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u betta check in homie.. cuz i got that fire for ur ass
im an artist like picasso when im punchin, just one in a small size circle
my right hands blue n' the left is red..
... together they'll paint ur eyes purple
where's the next $pit? or feeble? theres no one droppin a verse that'd kill a boy
cuz every since Hank came into the picture.. nobody wants to be the real mccoy
i got secrets weak cats like u wont figure out n' i wont even say why
cuz lets be honest.. u couldnt gain knowledge if they rostered you in A.I.
its the principle teachin the student so feel the pain of the paddle
and id merk u into a nobody.. if that wasnt how u came into the battle
ur on a mission impossible, thats just alotta wishin n' hopin dawg
cuz you'll only be talkin tough cuz speakin is hard with a broken jaw
im an artist like picasso when im punchin, just one in a small size circle
my right hands blue n' the left is red..
... together they'll paint ur eyes purple
- ok, kinda bland though
where's the next $pit? or feeble? theres no one droppin a verse that'd kill a boy
cuz every since Hank came into the picture.. nobody wants to be the real mccoy
- decent
i got secrets weak cats like u wont figure out n' i wont even say why
cuz lets be honest.. u couldnt gain knowledge if they rostered you in A.I.
- lol
its the principle teachin the student so feel the pain of the paddle
and id merk u into a nobody.. if that wasnt how u came into the battle
- ok
ur on a mission impossible, thats just alotta wishin n' hopin dawg
cuz you'll only be talkin tough cuz speakin is hard with a broken jaw
- meh
Overall - props on droppin on a dude that has done nothing but no show. don't even know how he is allowed to keep signing in, but anyway. Your verse started good and kinda fell off near the end with some semi-corny lines. other than a line or two, the rest was alright.
im an artist like picasso when im punchin, just one in a small size circle
my right hands blue n' the left is red..
... together they'll paint ur eyes purple
lol funny
where's the next $pit? or feeble? theres no one droppin a verse that'd kill a boy
cuz every since Hank came into the picture.. nobody wants to be the real mccoy
aiight
i got secrets weak cats like u wont figure out n' i wont even say why
cuz lets be honest.. u couldnt gain knowledge if they rostered you in A.I.
had a smoothe flow about it, made the impact harder.. pretty coo
its the principle teachin the student so feel the pain of the paddle
and id merk u into a nobody.. if that wasnt how u came into the battle
eh, okay
ur on a mission impossible, thats just alotta wishin n' hopin dawg
cuz you'll only be talkin tough cuz speakin is hard with a broken jaw
bleh, you got lazy here haha...
yeah... good shit on showing up.. props on writing a decent verse against no verse at all too... keep it up dude.. this wasn't even bad.
im an artist like picasso when im punchin, just one in a small size circle
my right hands blue n' the left is red..
... together they'll paint ur eyes purple
Nice, aggressive.
where's the next $pit? or feeble? theres no one droppin a verse that'd kill a boy
cuz every since Hank came into the picture.. nobody wants to be the real mccoy
Played idea on this dude, i'd bet..
i got secrets weak cats like u wont figure out n' i wont even say why
cuz lets be honest.. u couldnt gain knowledge if they rostered you in A.I.
cool
its the principle teachin the student so feel the pain of the paddle
and id merk u into a nobody.. if that wasnt how u came into the battle
Not feeling much
ur on a mission impossible, thats just alotta wishin n' hopin dawg
cuz you'll only be talkin tough cuz speakin is hard with a broken jaw
Lol, aight
Not a bad verse considering you been away, I enjoyed it man. Props on actually writing on a no-shower...
where's the next $pit? or feeble? theres no one droppin a verse that'd kill a boy
cuz every since Hank came into the picture.. nobody wants to be the real mccoy
its the principle teachin the student so feel the pain of the paddle
and id merk u into a nobody.. if that wasnt how u came into the battle
ur on a mission impossible, thats just alotta wishin n' hopin dawg
cuz you'll only be talkin tough cuz speakin is hard with a broken jaw
those was dope, rest of em a bit cliched id say but its still a nice verse
thas wassup..
thnx for the feed.
im an artist like picasso when im punchin, just one in a small size circle
my right hands blue n' the left is red..
... together they'll paint ur eyes purple
no. just not hard hitting, it was like you were telling a story, a boring one.
where's the next $pit? or feeble? theres no one droppin a verse that'd kill a boy
cuz every since Hank came into the picture.. nobody wants to be the real mccoy
alright, decent.
i got secrets weak cats like u wont figure out n' i wont even say why
cuz lets be honest.. u couldnt gain knowledge if they rostered you in A.I.
meh, not too smooth.
its the principle teachin the student so feel the pain of the paddle
and id merk u into a nobody.. if that wasnt how u came into the battle
alright, not bad.
ur on a mission impossible, thats just alotta wishin n' hopin dawg
cuz you'll only be talkin tough cuz speakin is hard with a broken jaw
coulda worded better, but nice concept.
was kinda all over. you needed a better connection with your wording and concepts. It wasn't terrible but slightly below average for this many bars id have to say. keep it up and executed better and your golden.
Hank no shows and is booted... again...