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This tool thinks he’s apart of the big boys but nobody will let him ghost write
Punches that’re invisible or don’t exist... well that correlates to all of his lines
He fancies men with big bodies... the types that make his love fallen
Trash talks for role play before sex....and blowin’ things outta proportion
RPK loves receivin’ post cards and pics from friends, so excited so he inhales
Now we all know how he reacts in the presence of receivin’ males
This fool got a battle against Mankind and still couldn’t prevail
I bet he couldnt even punch a human unless it was a bitch with a tail
Bury him underground that makes me god cause im fulfilling peoples wish
But it pretty much already happened the way no one knows that he exists
Nothing you do matters to your crew, like whether or not you beat me
cause they don't care what Vinyl* do....... with a group name like CD
Gettin' fucked in the ass makes Vin feel Patriotic; he's clearly about that
It always makes him feel closer to home when guys ask if he likes to take it Outback
Vin has a fetish for Italian men, he watches Godfather and pops a stiffy
So you know Vinzr gets turned on.... by every Leonardo that Vinci (Vin see)
Arch went over you, Oat made you hoarse, then Miracle preyed and made you a victim
you've never seen victory against vets..... even a win against per$onal seemed distant
Vinzr, I'll prove you're a sour bitch, and this ain't no women's world
If I added the L you're just received on something as bitter as you, we'd all see VineagarL (Vin a girl)
This tool thinks he’s apart of the big boys but nobody will let him ghost write
Punches that’re invisible or don’t exist... well that correlates to all of his lines
^ decent
He fancies men with big bodies... the types that make his love fallen
Trash talks for role play before sex....and blowin’ things outta proportion
^ concept a bit played, flow was a lil sloppy in my opinion
RPK loves receivin’ post cards and pics from friends, so excited so he inhales
Now we all know how he reacts in the presence of receivin’ males
^ mail/male is a bit played but it was flipped ok, not that bad
This fool got a battle against Mankind and still couldn’t prevail
I bet he couldnt even punch a human unless it was a bitch with a tail
^ not really feelin it
Bury him underground that makes me god cause im fulfilling peoples wish
But it pretty much already happened the way no one knows that he exists
^ again, decent, but not very spectacular
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Nothing you do matters to your crew, like whether or not you beat me
cause they don't care what Vinyl* do....... with a group name like CD
^ lol pretty nice
Gettin' fucked in the ass makes Vin feel Patriotic; he's clearly about that
It always makes him feel closer to home when guys ask if he likes to take it Outback
^ lmao really liked this
Vin has a fetish for Italian men, he watches Godfather and pops a stiffy
So you know Vinzr gets turned on.... by every Leonardo that Vinci (Vin see)
^ nice nameplay n good delivery
Arch went over you, Oat made you hoarse, then Miracle preyed and made you a victim
you've never seen victory against vets..... even a win against per$onal seemed distant
^ dope wordplay
Vinzr, I'll prove you're a sour bitch, and this ain't no women's world
If I added the L you're just received on something as bitter as you, we'd all see VineagarL (Vin a girl)
^ a bit forced, but it was ok
nice battle...my vote goes to RPK cuz he had the harder verse, the punches were real good throught the verse...came wit nameplay n personals that were effective n hittin...
Upping
This tool thinks he’s apart of the big boys but nobody will let him ghost write
Punches that’re invisible or don’t exist... well that correlates to all of his lines
dece
He fancies men with big bodies... the types that make his love fallen
Trash talks for role play before sex....and blowin’ things outta proportion
good wordplay, good punch
RPK loves receivin’ post cards and pics from friends, so excited so he inhales
Now we all know how he reacts in the presence of receivin’ males
dece punch
This fool got a battle against Mankind and still couldn’t prevail
I bet he couldnt even punch a human unless it was a bitch with a tail
lol okay
Bury him underground that makes me god cause im fulfilling peoples wish
But it pretty much already happened the way no one knows that he exists
dece closer
vs.
Nothing you do matters to your crew, like whether or not you beat me
cause they don't care what Vinyl* do....... with a group name like CD
dece punch, played concept
Gettin' fucked in the ass makes Vin feel Patriotic; he's clearly about that
It always makes him feel closer to home when guys ask if he likes to take it Outback
played concept.
Vin has a fetish for Italian men, he watches Godfather and pops a stiffy
So you know Vinzr gets turned on.... by every Leonardo that Vinci (Vin see)
okay punch
Arch went over you, Oat made you hoarse, then Miracle preyed and made you a victim
you've never seen victory against vets..... even a win against per$onal seemed distant
this one was good.
Vinzr, I'll prove you're a sour bitch, and this ain't no women's world
If I added the L you're just received on something as bitter as you, we'd all see VineagarL (Vin a girl)
Little stretched, but alright closer
Flow - Vinzr
Punches - RPK
Personals - RPK
Multi's - RPK
Opener- Tie
Closer- Vinzr
Creativity - RPK
Both need to be more creative in their openers, Vinzr had some decent lines, RPK too. RPK was a little more creative in this one. No hate.
