Re: 68 hours with no sleep
Fuckin loved this piece man... real short but magnitude a diffrent feeling in each line but all lead to one meaning man and this was justa beautiful and PRECISE read ex. loved how you constructed your flow of things and the wording was picky and jotted well off. your message behind it was excellent and your own mature structure about the topic was well poised and announced man. i could imagine this in a live poetry slam. i read it to myself out loud and it sounded nice man.. loved it man no bullshit.
Re: 68 hours with no sleep
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Mr.Write
Fuckin loved this piece man... real short but magnitude a diffrent feeling in each line but all lead to one meaning man and this was justa beautiful and PRECISE read ex. loved how you constructed your flow of things and the wording was picky and jotted well off. your message behind it was excellent and your own mature structure about the topic was well poised and announced man. i could imagine this in a live poetry slam. i read it to myself out loud and it sounded nice man.. loved it man no bullshit.
^ROTFL
Guess I'm the only one that got it?