Heavy Weight Champ Match!!!!!!!!
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Heavy Weight Champ Match!!!!!!!!
12-20 lines
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Check in by Wednesday 1159 pm eastern
Verses due Friday 1159 pm eastern
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Cant find a worthy competitor, got em all shaken n rattledQuote:
Originally Posted by Know P via PM
So the only Miracle worth mentioning, is the one that gave you a place in this battle
I keep it as real as it gets, just watch as I'm makin this hoe hurt
so if its money over bitches, you just knew I was to post first
And even in your wildest wishes, there isnt a chance that you'll win this
but where there's a will there's a way... for us to divide your shit when Im finished
fuck ur southern swag, Ill prove that you never can wreck kids
I mean I heard ur memphis reigns... n now you'll be gone in 60 seconds
I've got the recipe to win, while we know this veteran's frontin
but Ill admit ur well seasoned with the way you'll get peppered with punches
On the real, I fucked ur mom, but I expected that hoe to be better
so at inception I gave her a kick to the gut so you'd stay in limbo forever
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he bites n flips concepts! at home saying "im not a biter" as he swearsQuote:
Originally Posted by Chrit.
but chrit n repo have something in common, both taken stuff that isnt theres
to beat me he'd search for lines in the archives and combine every
but fact is: you couldn't take this title stealing book covers from the library
mir'll bruise n batter this faggot...it's because im more political
i dont mean what he does to his boyfriend.. when i leave you chrit-tickle
see ill break his bones to the point doctors cant help.....his ass thru
so many different body parts snapped...your shadow wouldnt cast you
u got mild hits/decent concepts....but claiming ur ill? there no way b
nevermind whats in his location...your bars alone prove why your just OK C
rb's predictions?? everyone on this site already knows the answer...
people like "you rectum so bad, i heard chrit ended up with colon cancer"
lets get some votes
Chrit: Sick verse as always dude, i liked a lot of those lines the first time you posted them =p lol but anyways overall a good verse the memphis reigns gone in 60 seconds scheme was dope against arch, and it applies here too well enough. the well peppered with punches line was also sick, i felt it could have been worded better but a dope line regardless. opener and closer were both on point.
Miracle: I liked the opener with the quote and repo/taken stuff that aint theirs line. i kinda feel like you came hard in the beginning put fell off towards the middle. that being said, towards the end you definitely picked it back up with the dope okc line and colon cancer finish. decent verse overall.
V/ Miracle
Chrits verse really had no flaws at all, its just i feel Miracle came more personal and attacked his opponent more. Alot of chrits stuff was re-used. not saying anything against that, but it definitely made it feel less personal. at least to me. anyways sick battle guys, no hate.
Cant find a worthy competitor, got em all shaken n rattled
So the only Miracle worth mentioning, is the one that gave you a place in this battle
nice flip
I keep it as real as it gets, just watch as I'm makin this hoe hurt
so if its money over bitches, you just knew I was to post first
nice
And even in your wildest wishes, there isnt a chance that you'll win this
but where there's a will there's a way... for us to divide your shit when Im finished
decent
fuck ur southern swag, Ill prove that you never can wreck kids
I mean I heard ur memphis reigns... n now you'll be gone in 60 seconds
decent
I've got the recipe to win, while we know this veteran's frontin
but Ill admit ur well seasoned with the way you'll get peppered with punches
niceish
On the real, I fucked ur mom, but I expected that hoe to be better
so at inception I gave her a kick to the gut so you'd stay in limbo forever
nice
vs.
he bites n flips concepts! at home saying "im not a biter" as he swears
but chrit n repo have something in common, both taken stuff that isnt theres
nice
to beat me he'd search for lines in the archives and combine every
but fact is: you couldn't take this title stealing book covers from the library
average..
mir'll bruise n batter this faggot...it's because im more political
i dont mean what he does to his boyfriend.. when i leave you chrit-tickle
a little forced.. bit wordy, decent concept not sure you pulled it off 100%
see ill break his bones to the point doctors cant help.....his ass thru
so many different body parts snapped...your shadow wouldnt cast you
should have said couldn't, dope concept.. wording didn't live up to the punch still nice though
u got mild hits/decent concepts....but claiming ur ill? there no way b
nevermind whats in his location...your bars alone prove why your just OK C
nice, a lil wordy again
rb's predictions?? everyone on this site already knows the answer...
