Knux(7-2) vs Alphabet(5-1) KNUX WINS

LLL Season 15- Week 10

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Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
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Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

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u fucks w/ horse tranqs..i fuck w/ a horse dank.girls think ur awful rookie.
so if a bitch thinks ur special, K..u drugged the slut w/ that to cop some pussy.
u hold no weight w/ bars & u'd snitch in a heart beat u broke geek.
ur punches are such statements u could be a confidential informant for the police.
u mirrored tokens style completely,bit it hard so remember this bitch.
even w/ him helpin u word bars to get quotes...they are just a reflection of his.
n don't claim to pimp. even w/ nasty fat hoes u can't get ya dick sucked.
only time u'll find knux in a bitch is in porno when the sluts being fist fucked.
ur predictable w/ creativity,it's lacking wit.ur name play is shit/stupid.
u'll break apart alphabet so much u'll be arrested for driving under the influence.
& it's funny how u claim to cop the crown. thats absurd and stupid.
cause the way king made such light work of u it's like he made his servants do it.

Alphabet aka Hank McCoy

Quote:

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Originally Posted by The Archetype

This was pm'd to me...

and it's Hank McCoy.... i'm pretty sure he was banned for biting before... maybe more than once... so it wouldn't be a coincidence

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Battling me at 5-1? Lol… should develop fast feet cuz I smash streaks
How’d u getta contenders match when the only Al deserving signed out LAST WEEK
Dudes accused of treason..ur a biter McCoy, who’s behind your new free’s son?
Cuz the way everyones got a hand in Hanky’s you’d think it was fuckin flu season
Never squeezin.. pack burners? Nah ura drug addict slob, bet ur wardrobes appalling whore
So come to this battle armed to the teeth …
…………and it’ll take 1 clothesline for mine to knockout all of yours
Striving for greatness, this biter wana be HOF’d but your inventions aint really you
Don’t worry kid.. when you think about it, practically every bar you drop is legends’ material
Nobodys fearin u, you’re so bad I should battle w/ a handicap..we’re cool but don’t jump the gun
& I could of not voted last week just to give Alleyway...
…………………but the result woulda STILL left him slumped in one

Quote:

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Newbie Tourny Finals on NC

Methodical T vs Alphabet

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Smh..
Ura pushover, and even u consider urself a rookie so I’m thru goring, this dudes boring
But how cud I talk shit cuz your really top notch competition……..ina FUCKING NOOB TOURNY

12.

u fucks w/ horse tranqs..i fuck w/ a horse dank.girls think ur awful rookie.
so if a bitch thinks ur special, K..u drugged the slut w/ that to cop some pussy.
n don't claim to pimp. even w/ nasty fat hoes u can't get ya dick sucked.
only time u'll find knux in a bitch is in porno when the sluts being fist fucked.

vs

Dudes accused of treason..ur a biter McCoy, who’s behind your new free’s son?
Cuz the way everyones got a hand in Hanky’s you’d think it was fuckin flu season
Nobodys fearin u, you’re so bad I should battle w/ a handicap..we’re cool but don’t jump the gun
& I could of not voted last week just to give Alleyway...
…………………but the result woulda STILL left him slumped in one

This was actually pretty close. I think it was even as far as standout lines. However, Alpha's misses were worse than Knux's.


v/Knux

alphabet

u fucks w/ horse tranqs..i fuck w/ a horse dank.girls think ur awful rookie.
so if a bitch thinks ur special, K..u drugged the slut w/ that to cop some pussy.
lmao setup was pretty funny reference was funny and i like the special k np and also the refernce

u hold no weight w/ bars & u'd snitch in a heart beat u broke geek.
ur punches are such statements u could be a confidential informant for the police.
i thought the finisher concept was creative on the metaphore part but wording hurt a bit


u mirrored tokens style completely,bit it hard so remember this bitch.
even w/ him helpin u word bars to get quotes...they are just a reflection of his.
ok little personal hit

n don't claim to pimp. even w/ nasty fat hoes u can't get ya dick sucked.
only time u'll find knux in a bitch is in porno when the sluts being fist fucked.
lmfao this was a funny ass reference with the np

ur predictable w/ creativity,it's lacking wit.ur name play is shit/stupid.
u'll break apart alphabet so much u'll be arrested for driving under the influence.
nah really didnt hit hard for me

