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flow
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5 bars
due 2 hours from both checks
flow
punches
multies
nameplay/wordplay
complexity
voting cats
check
check i'll drop when you drop
your little run ends today you don't get bitches we know you gay
it's funny how your from Toronto, N idk a bitch who ever Blue Jay
Dude is a fag and snitch I peeped your battles all your shits weak
u tried to testify can beat you, N now your ass will witness defeat
first 2 lines killed you.. no need to try your verse will suck shlong
face is niggas only bump "john" listening to rick rosses new song
flow punches personals nameplays complexity? ill win end of story
you should throw wack in there... so u can at least win 1 category
J gets no love from bitches you see him being ugly is a huge factor
only time a bitch calls John Deere is when her ass is buying tractor
here to wipe tha floor wit wat ya sendin me, so now im scorchin u wit ya neck to bleed
this nerd testin me? when this "MC's a square like 'steins formula for energy
washed up fucker, why even show up claimin to be an MC? when u ass sucker
blast gats? u only seen geurilla warfare pickin donkey kong as a smash brother!!
i spit it plain n its horrid, punches'll have u speakin through the wire same as informants
ill spit 1 bar, but the pain is enormous! u couldnt drop jams if ya changed in the mornin
ill eat this noob wit his hoax! leave u leekin pride weak n screwed wit ya hopes
turn J to ash? treat u like pokemon, dont be shocked when i peek at chu wit the scope!!
i'll blast wit the wesson or nine, backshots n start dissectin ya spine 'til sections divide
every sentence nd line is like u got labotimized the way ya got no presence of mind!!
pikachu/peek at chu the power was some electricity type shit..dont be shocked
google labotomy definition if u dont know
drop jams/pijamas/
rest is s/e
vote up
uppin
have links later today
your little run ends today you don't get bitches we know you gay
it's funny how your from Toronto, N idk a bitch who ever Blue Jay
v
nothin
tay ovb wrote this quick with no effort but still did what was needed to get the w.
johnj ur all over the place with ur concepts & wording. get polished
l'll blast wit the wesson or nine, backshots n start dissectin ya spine 'til sections divide
every sentence nd line is like u got labotimized the way ya got no presence of mind!!
vs
your little run ends today you don't get bitches we know you gay
it's funny how your from Toronto, N idk a bitch who ever Blue Jay
personally i think this battle can go either way, but since we are on 'rapbattles' we all have to conform to the shortbar format so i would vote tay tay for cleaner hits good battle yall
your little run ends today you don't get bitches we know you gay
it's funny how your from Toronto, N idk a bitch who ever Blue Jay
Dude is a fag and snitch I peeped your battles all your shits weak
u tried to testify can beat you, N now your ass will witness defeat
first 2 lines killed you.. no need to try your verse will suck shlong
face is niggas only bump "john" listening to rick rosses new song
vs.
here to wipe tha floor wit wat ya sendin me, so now im scorchin u wit ya neck to bleed
this nerd testin me? when this "MC's a square like 'steins formula for energy
washed up fucker, why even show up claimin to be an MC? when u ass sucker
blast gats? u only seen geurilla warfare pickin donkey kong as a smash brother!!
average battle, john did how come you bolded and italicized your piece? Anyway, both pieces seemed rushed, like someone else said, this battle could go either way. Im not polling this, but consider this feedback. Tay had some simple lines that could've been worded better and had a better punch. that blue jay line is played. John J, work on your line structure man, no hate to either of you. elevate.
first 2 lines killed you.. no need to try your verse will suck shlong
face is niggas only bump "john" listening to rick rosses new song
flow punches personals nameplays complexity? ill win end of story
you should throw wack in there... so u can at least win 1 category
vs
not nothing i liked honestly
this battle was a quick one...quick spit verses..no slid punches,.,,but its w/e i guess..imma give it to whos verse i felt more..\
vote=tay
lol, fuck all u bitches.
jk, not really.
bump
someone didn't poll
3-0 Tay is up
Jeff didnt want to poll... for some reason
your little run ends today you don't get bitches we know you gay
it's funny how your from Toronto, N idk a bitch who ever Blue Jay
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Nothin'
Damn John, that was the shittiest verse I've seen you drop dudey. TayTay, your only dope bar was the one I quoted but it was still enough to get you the win.