people like "you rectum so bad, i heard chrit ended up with colon cancer"
lol, I like it.. but it's kinda random in the way that your verse wouldn't give him colon cancer.. creative, but not sure if it works 100% again lol sorry
V-Chrit.. I think miracle did a dope job, but had too many lines with wording issues that took away his punches hits.. Chrits verse was decent but stayed consistent the whole way through with a few dope bars too... the shadow line was BOTB for me, but Chrits verse was better overall.
Cant find a worthy competitor, got em all shaken n rattled
So the only Miracle worth mentioning, is the one that gave you a place in this battle
iight
I keep it as real as it gets, just watch as I'm makin this hoe hurt
so if its money over bitches, you just knew I was to post first
ehh
And even in your wildest wishes, there isnt a chance that you'll win this
but where there's a will there's a way... for us to divide your shit when Im finished
not feelin
fuck ur southern swag, Ill prove that you never can wreck kids
I mean I heard ur memphis reigns... n now you'll be gone in 60 seconds
over my head
I've got the recipe to win, while we know this veteran's frontin
but Ill admit ur well seasoned with the way you'll get peppered with punches
ohk, but a lil corny
On the real, I fucked ur mom, but I expected that hoe to be better
so at inception I gave her a kick to the gut so you'd stay in limbo forever
ohk
v
he bites n flips concepts! at home saying "im not a biter" as he swears
but chrit n repo have something in common, both taken stuff that isnt theres
ohk, coulda been worded better
to beat me he'd search for lines in the archives and combine every
but fact is: you couldn't take this title stealing book covers from the library
ohk but im not a big fan of these type of punches
mir'll bruise n batter this faggot...it's because im more political
i dont mean what he does to his boyfriend.. when i leave you chrit-tickle
a little forced but nice concept
see ill break his bones to the point doctors cant help.....his ass thru
so many different body parts snapped...your shadow wouldnt cast you
lol nice
u got mild hits/decent concepts....but claiming ur ill? there no way b
nevermind whats in his location...your bars alone prove why your just OK C
iight pers
rb's predictions?? everyone on this site already knows the answer...
people like "you rectum so bad, i heard chrit ended up with colon cancer"
lol nice
ehh ii seen chrit drop wayyyy heavier. both had hits and misses but i honestly think Mir's hits were harder and more creative. i felt like chrit came with some kinda played concepts that didnt have a harsh flip. and like i said i dont like those "you couldnt do this if you did that" type of lines from mir. no hate though.
v/Mir
Vote Dq'ed Crew vote
-Quest.
These punches stood out to me the most , I liked the other bars but some seemed rushed and stretched (example the bar rite after it)Quote:
he bites n flips concepts! at home saying "im not a biter" as he swears
but chrit n repo have something in common, both taken stuff that isnt theres
to beat me he'd search for lines in the archives and combine every
but fact is: you couldn't take this title stealing book covers from the library
I felt the punchlines includin the last bar but wreck kids and 60 seconds seemed slightly forced to me , maybe its coz im used to multi rhyming who knows ..Quote:
And even in your wildest wishes, there isnt a chance that you'll win this
but where there's a will there's a way... for us to divide your shit when Im finished
fuck ur southern swag, Ill prove that you never can wreck kids
I mean I heard ur memphis reigns... n now you'll be gone in 60 seconds
V/Miracle .. I just felt that his rhyme scheme was better and his punches werent as forced , they just flowed nicely
Keep it up.
