Killa Kami(0-0) vs Mr Wack(0-0) KAMI WINS

LLL Season 15- Week 10

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Knux

Week 10 Battle Previews
Killa Kami(0-0) vs Mr Wack(0-0)

Well it looks like Wack knows what he’s doing, but his concepts come off as basic to me.. He’s def not bad but does need some tweaking for sure.

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basic punches; & u can't get a leg up cause ur set ups are crazy frail.
so i don't have to cramp'n ur style, when ur concepts're tear'n it's ACL.
my pen game's dope, fam trust me; & his penn state is so damn rusty.
i'll get shower'd w/ compliments..while he gets showered w/ sandusky.
dude ain't touch'n my level, attempt & he's fuck'n himself w/o hesitation.
he tried to brush up on his skills..& they'd sue him for sexual molestation.
i ate plenty battle emcees; he's look'n lyrically anorexic battle'n me.
even if he pray'd b4 tryna to eat me, he'd fall from grace like adam & eve.
it's a bummer, see i thought i'd be late so i keyed this under three.
but my rough draft compared to urs feels more like a summer's breeze.

10 match me.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Knux

i'll hit up kami on his site and make sure he shows.. i suggest u come hard as possible :) gluck

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u sound like a rookie, amount to nothing, bound to never be a top cat
Cam Newton's of ways to top the ranks but still remains to drop back
This dude's a homo lovin' mojo, we'll never figure out the cause
and if I end up takin' Knux advice, he'll swallow up the loss...
you'd never get a view on youtube, plus ya rhymes are just digressing
the dopest kids could drop forum, & still be whack from what the netcees
your vocals are out of whack, and what you spit you always mutter
if someone tells you your OK,K.. they just picked up on your studder
i wanna straight up smack a hoe, i asked advice from other kids
they only told me Killa bitch.. i've also heard that from your friends

basic punches; & u can't get a leg up cause ur set ups are crazy frail.
so i don't have to cramp'n ur style, when ur concepts're tear'n it's ACL.
(cool wording but the punch itself was only decent)
my pen game's dope, fam trust me; & his penn state is so damn rusty.
i'll get shower'd w/ compliments..while he gets showered w/ sandusky.
(once again, good wording but kinda done w penn state punches)
dude ain't touch'n my level, attempt & he's fuck'n himself w/o hesitation.
he tried to brush up on his skills..& they'd sue him for sexual molestation.
(nah, seen this too many times)
i ate plenty battle emcees; he's look'n lyrically anorexic battle'n me.
even if he pray'd b4 tryna to eat me, he'd fall from grace like adam & eve.
(cool wording and so so concept again)
it's a bummer, see i thought i'd be late so i keyed this under three.
but my rough draft compared to urs feels more like a summer's breeze.
(heh, ok)

u sound like a rookie, amount to nothing, bound to never be a top cat
Cam Newton's of ways to top the ranks but still remains to drop back
(nah, i dunno)
This dude's a homo lovin' mojo, we'll never figure out the cause
and if I end up takin' Knux advice, he'll swallow up the loss...
(eh, not feeling)
you'd never get a view on youtube, plus ya rhymes are just digressing
the dopest kids could drop forum, & still be whack from what the netcees
(think you could've done a lot more with this, not working like this)
your vocals are out of whack, and what you spit you always mutter
if someone tells you your OK,K.. they just picked up on your studder
(eh, not a bad concept but doesn't come off as a diss that well)
i wanna straight up smack a hoe, i asked advice from other kids
they only told me Killa bitch.. i've also heard that from your friends
(too easy, not bad though)


i dunno - killa kami has some of my fav. wording in this league, a lot of extra style, but the concepts weren't really there for me in this verse. mr wack could've taken this but came too short, one dope punch would've done it

v- kami

i ate plenty battle emcees; he's look'n lyrically anorexic battle'n me.
even if he pray'd b4 tryna to eat me, he'd fall from grace like adam & eve.

vs

u sound like a rookie, amount to nothing, bound to never be a top cat
Cam Newton's of ways to top the ranks but still remains to drop back
This dude's a homo lovin' mojo, we'll never figure out the cause
and if I end up takin' Knux advice, he'll swallow up the loss...

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Cool battle here, nothing spectacular from neither. I felt Kami came with some bland concepts in his verse, however he did have cool wording. He also had some played shit too, like the penn state & draft/breeze line. Wack didn't really have anything dope neither, but i thought the cam newton punch was decent and the flip on the quote was decent too. He edged this one here.

