16 line keystyle

just 10 minutes work i got inspired to do after listening to so many frestlyes on mp3.

these kids "throwing record players" like they "flipping the beat"/
arse cheeks clentch so tight they put a rip in ya seat/
see, i havent seen this much brutality in ages/
hit emcees with lasers, tazers and razors/
better bring a long stick if you wanna prod-vets/
and swing "harder" than the "golden state project"/
cowards talk shit and hind behind their crew-first/
i give a fuck, i find beefs "addictive" like "Truth Hurts"/
theres a morale to this story like an Aesop Fable/
you know 6 rocks-able, and my mind is unstable/
leave em fossilised like mosquito's in amber/
even in mexico leave them chico's caramba'ed/
whos the only emcee with props in the UK?/
who can move like jet-li and make the room-sway/
hanging plaques on the wal like an art exhibit/
but for now i'll let the next man kick-it/


off the top, no real topic in this one. just something im gonna memorise in case someone says "i wanna hear you spit".

i loved the similies in this one....good drop...i was feelin it....respect dunny...wahid

this is a nice lil freestyle to spit whenever
which is always good to hav cuz some punk always wants
to put u on the spot and try to make u look dumb
then u kick a drop like this and are like whatup now bitch
ummm.....anyways nice drop

PS peep my "Foresaken Emcee" or/and "The Lonely Mic"
i would appreciate ur thoughts
thx

great start off line
these kids "throwing record players" like they "flipping the beat"/

thats wicked. it flowed really well too.
Peace

cowards talk shit and hind behind their crew-first/
i give a fuck, i find beefs "addictive" like "Truth Hurts"/
theres a morale to this story like an Aesop Fable/
you know 6 rocks-able, and my mind is unstable/
leave em fossilised like mosquito's in amber/
even in mexico leave them chico's caramba'ed/

Okay, so maybe I found this spit a lil "Addictive", Ha. Maaann, this was a hot peice and truth is, I think you deserve more props. Half these niggas is sleepin, why? Beats me! Link me to you next thread, my e-mails "I fawk3d ur grL@aol.com"

Man, stay real and keep spittin..
Peace..

nice spit johnny,shit had me laughin foreal cat,nice lil spit ahha

cheers for the feedback fellas. uppin this^^

listen im lost in this i dont no wut the hell to do and u cant help than the hell wit u i gets busy so niggas dont show directions shit it aint my fault that the flow infectious i eat legends for breakfast experts for lunch and dinner till im the one man army taking on a bunch of niggas lbird im fucking winner the number one contender put a end to niggas so remember bring ya a game or get injured when them thangs bang homey i control a game watch how a real nigga show u pain u cant numb wit novacaine guns on da shoulder blade this how soldier rein looking over all u lames holla at ya boy quick short shit it gets a whole lot reeler trust me

this free was sick here...keep doin wat u do shorty.

Nice work man.
Really felt the peice.
Are you still down for a collab?
Work on the structre though.
Keep it up.

Dude, why the hell did you up this?

Fuck it, i'm closing my own thread.