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Let's get get get itttttt
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Look at this dope, folks.
He has no hope, and every time he drops its gay - like jail soap.
This punk, gets punched, and lift up
til my left hand busts like its gettin its dick sucked.
That shit got youre faggot ass off huh?
Signed up for battle and already knew you lost huh?
Bitch please, while you tell a hoe please,
I hit the store and bag more hoes than I do groceries.
This punk has ovaries. Ill drink em like ovalteen,
Marz so dope hes anotha word for coke - like Dopamine.
Ill run through his scene head straight for his Moms room.
Fuck the bitch consensual, give her a cum monsoon.
His pops come in fussin, then his head in the oven
Stick a knife through em and sit em on the table - like Thanksgiving stuffin.
i'll man handle this weak bitch. choke him until he can't stand it
leaving mars with no air.....and i'm not talking about the planet
but if i was mentioning it..it doesnt matter, i'll kill u with a knife
mir like astronauts headed home, how im leaving mars with no signs of lfe
i trash L2W members..1st wise, now you..dude your thru
cuz there skills like pointing out the different colors in ur avatar,both blue
i peep your audio..QUIT PLEASE..i was listening to this bitch slurr
cuz the rap games like small mink coats...something your not fit fur
Quote:
Originally Posted by Marz_
Quote:
Originally Posted by Marz_
i turn your track off quick..believe me no one wants to hear u spitQuote:
Originally Posted by Marz_
these quotes alone show........ he's the only one bumping his shit
topz
His pops come in fussin, then his head in the oven
Stick a knife through em and sit em on the table - like Thanksgiving stuffin.
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i'll man handle this weak bitch. choke him until he can't stand it
leaving mars with no air.....and i'm not talking about the planet
but if i was mentioning it..it doesnt matter, i'll kill u with a knife
mir like astronauts headed home, how im leaving mars with no signs of lfe
myracle came with the nameplay punches that just hit harder than anything Marz had. man was just another level above marz in all cats. one sided really..
vote - Myracle
nothing
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i turn your track off quick..believe me no one wants to hear u spit
these quotes alone show........ he's the only one bumping his shit
i got myracle/miracle winning this one pretty easily. not too many quotables, but miracle got this one by way of more punches, harder hitting lines, and better structure and setups.
v.mir
Marz
Look at this dope, folks.
He has no hope, and every time he drops its gay - like jail soap.
ok with the multi attempt but the punch kinda played metaphore was too basic no hate
This punk, gets punched, and lift up
til my left hand busts like its gettin its dick sucked.
weak
That shit got youre faggot ass off huh?
Signed up for battle and already knew you lost huh?
not really a punch here no impact
Bitch please, while you tell a hoe please,
I hit the store and bag more hoes than I do groceries.
punch not directed towards the opponent again felt no impact
This punk has ovaries. Ill drink em like ovalteen,
Marz so dope hes anotha word for coke - like Dopamine.
again wheres the punch????
Ill run through his scene head straight for his Moms room.
Fuck the bitch consensual, give her a cum monsoon.
lmao best line in ur drop
His pops come in fussin, then his head in the oven
Stick a knife through em and sit em on the table - like Thanksgiving stuffin.
ok closer but again metaphores r too basic and original no hate u just have to try to reword them difrrently get more creative
Myracle
i'll man handle this weak bitch. choke him until he can't stand it
leaving mars with no air.....and i'm not talking about the planet
good opener nice filp off the nameplay concept
but if i was mentioning it..it doesnt matter, i'll kill u with a knife
mir like astronauts headed home, how im leaving mars with no signs of lfe
second line was good with the concept but wasnt feeling first line
i trash L2W members..1st wise, now you..dude your thru
cuz there skills like pointing out the different colors in ur avatar,both blue
good personal
i peep your audio..QUIT PLEASE..i was listening to this bitch slurr
cuz the rap games like small mink coats...something your not fit fur
good personal nice wordplay
V/ Myracle
Thought his punches were consistent along with the concept of his nameplay. he also through a few personals in there. Marz just have to work on the creativity aspect of ur punches.
I can't vote but myracle ripped dude a new asshole
His pops come in fussin, then his head in the oven
Stick a knife through em and sit em on the table - like Thanksgiving stuffin.
this was half decent
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i'll man handle this weak bitch. choke him until he can't stand it
leaving mars with no air.....and i'm not talking about the planet
i peep your audio..QUIT PLEASE..i was listening to this bitch slurr
cuz the rap games like small mink coats...something your not fit fur
mYracle got this easily.. no hate marz keep elevating fam
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i'll man handle this weak bitch. choke him until he can't stand it
leaving mars with no air.....and i'm not talking about the planet
but if i was mentioning it..it doesnt matter, i'll kill u with a knife
mir like astronauts headed home, how im leaving mars with no signs of lfe
pretty one-sided battle here in my opinion. marz didnt come up with many punches here and wasn't very creative in his lines. myr came harder and had better opening/closing lines in this battle. Myr also had better line structure as well. Marz homie, you gotta elevate, no hate.
v - myr