ok I'm thinking 16-20 due today or tommorow, upto you mate
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ok I'm thinking 16-20 due today or tommorow, upto you mate
let's make it a fun little night excursion
cool, so sometime today/tonight *goes to start writing*
Herds of herbs disrespecting me, but I come first respectively
I've gunned nerds for testing me and stressed girls intentionally
Once my thirst occurs you're next to be burned worse than texas seats
I got stern words to flex you see it's absurd you'll be bestin me
I grow bored of your kind, burn your words unexpectedly
I'm so shore of my lines coz a third of the world is next to sea
I'll perplex this geek, wreck his week, put an end to his texting streak
You ain't impressing me, under my feet's where he expects to be
This version of me, forces you to learn about burning...
...N' the verdict is turning to towards me bitch, I'm certain
So keep searching for your swagger, while I lurk to attack ya
Coz when my turn comes this cracker is inserting a dagger
My style holier than thou, biblical like P.T. Anderson's Magnolia
but a lil more sinister, There Will Be Blood when I spout like petroleum
'n ya'll stouter than Napolean, steppin' to the throne like you ownin it
catch ya reflection in my chrome, i'm lettin' it blow and this is over with
you'd prolly be better off skippin stones then slingin pebbles at Goliath
go 'head, try it. if one of them hittin home you left tremblin' in silence
regrettin the defiance. whisperin low how next time you'll be compliant
went from starting a riot, to tryin' to hide it, to begging for an alliance
cuz left to my devices, I leave 'em lifeless as fam grieve in parlours
..you come out that tat shop lookin' sweet as tart with a sleeve of hearts
that's why I achieved nirvana 'n you just a premadonna teenybopper
lost in deep waters, why my teeth are sharp 'n you just feed for sharks
Herds of herbs disrespecting me, but I come first respectively
I've gunned nerds for testing me and stressed girls intentionally
[3]
Once my thirst occurs you're next to be burned worse than texas seats
I got stern words to flex you see it's absurd you'll be bestin me
[3.5]
I grow bored of your kind, burn your words unexpectedly
I'm so shore of my lines coz a third of the world is next to sea
[3.5]
I'll perplex this geek, wreck his week, put an end to his texting streak
You ain't impressing me, under my feet's where he expects to be
[2.5]
This version of me, forces you to learn about burning...
...N' the verdict is turning to towards me bitch, I'm certain
[2]
So keep searching for your swagger, while I lurk to attack ya
Coz when my turn comes this cracker is inserting a dagger
[2.5]
17
vs
My style holier than thou, biblical like P.T. Anderson's Magnolia
but a lil more sinister, There Will Be Blood when I spout like petroleum
[3.5]
'n ya'll stouter than Napolean, steppin' to the throne like you ownin it
catch ya reflection in my chrome, i'm lettin' it blow and this is over with
[4]
you'd prolly be better off skippin stones then slingin pebbles at Goliath
go 'head, try it. if one of them hittin home you left tremblin' in silence
[4]
regrettin the defiance. whisperin low how next time you'll be compliant
went from starting a riot, to tryin' to hide it, to begging for an alliance
[2.5]
cuz left to my devices, I leave 'em lifeless as fam grieve in parlours
..you come out that tat shop lookin' sweet as tart with a sleeve of hearts
that's why I achieved nirvana 'n you just a premadonna teenybopper
lost in deep waters, why my teeth are sharp 'n you just feed for sharks
[ 3 + 3]
20
v/ meters
and please vote on the 3 v 3
imo coms flowed a bit better.
fuck knows what im sposed to be voting on lol, just seems like a load of random multis n shit.
I`ll break it down noob style
Flow-com
Multis-com
Fuck knows, i liked coms sea line the best so
v.com
lmao, what you're supposed to vote on is 1) who self-glorified themselves in a dope way the most 2) who flowed the best
to be honest both verses were a bit simple for my taste, while com flowed better. It seemed to me, meters wasnt sure what to focus on, sometimes he went for flow, sometimes he dealt some simple disses, and bigged himself up a bit. too much of a melting pot of different types of lines, so yeah despite his verse being simple I'ma
v/com