First Contact

First Contact
By: Novade

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She was my everything...

When our eye’s first met and locked into focus
I saw a beauty unmatched, yet often unnoticed
My first word’s burned as I burst and an emoted
An invocation of interest, while the infinite prose’s
To be written then exposed with, a heart full of gold
And a tongue full of slogans, of the lock on my soul
From your hot little pose and the voice you compose with
Had me caught in the moment, robbed of my breath
Lost in the current’s and motions of an emotional ocean
Invoked and emboldened, confidence open exposed with
The way I was walking and controlling those moments
I was selling myself, now I’m buying you roses
Those shoes you admired and diamonds imposed in
Platinum bands with white gold in the bracelets
Proud of our devoted flirtation’s despite being devoted
And mated, we remain with focus and patience
-Love under pressure, held up in the waves
When through thick and then thin
Didn’t get between us, it just thickened our skins
So if you’re listening in, this is unprecedented dedication
-Together to death,
and when you rest, I’ll reminisce and embrace it
-Bringing flowers to your grave,
with tears on my face till my day’s end
always remebering,


she was more then a friend.....

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i liked this, had a poetry feel to it, lyrics were good, like use use of words such as:
Lost in the current’s and motions of an emotional ocean
Invoked and emboldened, confidence open exposed with
^cool bar man. like it
..seem to tell a story & vocab was cool. nice drop

thanks

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never read from you before.. this was good.. you have the skill of someone who has been doing this awhile.. I'm gonna guess your an alias or from another site? I dont know but I liked this

Is the girld dead at the end or dying.. that part did have me confused there.. but besides that the flow and the rhymes were flawless.. it was emotion driven and powerful.. a great drop.. almost HOF worthy I'd say

the flow was on point and never slacked off the story telling was a nice hit but it could have been more metaphorically detailed to show off more creativity... but none the less it was still a great read nothing too fancy at all man. great read and i also like the diction and lyrical content

nice read

The way I was walking and controlling those moments
I was selling myself, now I’m buying you roses

damn.. that was fire right there son

this piece was real as fuck dude. enjoyed it thoroughly.

To be written then exposed with, a heart full of gold
And a tongue full of slogans, of the lock on my soul
^^
My favorite line i like how you worded this the toungue full of slogans? nice you had a nice flow an a gret story telling ! but this had me reading at least twice i felt you been doing this who was you before?? lol but overral this was good work nov! xD keep writting here

Always novade, just been doing this for a min, thank you everyone for the feed, hope you keep reading

woah this is cool bro, keep it up

Mhmmm..

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