V/ Mr. Wack

basic punches; & u can't get a leg up cause ur set ups are crazy frail.
so i don't have to cramp'n ur style, when ur concepts're tear'n it's ACL.
okish
my pen game's dope, fam trust me; & his penn state is so damn rusty.
i'll get shower'd w/ compliments..while he gets showered w/ sandusky.
okish
dude ain't touch'n my level, attempt & he's fuck'n himself w/o hesitation.
he tried to brush up on his skills..& they'd sue him for sexual molestation.
Coulda been set up better, kinda comes off as basic.
i ate plenty battle emcees; he's look'n lyrically anorexic battle'n me.
even if he pray'd b4 tryna to eat me, he'd fall from grace like adam & eve.
I liked this..
it's a bummer, see i thought i'd be late so i keyed this under three.
but my rough draft compared to urs feels more like a summer's breeze.
decent

v


u sound like a rookie, amount to nothing, bound to never be a top cat
Cam Newton's of ways to top the ranks but still remains to drop back
wording was messy cool attempt though
This dude's a homo lovin' mojo, we'll never figure out the cause
and if I end up takin' Knux advice, he'll swallow up the loss...
meh
you'd never get a view on youtube, plus ya rhymes are just digressing
the dopest kids could drop forum, & still be whack from what the netcees
wordings off again fam, cool attempt though
your vocals are out of whack, and what you spit you always mutter
if someone tells you your OK,K.. they just picked up on your studder
I liked this lol
i wanna straight up smack a hoe, i asked advice from other kids
they only told me Killa bitch.. i've also heard that from your friends
okish


Wack did OK, some good ideas but poor delivery.. Killa had some OK concepts with pretty much spot on wording and thus made his hits hit harder..

V - Killa

basic punches; & u can't get a leg up cause ur set ups are crazy frail.
so i don't have to cramp'n ur style, when ur concepts're tear'n it's ACL.

vs

nothing

both dropped a lot of played shit, which is why i was so harsh with the quoted lines. played concepts aside i thought u both had decent wording and some ok flips so i'm sure u'll both do well in the league. this one goes to Kami

vote Kami

basic punches; & u can't get a leg up cause ur set ups are crazy frail.
so i don't have to cramp'n ur style, when ur concepts're tear'n it's ACL.
i ate plenty battle emcees; he's look'n lyrically anorexic battle'n me.
even if he pray'd b4 tryna to eat me, he'd fall from grace like adam & eve.

vs

u sound like a rookie, amount to nothing, bound to never be a top cat
Cam Newton's of ways to top the ranks but still remains to drop back


Nothing great here. Kami's wording saved him.

v/Kami

basic punches; & u can't get a leg up cause ur set ups are crazy frail.
so i don't have to cramp'n ur style, when ur concepts're tear'n it's ACL.
I'm not as keen on this one as others seem to be. The concept seems ok but it was really awkward to read to me. And i wished you'd just written the ares, ens and ings, because this was like Apostrophlypse Now.
my pen game's dope, fam trust me; & his penn state is so damn rusty.
i'll get shower'd w/ compliments..while he gets showered w/ sandusky.
Seen a lot of Sandusky lines but this one was done smoothly the setup had that extra little penn state flip. I like the little stuff like that.
dude ain't touch'n my level, attempt & he's fuck'n himself w/o hesitation.
he tried to brush up on his skills..& they'd sue him for sexual molestation.
Executed pretty decently but it felt too familiar for me to really go for it man
i ate plenty battle emcees; he's look'n lyrically anorexic battle'n me.
even if he pray'd b4 tryna to eat me, he'd fall from grace like adam & eve.
lol bizarre ass concept to flip. Not too hard but it made me laugh so I'm cool with this
it's a bummer, see i thought i'd be late so i keyed this under three.
but my rough draft compared to urs feels more like a summer's breeze.
I've seen rough draft flipped this way a couple times. Wording's smooth again but it would have needed something extra and fresh mixed in with it for this to stick with me


