10 lines, due sunday by 12 midnite..house rules, check in as soon as set up.
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10 lines, due sunday by 12 midnite..house rules, check in as soon as set up.
Cmon man, checkin..
screw a checkin it's a fl battle...i'm showin..
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...669/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...687/index.html
here's my links to prove i'm showin'
acceptin' this was a super fail and its beyond any small doubt (cuz)
U think you grew up in superjail the way yo bars is so drawn out
no dick rydin' or hate dude...but your raps are the worse
I wouldn't deck or rate U(but)
it's 2014 N u shouldn't be doing THAT to ya verse!
I decided to just destroy you, all bars so this is ya last turn
cuz dat shit u type in aint even all star if u entering passwords
and you ain't got no guns nigga i can tell this fag not bussin'
if he lettin' caps fly...then...somebody got hit wit a Caps Lock button
u a lame bro u half ass stuntin' gon amount to a whole half of nothin'
even ya past flows redudant......... at least they look nice I guess u had to start at something.
:givesaf:
You blowin on your own cock kid? Well, i'll slap this queer with his loose lips..
Your style is beyond played, go to LLL and ask Obnoxious for some new shit..
Acknowledge destruction I abolish your substance, smash gonna plumit..
You’ve lost your enchantments..You couldn’t have a magic touch if Johnson dunked it..
You came stretched, wrecked, to the extent of cracked chins, i left him with madness..
"You fleein the site after hearing my words" like chicks sayin they're pregnant to black men..
It took a no show in LLL, to get you to check in, fear's in ya bones with the marrow..
Last time you dropped hot shit was laxatives and habaneros..
So you can have a text battle never again when I sever limbs..
Cuz this battles like a PG kids movie, Smash never wins..
upppinnnnn
upppinnnn.
OPEN FOR VOTES
acceptin' this was a super fail and its beyond any small doubt (cuz)
U think you grew up in superjail the way yo bars is so drawn out
ok opener, nothing special.
no dick rydin' or hate dude...but your raps are the worse
I wouldn't deck or rate U(but)
it's 2014 N u shouldn't be doing THAT to ya verse!
ok wordplay, ok hit
I decided to just destroy you, all bars so this is ya last turn
cuz dat shit u type in aint even all star if u entering passwords
ehh bar.
and you ain't got no guns nigga i can tell this fag not bussin'
if he lettin' caps fly...then...somebody got hit wit a Caps Lock button
alright, pretty cool.
u a lame bro u half ass stuntin' gon amount to a whole half of nothin'
even ya past flows redudant......... at least they look nice I guess u had to start at something.
weak closer.
vs
You blowin on your own cock kid? Well, i'll slap this queer with his loose lips..
Your style is beyond played, go to LLL and ask Obnoxious for some new shit..
ehh, basic opener.
Acknowledge destruction I abolish your substance, smash gonna plumit..
You’ve lost your enchantments..You couldn’t have a magic touch if Johnson dunked it..
pretty good
You came stretched, wrecked, to the extent of cracked chins, i left him with madness..
"You fleein the site after hearing my words" like chicks sayin they're pregnant to black men..
ehh, ok i suppose.
It took a no show in LLL, to get you to check in, fear's in ya bones with the marrow..
Last time you dropped hot shit was laxatives and habaneros..
had some humor, alright hit.
So you can have a text battle never again when I sever limbs..
Cuz this battles like a PG kids movie, Smash never wins..
weak closer.
Alright, overall this battle was a close one. Both of you had some alright bars, but others were just ehh/weak. Some of your lines seemed to have choppy flow and the grammar and spelling and shit kinda threw me off in some places, but thats not too big of a deal. punches here were alright, i thought Smash had some creativity on some of his as well as some word play, which helped some of his hits become more effective. Wicked, u had some a couple funny bars, and a couple word plays, but some of your bars were basic man. I've seen better, but overall i got Smash taking this battle. Wicked, your verse in this battle was definitely better than the last verse i saw you drop, u deff got some potential try working on consistency, but this battle i think Smash's wordplay and creativity brought him a victory imo. v/smash
uhmmm..uppppinnn
acceptin' this was a super fail and its beyond any small doubt (cuz)
U think you grew up in superjail the way yo bars is so drawn out
nope
no dick rydin' or hate dude...but your raps are the worse
I wouldn't deck or rate U(but)
it's 2014 N u shouldn't be doing THAT to ya verse!
