-
NoNsense (about war)
just some small insights
Bush should be pushed of the pedistal he cushioned himself on/
Visited rigid countries to get rid of their bombs/
Disarm and withdraw from anything that could cause harm/
No one bothers us cuz of our infinite fireamrs/
So FUCK nuke em all Bush quit starin at your palms/
Everyone panic and act frantic, dont ever remain calm/
Everyone join in to destroy our fuckin lives/
It could happen on the count of five/ no one left alive/
no one has survived/ no one has realized/
no one has real eyes/ to see what i see/
war is to jeopradize the future in our lives/
You mindless numbskulls/ bodies will fill up by the bucketfulls/
bucketsfull of innocent civilians who wanted to fuckin show/
their kids down the right path, not down an empty hole/
a life of plentiful happiness/ Cmon be skeptical/
My thoughts are like a full clip, fuck that a sash full of rounds/
We dont need Saddan taking out a handful of our towns/
Man fuck the goverment, fuck all that, Cmon keep destroying and making enemies, no one gives a fuck about us....you stupid constipated weiner dogs!!
critique....
-
-
Who's side are you on? Hard to tell...I agree with half of it....good observations...good piece.
-
read like poetry more than rhyme. i agree with the message but i think vocab was a little basic here.
good to see a non-gangsta concept here.
-
thanx....im on no ones side....i just dont agree with war
-
-
nice piece dogg
the flow was a lil tough to follow at times
but overall it was a good drop
I also like the sense of sarcasm in it