hooks you throw, he’d be a successful Abortion clinic.
16, faggot. ez.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
Lol, @ this cornball. Wow.
Shut the fuck up faggot, due date tomorrow anyways. Also you changed the rules from 12 lines to 16 lines... Arsonal ass mothafucka trying to change shit to make you look good. stfu already
Heres my 16
You get frustrated so easy, and your posts are retarded as can be
I’m well read… After this battle that’ll be just what ya starting to see
Dudes gotta cushy job… But that ain’t tending to levy hope
Cause he’ll need more than that to be defending against these heavy blows
For me this win is a shoo-in, I’m destroying this schmuck
But people do that to you just because you’re annoying as fuck
If anyone’s got ya name in their mouth, its because they’re praying for you
You don’t come a-cross as a threat… So I’ll use it as something to nail you to
Point blank, you’re a faggot… it must be depressing only actin like ya tough
and your punches so weak they couldn’t do that^ to a fucking dandelion fluff
You pretend to be loyal here, but ur posting online n everyone on the net sees
…..Thinks you’re a fucking faggot almost as much as the people boarding at RB
You always have verses written hours before you drop; n ya stuff is a write off
The way you fabricate a reason for losing…
I’d say you and Alphabet were cut from the same clothQuote:
Originally Posted by Alphabet
You’ve tried to start some movements, but no one was budged by it
How do expect people to listen to you…
When you can’t even keep that faggot hush quiet
The TOP.
Lets not all vote at once now, smh...
I role play w/your hoe, givin orders to pleasure me, kid,
He's never liked to Ruler arnd, since the 1st time he measured his dick.
coolish, felt a bit forced but not terrible.
He’ll msge me “Check this out & PLEASE drop a few tips”,
ADVICE: take the slashes from my 1st & 5th bar & put'em down your wrist.
bolding the slashes just for this was corny, this would have worked even without doing that.
^ I toss uppercuts & L/R hooks, w/ A force to split wigs,
While all the baby hooks you throw, he’d be a successful Abortion clinic.
solid verse. a few short misses but not a bad verse.
vs
For me this win is a shoo-in, I’m destroying this schmuck
But people do that to you just because you’re annoying as fuck
not quoting this.. just saying that its a tough concept to write and make look good..the flip didn't work for me.
If anyone’s got ya name in their mouth, its because they’re praying for you
You don’t come a-cross as a threat… So I’ll use it as something to nail you to
pretty good.. take out the "-" next time tho.
You’ve tried to start some movements, but no one was budged by it
How do expect people to listen to you…
When you can’t even keep that faggot hush quiet
cool battle bros.. Amen was more consistent, Fresh had better concept but his execution was ass for the most part..
v/Amen
^ Thanks for the vote and appreciate it but I won't accept it, not explained enough, tbh & am sure @fresh will agree.
@Packed Graves @Galactic @SiK @Killing Spree @Smog @KnowP @Noquear @Whoever else has a battle in FL, fuck.
1-0.
I can't quote from tapatalka without quoting a whole verse... Soooo
the Scrambling hers line was nice
And the form a punch line was on point..
Closer was so so.. Baby hooks kinda soft for a closer
Vs
That fucking annoying line
Some softer punches.. I mean ur good fresh but i like amens multi usage and punches and his verse had an over all flow..
Where yours kept throwing me off the personals I didn't get because I'm new soooo sorry
Vote: Amen
indeed. 2-0 for bitch boyQuote:
Originally Posted by MsPush
Rise.
Votes?
I role play w/your hoe, givin orders to pleasure me, kid,
He's never liked to Ruler arnd, since the 1st time he measured his dick.
ehh opener.
He’s an insecure fag, leaves his chick damaged an hurt,
Arnd’em…
She’s walkin on egg shells, when he gone… Dude’s are scramblin hers.
ok
When comes to readin his battles, voters lack the desire,
We could only hope THIS blowout’s enough to make the faggot retire.
lol
His punches suck, but we alrdy know this fuckin guy is soft,
Wrote your ass off vs Father & he son'd you w/ just enuff to write you off.
came off as a harsh personal statement.
Please realize you're garbage, just stop and call it quits,
Our last battle was a clean sweep, now I'll be moppin the floor w/him.
seen this before
Battlin for 10 yrs an still wack? You were born to suck,
It’s Ironic the Morals he gets & still hasn’t learned how to form a punch.
i liked the concept
He’ll msge me “Check this out & PLEASE drop a few tips”,
ADVICE: take the slashes from my 1st & 5th bar & put'em down your wrist.
ok
^ I toss uppercuts & L/R hooks, w/ A force to split wigs,
While all the baby hooks you throw, he’d be a successful Abortion clinic.
decent closer
vs
You get frustrated so easy, and your posts are retarded as can be
I’m well read… After this battle that’ll be just what ya starting to see
nah...
Dudes gotta cushy job… But that ain’t tending to levy hope
Cause he’ll need more than that to be defending against these heavy blows
nah
For me this win is a shoo-in, I’m destroying this schmuck
But people do that to you just because you’re annoying as fuck
okish i guess...another statement like the first 3
If anyone’s got ya name in their mouth, its because they’re praying for you
You don’t come a-cross as a threat… So I’ll use it as something to nail you to
ur best bar so far, nice flip
Point blank, you’re a faggot… it must be depressing only actin like ya tough
and your punches so weak they couldn’t do that^ to a fucking dandelion fluff
nooo.
You pretend to be loyal here, but ur posting online n everyone on the net sees
…..Thinks you’re a fucking faggot almost as much as the people boarding at RB
stop typing statements god damnit
You always have verses written hours before you drop; n ya stuff is a write off
The way you fabricate a reason for losing…
Quote Originally Posted by Alphabet View Post
Word I'm just waking up man fucking hungover I will try n write I. A bit here
I’d say you and Alphabet were cut from the same cloth
this made me laugh for some reason. prob cuz it was so corny.
You’ve tried to start some movements, but no one was budged by it
How do expect people to listen to you…
When you can’t even keep that faggot hush quiet
this was an alright attempt at wp, but im sure its played and been used before.
This was an alright battle. I think a clear victor was here in amen. he had some nice joints seen him come harder before. fresh some of ur stuff was weak but u had some alright shit. cross line shows u know how to do wp jtry to do that more often n be creative
decent battle
V/Amen