Chrit
Cant find a worthy competitor, got em all shaken n rattled
So the only Miracle worth mentioning, is the one that gave you a place in this battle
I've got the recipe to win, while we know this veteran's frontin
but Ill admit ur well seasoned with the way you'll get peppered with punches
vs
miracle
he bites n flips concepts! at home saying "im not a biter" as he swears
but chrit n repo have something in common, both taken stuff that isnt theres
see ill break his bones to the point doctors cant help.....his ass thru
so many different body parts snapped...your shadow wouldnt cast you
u got mild hits/decent concepts....but claiming ur ill? there no way b
nevermind whats in his location...your bars alone prove why your just OK C
rb's predictions?? everyone on this site already knows the answer...
people like "you rectum so bad, i heard chrit ended up with colon cancer"
gotta go with miracle on this one. stronger drop with some very witty bars. Chrit looks like you just gave up on this match man i have never seen you write so poor honestly.
v/miracle
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Cant find a worthy competitor, got em all shaken n rattled
So the only Miracle worth mentioning, is the one that gave you a place in this battle
good...
I keep it as real as it gets, just watch as I'm makin this hoe hurt
so if its money over bitches, you just knew I was to post first
ok...
And even in your wildest wishes, there isnt a chance that you'll win this
but where there's a will there's a way... for us to divide your shit when Im finished
ok...
fuck ur southern swag, Ill prove that you never can wreck kids
I mean I heard ur memphis reigns... n now you'll be gone in 60 seconds
eh...
I've got the recipe to win, while we know this veteran's frontin
but Ill admit ur well seasoned with the way you'll get peppered with punches
decentish...
On the real, I fucked ur mom, but I expected that hoe to be better
so at inception I gave her a kick to the gut so you'd stay in limbo forever
eh...
vs
he bites n flips concepts! at home saying "im not a biter" as he swears
but chrit n repo have something in common, both taken stuff that isnt theres
good...
to beat me he'd search for lines in the archives and combine every
but fact is: you couldn't take this title stealing book covers from the library
bad wording... the combine every throws it off... weak concept anyway...
mir'll bruise n batter this faggot...it's because im more political
i dont mean what he does to his boyfriend.. when i leave you chrit-tickle
wording again...
see ill break his bones to the point doctors cant help.....his ass thru
so many different body parts snapped...your shadow wouldnt cast you
dooooope concept, but doesn't work... wording is awkward and shadows don't cast people anyway... but in another way, it could be dope... like beating everything about him til he has to cast his shadow or something...
u got mild hits/decent concepts....but claiming ur ill? there no way b
nevermind whats in his location...your bars alone prove why your just OK C
ok...
rb's predictions?? everyone on this site already knows the answer...
people like "you rectum so bad, i heard chrit ended up with colon cancer"
old concept... ok flip...
Chrit had a more polished verse... wording killed Miracle... but it was closer than i expected...
vote Chrit
Cant find a worthy competitor, got em all shaken n rattled
So the only Miracle worth mentioning, is the one that gave you a place in this battle
I've got the recipe to win, while we know this veteran's frontin
but Ill admit ur well seasoned with the way you'll get peppered with punches
vs
he bites n flips concepts! at home saying "im not a biter" as he swears
but chrit n repo have something in common, both taken stuff that isnt theres
see ill break his bones to the point doctors cant help.....his ass thru
so many different body parts snapped...your shadow wouldnt cast you
u got mild hits/decent concepts....but claiming ur ill? there no way b
nevermind whats in his location...your bars alone prove why your just OK
i feel like chrits opening was a dope punch... but then it kinda fell off and the peppered with punches line was cool as well.. but i feel like you didnt have a great verse i seen your verse vs spit that time in LLL and that shit was dope ..here you didnt say anything crazy imo.. no hate... miracle i have to agree with everyone else your wording kinda hurt you here, but i still thing ya edged it out by being a bit mroe creative and coming with a lil more sting in your punches...good battle
V/Mir
WOOOOOW this was a very intense Champ battle right off the hook. Non stop from both camps. Mir brought some pure rage and fire, at first your verse started off bland, but you k.o'd with some very supreme personal/ word plays. I was impressed by how proper you set yourself up for punchlines and you had a consistent vibe. I thought your lines were stretched a bit since you used such a big font, kinda added to the feel of your verse. Chrit brought a lot of flame to this fight with well executed punchlines and excellent flips/plays. You had a lot of clever lines but it wasn't enough for Mirs flare. Props to both you guys for bringing some good stuff but in the end Mir edged it out with a slightly more potent verse.
V.MIRACLE