The street cleaner

I do my shit like this son,...

Caught'em by the throat, straight brick walled'em
Type B blood i seen't....as i "sawed'em"
Just some more trash bodied in my back yard
Burnt to powder with gats cuz he tryed to act hard
Took a quick shower, i did it wit my shirt off
Blood splattered like a busted pen when the perp coughed
I'm the street problem solver, movin wit revolvers
Yo, point blank......If u the problem i solve ya
A pheens short wit the cream? he gets one warnin'
Then by sun up.... its time for the "mournin"
I ain't no hoe, so i don't "fuck around"
Jus cuz i like the circus, don't think i won't buck a clown
Killin ain't shit, if i have, i have to
Gotta a grand on yo head, better bet i'ma blast u
Writin songs is a side business, but yo, a sly witness...
Gets more or less, on sight prolly bout five clip hits
When i'm cruise'in on the driveby, wit the guns cocked
Put your kids inside like lead in a clip, or get sum shot
Hit me up, i handle everthing nigga...except beef
Cuz i ain't the mop to wipe it up when the techs leak
My technique, texas chainsaw, or simple injection
Of lead capsules that burn holes, but u gotta earn those
Pimple infections? naw i'm talkin bout "shit" that "worms" know
Cripple ya essence, when i light the match an the let skin burn slow
A rippled reflection, as u stare in the lake before i drown you
Hope'in for a scream underwater, dun i love that sound too


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dam dawg you aint get no feed on this shit. The human spot tryna fuck up yo rep. nobody wanna see wack shit ya ming. keep elevating

^^^Rep? this site is like the least site i use out of 3, all my "rep" is on wutang's website wu-corp. Over there i'm Mister big, i run that site on the real. I jus use this one for a lil feedback.

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this was gutter as shit baby
for a verse on gun play you worded and arranged the shit good
good visuals and vocab too

keep elevating man

thanx, it took me bout 30 min. to write so i don't want this thread to jus fade off after no feed back, good shot though

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damn u dumb you'll kill somebody 4 a grand..............pfff the least niggaz do is 30 g's a body and cleanup after that....but neway this was ight sum lines were played but some of it was meh everything wasn't boring some of it was ight but u could've used better wordplay and shit N'' ur structure could've been better u had a couple of potential punches but the wording fucked it up no hate.....................

hit up what a waste link's in sig

Killin ain't shit, if i have, i have to
Gotta a grand on yo head, better bet i'ma blast u

I guess u talkin bout that line, that's some bounty hunter shit, that line atleast, the character wouldn't do a job for a grand ya mean.

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