ehhh ok
I decided to just destroy you, all bars so this is ya last turn
cuz dat shit u type in aint even all star if u entering passwords
ehhhish okish
and you ain't got no guns nigga i can tell this fag not bussin'
if he lettin' caps fly...then...somebody got hit wit a Caps Lock button
no plaayed
u a lame bro u half ass stuntin' gon amount to a whole half of nothin'
even ya past flows redudant......... at least they look nice I guess u had to start at something.
weak statement
vs
You blowin on your own cock kid? Well, i'll slap this queer with his loose lips..
Your style is beyond played, go to LLL and ask Obnoxious for some new shit..
no.
Acknowledge destruction I abolish your substance, smash gonna plumit..
You’ve lost your enchantments..You couldn’t have a magic touch if Johnson dunked it..
nah
You came stretched, wrecked, to the extent of cracked chins, i left him with madness..
"You fleein the site after hearing my words" like chicks sayin they're pregnant to black men..
best attempt so far ok hit
It took a no show in LLL, to get you to check in, fear's in ya bones with the marrow..
Last time you dropped hot shit was laxatives and habaneros..
nah
So you can have a text battle never again when I sever limbs..
Cuz this battles like a PG kids movie, Smash never wins..
what? no
very very poor battle guys, was expecting more espec from u wicked.
smash gets it with like 2 jabs that landed barely okish, wicked only had a jab that wasnt too good and some wtf lines. not executed or worded as good as it could of. poor battle... very boring
V/Smash
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decided to just destroy you, all bars so this is ya last turn
cuz dat shit u type in aint even all star if u entering passwords
vs
You came stretched, wrecked, to the extent of cracked chins, i left him with madness..
"You fleein the site after hearing my words" like chicks sayin they're pregnant to black men..
smash has the creativity and if he puts in work could def be a threat, that deck or rate bar was allright as far as the wp goes but you should've flipped the concept/wording and execution and it couldve been a dope bar. wickeds wording/concept choice is his biggest enemy right now it seems, using words that are irrelevant/ not conducive to the execution or the punch, all though you do have good scheme/multi link up flow.. but still way tooo much playe concept choice.. drop hot shit/poop,habenaro peppers!? noooooooo aha. keep it up both of you but i have smash getting the edge with the fresher concepts and more consistency all around. keep at it, and hit me up if you have any questions/need help
acceptin' this was a super fail and its beyond any small doubt (cuz)
U think you grew up in superjail the way yo bars is so drawn out
mehh}
no dick rydin' or hate dude...but your raps are the worse
I wouldn't deck or rate U(but)
it's 2014 N u shouldn't be doing THAT to ya verse!
[good setup decent bar]t
I decided to just destroy you, all bars so this is ya last turn
cuz dat shit u type in aint even all star if u entering passwords
[no].
and you ain't got no guns nigga i can tell this fag not bussin'
if he lettin' caps fly...then...somebody got hit wit a Caps Lock button
[superrr insanely played bar]
u a lame bro u half ass stuntin' gon amount to a whole half of nothin'
even ya past flows redudant......... at least they look nice I guess u had to start at something.
[weak]
vs
You blowin on your own cock kid? Well, i'll slap this queer with his loose lips..
Your style is beyond played, go to LLL and ask Obnoxious for some new shit..
[lol ok]
Acknowledge destruction I abolish your substance, smash gonna plumit..
You’ve lost your enchantments..You couldn’t have a magic touch if Johnson [decent bar too much filler]
You came stretched, wrecked, to the extent of cracked chins, i left him with madness..
"You fleein the site after hearing my words" like chicks sayin they're pregnant to black men..
[mehhh reachin]
It took a no show in LLL, to get you to check in, fear's in ya bones with the marrow..
Last time you dropped hot shit was laxatives and habaneros..
[no]
So you can have a text battle never again when I sever limbs..
Cuz this battles like a PG kids movie, Smash never wins..
[bad closer]
see potential in both both need more complexity and better wordplay. alot of basic concepts...v/ wicked for fresher concepts