Bitch You asked for this so SPit.....u peasant..lol
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Bitch You asked for this so SPit.....u peasant..lol
OMG lol. Your so pathetic. You were talkin shit so thats why i have to murder you. checkin in it'll be up in a little bit
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Ayo......
My verbal arms are covered in chains, to rip off limbs and scar brains//1
The blood stains are the result of my animalistic nature, your Isis under tha equator when Osiris fondeled and raped her//2
It was a mistake to think times would change, when i calmed down and climbed out of my irrated rage//3
Or maybe it started at a young age till highschool, where you elevated but still got beat in your own pool of piss drewl//4
Your the effect of total disrespect, when you reach out you get decked, dont worry i know the facts i checked//5
Your wrecked in a matter of seconds you'll be subdued, maybe if it wasnt for my mental aptitude you could acknowledge some virtue//6
Any hoo, this is where i pass my breaking point, by taking your neck and tearing straight from tha joint//7
Cracked each bone till they snapped into splinters, now your face is pale white and colder then alaskan winters//8
Now way passed the jitters, i then left tha scene and ventured, over to your house and waited for your family to enter//9
Waiting patiently in tha center of your livingroom plaza, standing furiously fired up ready to blast off like NASA//10
I was undetected so the surprise was not expected, swung tha bat twice and nicely connected//11
Now shit got hectic revenge is a bitch thats never neglected, you should of suspected that i would turn on you and make your family suffer with several wounds infected//12
See, that felt so good, but actually, i beat you so brutally that tha fatalidies happened to be three//13
Now five bodies are already stripped of breathe, while i'm strapped to this seat waitin for the switch of death//14
These memories are what flashed within my last second left, now happy in hell while others wept//15
After all this i still have no regrets.... and as i'm burning, i feel blessed just because i get to grin at your murdered family sitting on heavens front steps//16
16 bars hahahaha
Oh mah God.. Dizzy bound to get `burned`, Looks like you can't spit `heat`,|`Your~Fire~Been~Abducted?`|
Screw Twin Towers, I'm the `plane` crashing your `State Building` like your |`Empire~Been~Destructed`|
Consume entities to prophesize annihilation, `Urinate` in `your direction` like I'm |`Pissed~At~You`|
Dizzy surrounded by `dis`respect, Plus you `Fake` It'd be a shame to call |`Dis~A~Crew`|
Grasp the aura, illuminating core existence to sift in, driftin these weak NY cat towards |`Defiance`|
I Lock up your 'children', it looks like 'Michael Jackson' and 'R Kelly' have formed an |`Alliance`|
Dizzy hoe couldn't `find your way` around a `one-page site` if you had a |`Site~Map`|
This battle reminds me of a certain `Movie`, except the `Empire` doesn't |`Strike~Back`|
You getting exposed, like when 380 was caught screwing his |`Neices`| (Nieces = Nicess)
my shit is like `microscopic genitals`, you can `try` but you just can't |`Beat~This`|
Your `punches stop` before they `touch me` like your |`Attack Stalls`|
Your style is `Straight Nuts` -- Like a `Scrotum` that |`Lacks Balls`| ~6
~SwithStyle~
Lil Dizzy kid am Crazy When I Spit.. Make You And Ya Fam Cry-In-Terror/
Just Cause You Gonna Lose.. Dont Kill Ya Self, Raps Based On Trail-And-Error/
This Kidz Perverted.. He 'Beats Off' So Much he Had To Get Synthetic 'Wrist' Asserted/
Keep Talkin And You Gon' Find Ya Lipz And Nose Converted/
Im sikk and there's no cure, doctors prescribin a reverend/
Cuz Im a beast, you get Ate(Eight) like I ran out of Sevens/
Bas-terd-ly,you petifiles deal soft-wear to 3rd world virgens count It up to equal per-version/
Da Rap Surgen, "Stop Life" Like I Dam-Age(damage)u Fat Dizzy Bitch,You Could Put Yah Jokes On Fire N Not Match-wits/
Fast Fists, Like Ders Nitrous In My Wrists,More Punches In 1 of my Scripts den 16 of yo Spits/
enuuuff VOTESSSSSSSS
Ruthless gets my vote.. I thought the punches and shit were a bit more advanced, "Screw Twin Towers, I'm the `plane` crashing your `State Building` like your |`Empire~Been~Destructed`|".... that line was fuckin' dope... yo, dizzy had some a'ight shit too tho, not as many key "ILL" lines tho.. It seemed a little childish, ruthless had more political hits in his verse, and I like that....
Hum... pretty close battle actually... vote: Ruthless...
here's why it was close...
Dizzy:
opener terrible...
punches kinda hit...
wordplay... was there any..?
Ruthless...
opener... not bad...
punches... harder... closer... warmer...
wordplay... ok...
the style change lost the blow out... and that last line in the first part made ABSOLUTELY no sence... his style is straight nuts like if he lacks balls..?
anyway... you both could have had alot more impact with less lines... too much filler... to little hard punches...
by the way... since I'm gonna be battlin you both... it can't be a hate vote either way... take it if you wish... or don't... matters to me neither way...
Avalon...
i dunno whats the rest of you are thinking....ruthless had 0 punches they felt like a kiss from a mother
and his structure was pure shit
vote=dizzy
these both were pretty good, my man ruthless had sum nice punches and shit, and my man dizzy had summ too, alhough his shit wus long as hell, i wusn't bored one bit, i wus feeln his shit.
Ruthless shit wus kinda confusin
So ima go wit dizzy
I don't like tha switch style shit... get's me thinkin, why tha fuck you doin' it? there are styles in emcee'in, but text is differant. Tha pretty shit and makin' it look like a fuckin' orchestra...?
no hate though playah...
Dizzy had some soft punches.. Better flow, little wordplay, better structure, and little multies...
ruthless had some soft punches... bad flow, little wordplay, ok structure, and more/better multies
Dizzy edged it... He got my vote..
ruthless got my vote
both had some tight shit there but i think ruthless had the upper hand in wordplay and punches but i liked dizzy's originality
Poll Vote= Ruthless
Dizzy used some off tha hook shit but i didn't like your style man
Ruthless your style wasn't 100% either but you had better flow
In all truth... Ruthless won this fair... But good verse Dizzy.
Ruthless... You just gotta tone your symbol usage down... That is
so gay. And the fillers were useless except to help your rhyme.
Just giving a good MC good advice. You wouldn't want somebody
better punching the shit outta you line for line making your fillers
look like trash... would you?