Renascence Man

I bring back things that are foreign to you
Yeah thats all that I do.....nostalgia
Its my favorite pasttime, boring to you
You'd only read it if it came with a chorus r two
Watch my shit score with filler and poor interludes
get into dudes with a flow thats offbase
I grew up on dudes like Tupac and Scarface
I know Scarface hell nah not the real one
Never been signed to the Roc but I dealed some
How does it feel son it feels like the real Sun
Dropped out the sky and landed by your heels, run

a rhyme from yesteryear engrosses the narrator....

Looking at the future of rhymesayers with minds basic
in my mismatch asics I've fortified great scripts
see critics saying he in autopilot thats, baseless
Ghostface killer I raided the base faceless
This is not carbon monoxide homie you can taste this
Why can't I be enlightened cause I get high and wasted?
I remember when everyone screamed thuglife
to the December wind while Machiavelli
smiled from a grave that he was never in
I remeber the old sinizter G. shit I was better then
I was better when everyone said I was a total slob
but now circle jerks eat it up anf give it the royal nod
I'm just jotting for free I'd see this as an awful job
Hey heard someone say being a lyricist pays
but with all the bad criticism I'd rather work for
MINIMUM WAGE.......I AM THE RENASCENSE MAN.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G6b6MuwFqoo

^^^^^^^^peep wale.....that go-go shit from DC and virginia is hella hott

peace.

I'll drop links later....keystyl'd this.

lol wassup wit the advertising of that video....anyhoo

it was choppy here and there....lacked flow some places...and yes as you said since you keyed it it was understandable....i dont get the misspelling of renaissance man...wat i am missing?

but...but you had some real moments.... [infact next time try make the whole piece in the same par as these ones....]

my favorite parts:

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Originally Posted by Sinizter G.

Watch my shit score with filler and poor interludes


in my mismatch asics I've fortified great scripts
see critics

Ghostface killer I raided the base faceless

This is not carbon monoxide homie you can taste this
Why can't I be enlightened cause I get high and wasted?

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sorry if i was being harsh...but too much dicksucking goes on in OM cuz of insecurity as if not to attract bad feedback for their own piece....but fellatio like those really dont help....one should always give PROs as well as CONs

upping for more feeedd.

Decent idea, bad execution. Welcome back to RB though Vince. I enjoyed the first verse more than the second, you seemed more comfortable writing that part, seeing as the second part was like a little under-developed. I liked the ending however and that's always a good thing to end strong. Overall, you've got more in you, but it wasn't horrible - mediocre really. Sorry, but good luck. Peace.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-d-376144.html
hit this ^

word....thanks for the feed mariah.....I just hurry up and keystyld this just to say I'm back for a lil while pz....and once again thanks for the feed.
anything you have to say about my writing I'm pleased to take into consideration.


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