& it's funny how u claim to cop the crown. thats absurd and stupid.
cause the way king made such light work of u it's like he made his servants do it.
nice good personal and also like the king reference


knux

Battling me at 5-1? Lol… should develop fast feet cuz I smash streaks
How’d u getta contenders match when the only Al deserving signed out LAST WEEK
see that u attempted the personal but i felt the wording on finisher coulda been better

Dudes accused of treason..ur a biter McCoy, who’s behind your new free’s son?
Cuz the way everyones got a hand in Hanky’s you’d think it was fuckin flu season
lmao this was a pretty cool reference and metaphore along with the personal


Never squeezin.. pack burners? Nah ura drug addict slob, bet ur wardrobes appalling whore
So come to this battle armed to the teeth …
…………and it’ll take 1 clothesline for mine to knockout all of yours
this was pretty direct just didnt like the setup wording


Striving for greatness, this biter wana be HOF’d but your inventions aint really you
Don’t worry kid.. when you think about it, practically every bar you drop is legends’ material
ok rhyming was off here and felt finisher didnt hit hard

Nobodys fearin u, you’re so bad I should battle w/ a handicap..we’re cool but don’t jump the gun
& I could of not voted last week just to give Alleyway...
…………………but the result woulda STILL left him slumped in one
ok this was a cool and creative concept to reference on the personal

well i seen both have better hits in battles few misses here. i felt knux's wording hurt him in places but he came with a couple personal references and creative. alphabet had some creative hits with the np and his closer was nice.
well when it comes down to it i gotta say alphabet had the better hits even though knux came personal on this but his wording hurt him in places. i just liked alphabets overall creativity on np flips better and like i said his closer was good.

V/alphabet

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u fucks w/ horse tranqs..i fuck w/ a horse dank.girls think ur awful rookie.
so if a bitch thinks ur special, K..u drugged the slut w/ that to cop some pussy.
hmm, pretty cool
u hold no weight w/ bars & u'd snitch in a heart beat u broke geek.
ur punches are such statements u could be a confidential informant for the police.
decent
u mirrored tokens style completely,bit it hard so remember this bitch.
even w/ him helpin u word bars to get quotes...they are just a reflection of his.
wasnt bad, i see how u flipped it diff, but really tired of Quote/Token punches tbh
n don't claim to pimp. even w/ nasty fat hoes u can't get ya dick sucked.
only time u'll find knux in a bitch is in porno when the sluts being fist fucked.
wording butchered this for me, you overworded the shit outt this, imo
ur predictable w/ creativity,it's lacking wit.ur name play is shit/stupid.
u'll break apart alphabet so much u'll be arrested for driving under the influence.
nah
& it's funny how u claim to cop the crown. thats absurd and stupid.
cause the way king made such light work of u it's like he made his servants do it.
bleh

vs

Battling me at 5-1? Lol… should develop fast feet cuz I smash streaks
How’d u getta contenders match when the only Al deserving signed out LAST WEEK
eh, decent
Dudes accused of treason..ur a biter McCoy, who’s behind your new free’s son?
Cuz the way everyones got a hand in Hanky’s you’d think it was fuckin flu season
cool
Never squeezin.. pack burners? Nah ura drug addict slob, bet ur wardrobes appalling whore
So come to this battle armed to the teeth …
…………and it’ll take 1 clothesline for mine to knockout all of yours
liked it
Striving for greatness, this biter wana be HOF’d but your inventions aint really you
Don’t worry kid.. when you think about it, practically every bar you drop is legends’ material
lol... my Hens, Kung, and Resin punch was better though ;)
Nobodys fearin u, you’re so bad I should battle w/ a handicap..we’re cool but don’t jump the gun
& I could of not voted last week just to give Alleyway...
…………………but the result woulda STILL left him slumped in one
rofl
Ura pushover, and even u consider urself a rookie so I’m thru goring, this dudes boring
But how cud I talk shit cuz your really top notch competition……..ina FUCKING NOOB TOURNY
I know its bullshit, this assholes costing me a title. lol

