Murder. Cyanidal & SLick ProgrezZ

Italics - Slick Progrezz (Murderer)
Bold - Cyanidal. (Victims family)

Murder.

Razorblades circulate in the ways of my brain
They cause pain cutting up thoughts and veins
Blood clogs my pores, state of mind:.....of cause insane
Closed doors restrain my sanity to create
Haters in my house and enemies at the gate
Too late another gay slayed, set the record straight
I hate hate but it gets me brave, it has me slaved
The ice inside my chest lessens pace,

as the sun sets a mother wails her blues to the world
"she was supposed to be back at 7 it's 10 now"
as tears scatter her nightgown, her face as pale as pearl
her husband slumps in to comfort her, uninspired upon her frown
......by the thought that his wifes theory may prove to be true
malicious images cackle their ghostly laughter around the room

"She'll be back Soon, Don't worry she shall be fine"
he tries to sooth her depression as she stutters to talk
"but what if she is'nt, ARE WE JUST GONNA SIT TIGHT!"
Her face regaining colour now, she stops and waits for the sirens call

somewhere in this corrupt city a life has been taken
rainy skies shown through windows, washing the unclean hands
of the villain who hast' spilt the blood of the innocent, forsaken
thee shalt' not boast this tale nor' let it travel to burden innocent glands

my breath impales my lungs right pocket.....the left it fails
the gat I might cock it, what’s left is nails
in the coffin, worms and snails on the rotten
my thoughtz in chains and I’m stoppin’
running the knife in flesh not for a second
I feel a slight regret, this kid might be dead
But I’m not thinkin bout droppin the knife in trash......a flash.....
I see a lightning crash before my eyes
Nothin worth livin...y’all might as well ignore my life....


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slept on as always....tzzz

this is a pretty cool piece actually, kinda sad but good. The two styles don't quite mesh to me, idk, but both of you had good vocabulary and structure. The flow was on point the entire time and the piece kept my attention. I liked the different rhyme schemes too. Good job on this one

thx for the feed...much appreciated

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This was a dope piece, yo. Im sorry, for not hitting it up sooner. Lately, I been up to alot. This had incredible vocab. And the structure, unbelievable. The flow was definitely on point here. Keep dropping the hotness... RTD...

thx for the feed yo....stay up watch the ProgrezZ

wake up u stupid ignorant fagz