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Me and the homie Rill Ill. Im second verse. Drop your links, Ill get at you! Thanks for listening.
http://soundcloud.com/crashlandingma...a-good-ass-day
Links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...793/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...825/index.html
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i like the name rill ill hahaha thats dope.... damn this is goin in. vocals too low though... maybe bring the beat down, and the vocals up a lil so it dont clip when you try to turn the vocals up. hard to catch wat he sayin at times, im really diggin the flow tho.
i like the chorus, its simple to the point.... i think thats the essence of chorus's... it just needs to be catchy yeno?
damn man, you got a sick style. I really like your verse.... dreamin of rockin jacob.... haha medusa line was sick. i like the lyrics... just describin a day, dope how somethin so simple can be ill... b-bitch you betta get the fuck outta my way! haha you clownin.
deff wanna collab with you man, my only problem with this track is the vocals sound real low compared to the beat so they get drownded out, what you workin with studio wise? pm me & let me no, I might be able to share some insight... cuz if you puttin a mixtape out you want it to SLAP! and this has slap potential if you crispen them vocals up.
good shit man get at me
Thanks for the feed man! Ill holla at you.
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Im sorry, but I gotta bump again. Lol.
yo beat is killin em but i agree with milk the beat is kinda overpowering the vocals but other then that flow is on point liking the vibe of this track hook is funny as fuck lmao good shit. Definitely i would listen too if i was having a fucked up day lol. looking foward to hearing more. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...644/index.html
feedback appreciated
listening, turn your vocals up a little bit, beat kind of overpowers vocals, in spots your flow seemed choppy the way it was written, but the way you flowed the rhyme scheme worked, i liked it, the thing i think you should work on is your vocab, seemed pretty simple, no hate.
hook is simple but cool.
2nd verse, def sick, stepped vocab up, def impressed with second verse, dont got a board though love to see yall fall on your torso, lol dope line. liked everything about this second verse..i would def bump this.just turn up vocals a little bit.
7.5/10
Joeboston - Thanks for the feedback man, its appreciated.
Dre - im the second person man, gotta read the description. Lol. But thanks alot for the feedback man! Its appreciated.
Joeboston - Thanks for the feedback man, its appreciated.
Dre - im the second person man, gotta read the description. Lol. But thanks alot for the feedback man! Its appreciated.