Overall just had Knux with better hits. Kind of decently close, but theres a clear winner, imo.

u fucks w/ horse tranqs..i fuck w/ a horse dank.girls think ur awful rookie.
so if a bitch thinks ur special, K..u drugged the slut w/ that to cop some pussy.
decent
u hold no weight w/ bars & u'd snitch in a heart beat u broke geek.
ur punches are such statements u could be a confidential informant for the police.
okish
u mirrored tokens style completely,bit it hard so remember this bitch.
even w/ him helpin u word bars to get quotes...they are just a reflection of his.
decent
n don't claim to pimp. even w/ nasty fat hoes u can't get ya dick sucked.
only time u'll find knux in a bitch is in porno when the sluts being fist fucked.
played
ur predictable w/ creativity,it's lacking wit.ur name play is shit/stupid.
u'll break apart alphabet so much u'll be arrested for driving under the influence.
worded poorly
& it's funny how u claim to cop the crown. thats absurd and stupid.
cause the way king made such light work of u it's like he made his servants do it.
Okish, could have been worded stronger

v


Battling me at 5-1? Lol… should develop fast feet cuz I smash streaks
How’d u getta contenders match when the only Al deserving signed out LAST WEEK
okish
Dudes accused of treason..ur a biter McCoy, who’s behind your new free’s son?
Cuz the way everyones got a hand in Hanky’s you’d think it was fuckin flu season
cool
Never squeezin.. pack burners? Nah ura drug addict slob, bet ur wardrobes appalling whore
So come to this battle armed to the teeth …
…………and it’ll take 1 clothesline for mine to knockout all of yours
creative. but mad stretched
Striving for greatness, this biter wana be HOF’d but your inventions aint really you
Don’t worry kid.. when you think about it, practically every bar you drop is legends’ material
seen this kinda thing before/played
Nobodys fearin u, you’re so bad I should battle w/ a handicap..we’re cool but don’t jump the gun
& I could of not voted last week just to give Alleyway...
…………………but the result woulda STILL left him slumped in one
Man Idk why you had to stretch this so bad, dope bar but you turned it into almost 4 lines lol
Ura pushover, and even u consider urself a rookie so I’m thru goring, this dudes boring
But how cud I talk shit cuz your really top notch competition……..ina FUCKING NOOB TOURNY
bleh


Well even though knux stretched a couple of lines like a mother fucker he still came more correct.. better concepts more creativity and wit.. Alph did aight but didn't really drop anything crazy here I got knux winning by a small margin.

V - Knux

u fucks w/ horse tranqs..i fuck w/ a horse dank.girls think ur awful rookie.
so if a bitch thinks ur special, K..u drugged the slut w/ that to cop some pussy.
(eh, okay)
u hold no weight w/ bars & u'd snitch in a heart beat u broke geek.
ur punches are such statements u could be a confidential informant for the police.
(not bad, pretty cool)
u mirrored tokens style completely,bit it hard so remember this bitch.
even w/ him helpin u word bars to get quotes...they are just a reflection of his.
(not bad again, kinda blandish though)
n don't claim to pimp. even w/ nasty fat hoes u can't get ya dick sucked.
only time u'll find knux in a bitch is in porno when the sluts being fist fucked.
(seen it but not bad)
ur predictable w/ creativity,it's lacking wit.ur name play is shit/stupid.
u'll break apart alphabet so much u'll be arrested for driving under the influence.
(heh, okay)
& it's funny how u claim to cop the crown. thats absurd and stupid.
cause the way king made such light work of u it's like he made his servants do it.
(i dunno, good but not the best closer)