vs


u sound like a rookie, amount to nothing, bound to never be a top cat
Cam Newton's of ways to top the ranks but still remains to drop back
Creative, which is a big plus, but the wording was awkward and it took shine off the concept
This dude's a homo lovin' mojo, we'll never figure out the cause
and if I end up takin' Knux advice, he'll swallow up the loss...
sort of the opposite of the above, the wording was smooth and clear here, but I didn't really like the concept
you'd never get a view on youtube, plus ya rhymes are just digressing
the dopest kids could drop forum, & still be whack from what the netcees
I've seen a few forum flips and this netcees flip must surely be played. Wording on the w/p was kinda off again too. I liked that you went for some complexity by working in two flips though
your vocals are out of whack, and what you spit you always mutter
if someone tells you your OK,K.. they just picked up on your studder
I just didn't really like this one man
i wanna straight up smack a hoe, i asked advice from other kids
they only told me Killa bitch.. i've also heard that from your friends
I wasn't really in to this one either, it was plain to me


Kami wasn't always fresh but was more polished and consistent, he took this by a distance imo. Mr Wack had a couple of concepts with promise, I think he needs to give his wording a boost though.

V/Kami

killa

basic punches; & u can't get a leg up cause ur set ups are crazy frail.
so i don't have to cramp'n ur style, when ur concepts're tear'n it's ACL.
thought the wording here was on point and the concept on the finisher was pretty creative

my pen game's dope, fam trust me; & his penn state is so damn rusty.
i'll get shower'd w/ compliments..while he gets showered w/ sandusky.
lmfao alot of people been using this sandusky concept but i gotta say i like the way u set this up and finished it lmao

dude ain't touch'n my level, attempt & he's fuck'n himself w/o hesitation.
he tried to brush up on his skills..& they'd sue him for sexual molestation.
nah didnt really like the reference too the finisher

i ate plenty battle emcees; he's look'n lyrically anorexic battle'n me.
even if he pray'd b4 tryna to eat me, he'd fall from grace like adam & eve.
didnt feel hit hard to me

it's a bummer, see i thought i'd be late so i keyed this under three.
but my rough draft compared to urs feels more like a summer's breeze.
nah not hard hitting

MR WACK

u sound like a rookie, amount to nothing, bound to never be a top cat
Cam Newton's of ways to top the ranks but still remains to drop back
gotta agree with the wording but creative concept

This dude's a homo lovin' mojo, we'll never figure out the cause
and if I end up takin' Knux advice, he'll swallow up the loss...
i wasnt feeling how u was putting the finisher in relevance to urself how u started the finisher took sting off the punch


you'd never get a view on youtube, plus ya rhymes are just digressing
the dopest kids could drop forum, & still be whack from what the netcees
i seen the wp in the finisher expressed before but not that bad what u did here


your vocals are out of whack, and what you spit you always mutter
if someone tells you your OK,K.. they just picked up on your studder
didnt really finisher was creative with the reference u chosed


i wanna straight up smack a hoe, i asked advice from other kids
they only told me Killa bitch.. i've also heard that from your friends
gotta say too basic with the np reference

well i dont really know kami but he had a couple concepts that were pretty good and the wording made them hit better he kinda fell off after that. Mr wack also had a couple concepts that were ok but in this wording did affect him alot and also just basic creativity on his last two bars hurt him as well.

V/Kam thought the two concepts he had were worded alot better and he edged this out with those hits.

basic punches; & u can't get a leg up cause ur set ups are crazy frail.
so i don't have to cramp'n ur style, when ur concepts're tear'n it's ACL.
i ate plenty battle emcees; he's look'n lyrically anorexic battle'n me.
even if he pray'd b4 tryna to eat me, he'd fall from grace like adam & eve.

that adam n eve line was cleverr as hell.

vs.

your vocals are out of whack, and what you spit you always mutter
if someone tells you your OK,K.. they just picked up on your studder

lmao^ok

i got kami takin this one.. i didnt see much from mr wack even though his concepts were cool , but i didnt like the way it came off, n i wasnt feelin the cam newton line.

v-kam

basic punches; & u can't get a leg up cause ur set ups are crazy frail.
so i don't have to cramp'n ur style, when ur concepts're tear'n it's ACL.
dude ain't touch'n my level, attempt & he's fuck'n himself w/o hesitation.
he tried to brush up on his skills..& they'd sue him for sexual molestation.

vs

u sound like a rookie, amount to nothing, bound to never be a top cat
Cam Newton's of ways to top the ranks but still remains to drop back

nothing great here, but Kami's wording gave him the win... Wack isn't wack, just a bad matchup for him...

vote Kami

Kami Wins