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kind of a random hallway video done p.o.t.s style mostly us being retarded demonstrating to kids why they shouldn't do drugs.
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im liking the scratch intro drums bang hard on the beat!
the vocal mix needs alil work sounds bit to loud for the beat and too reverby but the delivery is dope
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yeah mixing isnt the best on this, need better delivery overall on the first verse and the doubles are loudd,, second verse was better (great lyrics)...third verse was alright too...def needs better mixing cuz it sounds a bit loud and muffled at times, i dunno where the vid shows yas showing kids not to do drugs? lol
The vibe of the song is good an oldschool vibe with the scrathching
The flow is a wierd cadence especially where you rhyme almost sounds like freestyle to me
Voice is good over the beat
The 2nd verse is nice Could be mixed better but the flow is different than most but rides the beat some nice clever lines
It slipped up a bit before the chorus
3rd verse ok on the beat but flow is basic
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