2 new beats Feedback appreciated

don't usually make club beats but I'm trying to switch pu my style

Seductive
[SOUNDCLICK]5626838[/SOUNDCLICK]


Iced out
[SOUNDCLICK]7093745[/SOUNDCLICK]


Any feedback is appreciated

Seductive - I like that synth. Percussion is hot. You need a 808 clap in there or something. Not that dirty snare. Horns are cool. The guitar or w/e is fire. This is a real good beat. I think if you had a different snare... and maybe mixed this a bit differently, it'd be fire. Other than that, this is nice.

Iced Out - Not really digging that synth. This is kinda darker. Your drums are ehh. The percussion that comes in at 45 sec is hot. I like your other one better. This one aint bad though. Keep at it.

hey um tha first one aiight but the second one theres a bit of a pause between the bass drops i fink dat all my comp is slow as a mother fucker other than that aiight nana mean as just went thru it again that aiight

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Seductive...

Kinda left field, a lil too much when the horns start comin in.

Too much goin on, you had a good premise, just over did it

first one is a little too wet on the reverb, its iight, just dont have that OMG thing to it

second jaunt is a little more attractive fromthe intro, i dont like the bass tho and it dont drop like i was expecting it. you clever wit the drums, but they dont come thru like they should.

props stay up

Not a fan of HEAVY synths so i cant give good feedback.....but sounds like u could be aight...you sample at all?