niggaz be fakeing these days

niggaz be fakeing these days
wit the chopper they think
they going sneak up on me
they think they going to rob
me but i ant no bitch ill bet u
ill stop u they think they going
get me like a high fade top thoe
this aint da 90s nigga we in da 07
new year new bitches that mean
new gear i aint a bully but i
bet ill take your lunch money
dogfam esc money keep comeing
i aint shareing cause im russain
eyez tender cause i spent half on
dat green shit yeah dat green shit
that became a conflict cause i spent
the other half on my outfit and some
other shit diffrent day sme shit i aint
playin wit these niggaz on da corner
tryin to get the chopper quick i guess
the niggaz fakein cause the chopper
dident piss and off some real shit the
chopper was full of shit

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H.R. paperstacks {Topical}
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dope as i hell i feel u on dat metaphor shit son u sound like da typa dude to fight wit someone but iz coo def. one of da best OM i EVA seen

thanks



A Third Times A Charm, By Forum
A Topical About Text, Feat Baron P. Mortus

Lol wire quit fucking with this kid, what hey meant to say was that this shit was wack and shouldn't be in OM, but I will give you credit for posting it here, because that show your atleast confident in your work and thats always good to se in a writter, but your whole piece lacks in all of the aspects of dropping a topical please refer to the place I sent you in your last OM.

Its alright it could use work in some places..
try to be more diverse in ya lryics
its a work in progress u'll be good

Plese leave Quality feed on thhis link fam

i aint gonna sugar coat this like these people and try not to upset ya..this shit was weak...no rhyme scheme at all..and thats bad....no multis no nothing...just you talkin basicly...weak...you should elevate on everything......and if your gonna drop a piece....for gods sake if nothing else it has to rhyme..this shit didnt rhyme at all....everything was elementary about this and you need extreme elevation...keep tryin..~1~