Singer named Adillyah

Adillyah is the bestest R&B artist ever,
She famous for singer in Hollywood.
Everywhere she go people recornize her as Hollywood star,
Jose call Adillyah told her come sing on stage.
so she came to Miss Hollywood stage to sing songs,
People loves when she sing I'm a star.
that song became popular,
Producers say that she should promote this song,
Adillyah went to studio to sing I'm a star through beat.
They Nominate her for new female artist,
She was excited when she won award.

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Felt like you added no detail or depth into this story. You just rushed it. I wouldn't really consider this a story to be honest with you. Next time if you want to write a GOOD story, remember you need a conflict a climax and a resolution.

Story diddent have much flow to it, Remember a story should have a nucleus that holds it all together. Other then that nice try..

Keep getting up !