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kid you aint the best with ya spittin - sucking off dudes for vote
and when it comes down to battling he continues to choke.
but look jay spit some real shit - im sparkin ya like lit matches
he'll need lotion cuz he's reduced to rubble like moonlit ashes.
you cant live up to your expectation - but this is no hesitation
and he's falling to his demise like when he gets no elevation.
i'll drop on you like it was no tommarow - whos raps did u borrow
cuz when his raps go off the atlas to him his raps just fellow.
jay gets beat for props - we all know g's on tops for daps
but you wont land on your feet unless drop like a pussy cat.
You get pussy??naw he gave gays aids death at a killin rate
s'why drawing a self-picture isnt evidence provin that Ra illustrate!!
you're gonna die killed by minorities, especially ones wit ak's snappin
rasta reason why jamacians are disgusted @ whites speakin in their accent
buryin emcee bitches alive, don't slip on me because im tempted
but i'm so lazy i'll make rah digga grave ...n cover the hole with him in it
no emcees respect you so why act like this bitch is paid?
even if you were a ghostrider we wouldn't choose u over nicholas cage
so don't ever have me in doubt of winnin dawg..jus leave, peace out
such an easy knockout ur the cause of doorbell removals from each house
kid you aint the best with ya spittin - sucking off dudes for vote
and when it comes down to battling he continues to choke.
weak opener
but look jay spit some real shit - im sparkin ya like lit matches
he'll need lotion cuz he's reduced to rubble like moonlit ashes.
aight
you cant live up to your expectation - but this is no hesitation
and he's falling to his demise like when he gets no elevation.
ehh .. could've been harder
i'll drop on you like it was no tommarow - whos raps did u borrow
cuz when his raps go off the atlas to him his raps just fellow.
weak.
jay gets beat for props - we all know g's on tops for daps
but you wont land on your feet unless drop like a pussy cat.
weak.
You get pussy??naw he gave gays aids death at a killin rate
s'why drawing a self-picture isnt evidence provin that Ra illustrate!!
ok
you're gonna die killed by minorities, especially ones wit ak's snappin
rasta reason why jamacians are disgusted @ whites speakin in their accent
lol
buryin emcee bitches alive, don't slip on me because im tempted
but i'm so lazy i'll make rah digga grave ...n cover the hole with him in it
ok
no emcees respect you so why act like this bitch is paid?
even if you were a ghostrider we wouldn't choose u over nicholas cage
ehhh
so don't ever have me in doubt of winnin dawg..jus leave, peace out
such an easy knockout ur the cause of doorbell removals from each house
lol decent, could've been executed better but oh well
my votes goes to Jay because he came harder especally with his first two bars and was more consistent than ra was. i also enjoyed jay's concepts. this was an ok battle. peace.
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ra ill
kid you aint the best with ya spittin - sucking off dudes for vote
and when it comes down to battling he continues to choke.
-eh weak bro
but look jay spit some real shit - im sparkin ya like lit matches
he'll need lotion cuz he's reduced to rubble like moonlit ashes.
-noo
you cant live up to your expectation - but this is no hesitation
and he's falling to his demise like when he gets no elevation.
-nah
i'll drop on you like it was no tommarow - whos raps did u borrow
cuz when his raps go off the atlas to him his raps just fellow.
-trying to say follow? oK
jay gets beat for props - we all know g's on tops for daps
but you wont land on your feet unless drop like a pussy cat.
-no
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Jay I
You get pussy??naw he gave gays aids death at a killin rate
s'why drawing a self-picture isnt evidence provin that Ra illustrate!!
-lol K
you're gonna die killed by minorities, especially ones wit ak's snappin
rasta reason why jamacians are disgusted @ whites speakin in their accent
-nah
buryin emcee bitches alive, don't slip on me because im tempted
but i'm so lazy i'll make rah digga grave ...n cover the hole with him in it
-no
no emcees respect you so why act like this bitch is paid?
even if you were a ghostrider we wouldn't choose u over nicholas cage
-not really, but oK
so don't ever have me in doubt of winnin dawg..jus leave, peace out
such an easy knockout ur the cause of doorbell removals from each house
-lol no dude
wow.... this battle was very weak, no decent punches, a personal or two but nothing special, no strong disses, but jay won it because he had a couple semi-punch, while ra never had anything hard, so I vote Jayigh and g/L in later battles guys.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...661/index.html
You get pussy??naw he gave gays aids death at a killin rate
s'why drawing a self-picture isnt evidence provin that Ra illustrate!!
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this line i quoted was coo, but the rest was just kind of average. either way ra got beat in this one, jay just had much harsher concepts and a much better verse in general. id say you both need to be more creative n use wp more.
v/ j.i
thx for the feed/advice ancel
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I couldnt find any decent lines in this seems like neither of you were trying at all. I have seen way better shit from both of you.
J had a bit better set up and punch style and wrote some slightly better lines. I assume you were both having a bad day.
V/The alkaholic
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last fuckin up
Okay.. here we go..
Ra Ill
kid you aint the best with ya spittin - sucking off dudes for vote
and when it comes down to battling he continues to choke.
Weaker opener..
but look jay spit some real shit - im sparkin ya like lit matches
he'll need lotion cuz he's reduced to rubble like moonlit ashes.
I don't get this punch.. came off pretty weak..
you cant live up to your expectation - but this is no hesitation
and he's falling to his demise like when he gets no elevation.
Egh..
i'll drop on you like it was no tommarow - whos raps did u borrow
cuz when his raps go off the atlas to him his raps just fellow.
Did you mean follow? Anyway.. it was wack
jay gets beat for props - we all know g's on tops for daps
but you wont land on your feet unless drop like a pussy cat.
Weak ender..
JayIgh tha Alkaholik =]
You get pussy??naw he gave gays aids death at a killin rate
s'why drawing a self-picture isnt evidence provin that Ra illustrate!!
Haha.. I like that
you're gonna die killed by minorities, especially ones wit ak's snappin
rasta reason why jamacians are disgusted @ whites speakin in their accent
I like the wordplay.. nice.. didn't feel the punch too much though
buryin emcee bitches alive, don't slip on me because im tempted
but i'm so lazy i'll make rah digga grave ...n cover the hole with him in it
Egh..
no emcees respect you so why act like this bitch is paid?
even if you were a ghostrider we wouldn't choose u over nicholas cage
Nice..
so don't ever have me in doubt of winnin dawg..jus leave, peace out
such an easy knockout ur the cause of doorbell removals from each house
I kinda saw where you was tryna go with that but it was woreded bad.. nice concept though..
Hands down my vote goes to JayIgh tha Alkaholik =]..
Vote: JayIgh tha Alkaholik =]