v - RPK
This tool thinks he’s apart of the big boys but nobody will let him ghost write
Punches that’re invisible or don’t exist... well that correlates to all of his lines
He fancies men with big bodies... the types that make his love fallen
Trash talks for role play before sex....and blowin’ things outta proportion
vs
Nothing you do matters to your crew, like whether or not you beat me
cause they don't care what Vinyl* do....... with a group name like CD
Gettin' fucked in the ass makes Vin feel Patriotic; he's clearly about that
It always makes him feel closer to home when guys ask if he likes to take it Outback
Vin has a fetish for Italian men, he watches Godfather and pops a stiffy
So you know Vinzr gets turned on.... by every Leonardo that Vinci
wow...tough battle. vinzr pulled out some pretty creative punches. felt the sting on those, nice delivery and complexity in the verse overall. RPK? pulled out mad ammo. he didnt just deliver with punches, he used personals and wordplay to help aid the hits he threw. nice battle but RPK really wanted this battle, he did some homework and went straight for the gut with his punches. nice battle both of you guys - no hate
/v/ RPK
This tool thinks he’s apart of the big boys but nobody will let him ghost write
Punches that’re invisible or don’t exist... well that correlates to all of his lines
simple but ok
He fancies men with big bodies... the types that make his love fallen
Trash talks for role play before sex....and blowin’ things outta proportion
not feeling
RPK loves receivin’ post cards and pics from friends, so excited so he inhales
Now we all know how he reacts in the presence of receivin’ males
ehh still not feelin
This fool got a battle against Mankind and still couldn’t prevail
I bet he couldnt even punch a human unless it was a bitch with a tail
eh weak
Bury him underground that makes me god cause im fulfilling peoples wish
But it pretty much already happened the way no one knows that he exists
ok closer
vs
Nothing you do matters to your crew, like whether or not you beat me
cause they don't care what Vinyl* do....... with a group name like CD
ok
Gettin' fucked in the ass makes Vin feel Patriotic; he's clearly about that
It always makes him feel closer to home when guys ask if he likes to take it Outback
eh... guess its personal
Vin has a fetish for Italian men, he watches Godfather and pops a stiffy
So you know Vinzr gets turned on.... by every Leonardo that Vinci (Vin see)
ok
Arch went over you, Oat made you hoarse, then Miracle preyed and made you a victim
you've never seen victory against vets..... even a win against per$onal seemed distant
alright
Vinzr, I'll prove you're a sour bitch, and this ain't no women's world
If I added the L you're just received on something as bitter as you, we'd all see VineagarL (Vin a girl)
eh closer
overall vinzr didn't come out as strong. Punches weren't great on either side, but RPK came harder and connected more. Lotta borderline wack lines too but keep elevatin
v/RPK
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This tool thinks he’s apart of the big boys but nobody will let him ghost write
Punches that’re invisible or don’t exist... well that correlates to all of his lines
Bury him underground that makes me god cause im fulfilling peoples wish
But it pretty much already happened the way no one knows that he exists
vs.
Gettin' fucked in the ass makes Vin feel Patriotic; he's clearly about that
It always makes him feel closer to home when guys ask if he likes to take it Outback
Vin has a fetish for Italian men, he watches Godfather and pops a stiffy
So you know Vinzr gets turned on.... by every Leonardo that Vinci (Vin see)
Arch went over you, Oat made you hoarse, then Miracle preyed and made you a victim
you've never seen victory against vets..... even a win against per$onal seemed distant
Pretty close battle. Vinzr's opener and closer were pretty decent. RPK, you had a few pretty dope bars. I can see you've been improvin' a lot lately, you definitely took this battle. Keep elevatin'.
This tool thinks he’s apart of the big boys but nobody will let him ghost write
Punches that’re invisible or don’t exist... well that correlates to all of his lines
punch was w.e, good use of vocab but it was a pretty average jab
He fancies men with big bodies... the types that make his love fallen
Trash talks for role play before sex....and blowin’ things outta proportion
not feelin this, love fallen + outta proportion doesnt rhyme at all..maybe its the accent but to me its a miss with the execution.
RPK loves receivin’ post cards and pics from friends, so excited so he inhales
Now we all know how he reacts in the presence of receivin’ males
mail/male gay jokes are played out to the fullest...weak bar imo
This fool got a battle against Mankind and still couldn’t prevail
I bet he couldnt even punch a human unless it was a bitch with a tail
u had potential to use the personal against him alot stronger, but it felt u strayed away from really usin that against him, or atelast in a clever, better way of bringin out the punch
Bury him underground that makes me god cause im fulfilling peoples wish
But it pretty much already happened the way no one knows that he exists
ok..ish. i seen a one word rhyme through out the bar, nothin good really. but okay..
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Nothing you do matters to your crew, like whether or not you beat me
cause they don't care what Vinyl* do....... with a group name like CD
ok nameplay, personal punches are always good
Gettin' fucked in the ass makes Vin feel Patriotic; he's clearly about that
It always makes him feel closer to home when guys ask if he likes to take it Outback
ehh...i felt the forced punch in the execution..some filler removed would help polish the flow but the punch concept itself was weak
Vin has a fetish for Italian men, he watches Godfather and pops a stiffy
So you know Vinzr gets turned on.... by every Leonardo that Vinci (Vin see)
pretty creative name flip, havent seen it done on Vinzr like this so + for originality. the punch was decent.
Arch went over you, Oat made you hoarse, then Miracle preyed and made you a victim
you've never seen victory against vets..... even a win against per$onal seemed distant
good personals..again the execution/delivery is feeling forced..the filler is takin the potential from the bar. still decent tho, but cut back on the unneccesary words.
Vinzr, I'll prove you're a sour bitch, and this ain't no women's world
If I added the L you're just received on something as bitter as you, we'd all see VineagarL (Vin a girl)
decent closer, again the words. but another nameflip which was good..solid connect.
opener - RPK
flow - RPK
punches - RPK
creativity - RPK
complexity - RPK
personals - RPK
nameplay/wordplay - RPK
vocab - Vinzr
closer - RPK
vote - RPK
reason, stronger in almost all cats i can think of, just came way more prepared for this battle. dont think i've really read a RPK verse but this was a good read from both opponents, but its obvious who came stronger in this in all aspects. with that said, keep battlin niggas.