The Lead & The Lead Remix

this beat i made yesterday is...
# 1,898 in Instrumentals
# 567 in subgenre Hip Hop
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i listen to the orginial a couple times n didnt think intro/hook synth fit with it so i came up with this...
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please comment on wut u thinkk
if u wanna add lyrics to glad ta give u the tagged verison:)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ry-392887.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...me-392505.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-391458.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ap-392615.html

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you only have to insert the code...
Quote my message and see how
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The melodies you put out were actually pretty good, but you should take more time mixing.. I can barely hear drums, plus when all the leads come together, they're hurting my ears... You coulda used strings maybe... Overall if the mix was better, id say this was pretty decent... Keep it up

And comment on my Darkness Falls
Thanks

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Originally Posted by V&D

none of these played

[SOUNDCLICK]7440791[/SOUNDCLICK]

[SOUNDCLICK]7443661[/SOUNDCLICK]

you only have to insert the code...
Quote my message and see how
___
The melodies you put out were actually pretty good, but you should take more time mixing.. I can barely hear drums, plus when all the leads come together, they're hurting my ears... You coulda used strings maybe... Overall if the mix was better, id say this was pretty decent... Keep it up

And comment on my Darkness Falls
Thanks

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iightt thanks homie :)

This is cool. Something is off. Is the bass out of key? I can tell you're a beginner. Fix up that mix. Get your hands on some nicer sounds.... and practice practice practice. Don't forget to listen to the pros to learn from them. Keep at it man.

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Originally Posted by Palamoon

This is cool. Something is off. Is the bass out of key? I can tell you're a beginner. Fix up that mix. Get your hands on some nicer sounds.... and practice practice practice. Don't forget to listen to the pros to learn from them. Keep at it man.

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yupp listenin to that "hes back" u jus posted
this is my second real try on a beat
i only got stanard vsts off fl and albino3 demo hint outta place sound through out thee song

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Originally Posted by XM

Please make sure you read the rules before you post any threads on the board. In order to keep your thread open for feed you have to leave feed on two other members work and paste the links within your own thread each time you make a new threads you have to do this with 2 different links each time. Please leave adequate feed also I am sure you will want the same.

You thread will be closed today if you do not comply.

-Rap Beats Moderator

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iight ma badd

still not playing 4 me

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Originally Posted by KILL*LOGIK

still not playing 4 me

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workin for me
try V&D post

Thanx for following the rules.

-XM

First one reminds me of a lil jon joint, would be ill without that hi sounding lead synth..and just kept the mid and bass. I see you elevating!

Check me out, feedback always returned, thanks!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...24#post6949624

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