Battling me at 5-1? Lol… should develop fast feet cuz I smash streaks
How’d u getta contenders match when the only Al deserving signed out LAST WEEK
(alright)
Dudes accused of treason..ur a biter McCoy, who’s behind your new free’s son?
Cuz the way everyones got a hand in Hanky’s you’d think it was fuckin flu season
(heh, cool)
Never squeezin.. pack burners? Nah ura drug addict slob, bet ur wardrobes appalling whore
So come to this battle armed to the teeth …
…………and it’ll take 1 clothesline for mine to knockout all of yours
(pretty creative)
Striving for greatness, this biter wana be HOF’d but your inventions aint really you
Don’t worry kid.. when you think about it, practically every bar you drop is legends’ material
(eh, nah, played)
Nobodys fearin u, you’re so bad I should battle w/ a handicap..we’re cool but don’t jump the gun
& I could of not voted last week just to give Alleyway...
…………………but the result woulda STILL left him slumped in one
(heh, not bad)
Ura pushover, and even u consider urself a rookie so I’m thru goring, this dudes boring
But how cud I talk shit cuz your really top notch competition……..ina FUCKING NOOB TOURNY
(nah)


looks like knux went a little harder, i dont mind the long bar thing - alpha wasn't bad but he played it a little safe, didn't have as much flavor

v- knux

u mirrored tokens style completely,bit it hard so remember this bitch.
even w/ him helpin u word bars to get quotes...they are just a reflection of his.

ouch^

vs.

Dudes accused of treason..ur a biter McCoy, who’s behind your new free’s son?
Cuz the way everyones got a hand in Hanky’s you’d think it was fuckin flu season
Never squeezin.. pack burners? Nah ura drug addict slob, bet ur wardrobes appalling whore
So come to this battle armed to the teeth …
…………and it’ll take 1 clothesline for mine to knockout all of yours

haha ^.


in all honesty i almosted voted for alph cuz of that quote line he did , but knux pulled it out with 2 bars which i thought the clothelines line was pretty cool. if alph wudda had 1 more bar he wudda had my vote.

v-knux

ur predictable w/ creativity,it's lacking wit.ur name play is shit/stupid.
u'll break apart alphabet so much u'll be arrested for driving under the influence.

vs

Dudes accused of treason..ur a biter McCoy, who’s behind your new free’s son?
Cuz the way everyones got a hand in Hanky’s you’d think it was fuckin flu season

these are the standout lines... i'm not saying y'all dropped wack, but nothing was a haymaker... Hank had a bunch of old shit... the fisting flip, i've used and seen special k a few times and his wording wasn't as crisp... Knux stretched the fuck out of a couple of punches but his misses were better overall...

ur predictable w/ creativity,it's lacking wit.ur name play is shit/stupid.
u'll break apart alphabet so much u'll be arrested for driving under the influence.

vs

Dudes accused of treason..ur a biter McCoy, who’s behind your new free’s son?
Cuz the way everyones got a hand in Hanky’s you’d think it was fuckin flu season


OVERALL:

Knux straight up went back to longbar style.... and then some jp lol, couple of those bars could have really hit if they weren't stretched, overall a decent showing and enough to win this battle, Alpha just didn't quite match up bar for bar through out, wasn't a blow out, but felt knux took it..


VOTE: KNUX

n don't claim to pimp. even w/ nasty fat hoes u can't get ya dick sucked.
only time u'll find knux in a bitch is in porno when the sluts being fist fucked.

vs

Dudes accused of treason..ur a biter McCoy, who’s behind your new free’s son?
Cuz the way everyones got a hand in Hanky’s you’d think it was fuckin flu season
Never squeezin.. pack burners? Nah ura drug addict slob, bet ur wardrobes appalling whore
So come to this battle armed to the teeth …
…………and it’ll take 1 clothesline for mine to knockout all of yours


Alpha's best bars here were unfortunately a bit played - special K, and apparently this fist fuck one (although I've not seen it at least so I decided to quote that one). A couple of his other bars the wording let his concepts down. Reflection of Token and Break Alphabet particularly. The former didn't feel like a strong diss, and the latter almost read like a punch against yourself. It wasn't, thanks to the setup, but the punchline read like that.

I've seen Knux come better and some his stuff was certainly lengthy but he had the freshness to take it. Hanky line was cool, armed to teeth worked for me too. Noob tourny was cheesy though and the caps almost made it seem like a joke punch lol. Sort it out Knux lmao.

But yeah, V/Knux